Fix phrasing for publishing WD.
authorTakeshi Yoshino <tyoshino@google.com>
Wed, 22 Oct 2014 21:31:10 +0900
changeset 169 891635210233
parent 168 b5754fd002d3
child 170 1aa90f077452
Fix phrasing for publishing WD.
Overview.htm
publish/wd-streams-api-20141023.html
--- a/Overview.htm	Tue Oct 21 10:31:19 2014 -0400
+++ b/Overview.htm	Wed Oct 22 21:31:10 2014 +0900
@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
 
 	<section id="abstract">
 		<p>
-			<a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> provides an API for representing and handling a stream of data in web applications.
-			This specification is intended to extend the spec to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
+			The <a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> spec provides an API for representing and handling a stream of data in JavaScript.
+			This W3C spec is intended to extend the WHATWG spec to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
 		</p>
 	</section>
 
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
 
 		<p>
 			Web applications should have the ability to acquire, manipulate, and pass data in a wide variety of forms, including as a sequence of data made available over time.
-			This <a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> specification defines the basic representation for streams of data, and programmatic ways to read and write streams of data and errors raised on those operations.
+			The <a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> specification defines the basic representation for streams of data, and programmatic ways to read and write streams of data and errors raised on those operations.
                         This W3C spec had been defining a Streams API, but has been merged into the effort at WHATWG.
                         Feedback made for the W3C spec has been incorporated into the WHATWG Streams API specification.
                         Currently, the goal of this spec is for discussing and defining extensions to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
@@ -142,6 +142,10 @@
 		</p>
 
                 <p>
+                  The WritableByteStream interface is extended version of WritableStream which has functionality for high performance binary data handling.
+                </p>
+
+                <p>
                   The ReadableByteStream interface is extended version of ReadableStream which has functionality for high performance binary data handling.
                   As well as Blob, it might be worth providing a way to get a URL from which we can load data stored in a ReadableByteStream.
                 </p>
--- a/publish/wd-streams-api-20141023.html	Tue Oct 21 10:31:19 2014 -0400
+++ b/publish/wd-streams-api-20141023.html	Wed Oct 22 21:31:10 2014 +0900
@@ -277,8 +277,8 @@
 
 	<section id="abstract" class="introductory" property="dcterms:abstract" datatype="" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#abstract" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h2 role="heading" id="h2_abstract">Abstract</h2>
 		<p>
-			<a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> provides an API for representing and handling a stream of data in web applications.
-			This specification is intended to extend the spec to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
+			<a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> spec provides an API for representing and handling a stream of data in JavaScript.
+			This W3C spec is intended to extend the WHATWG spec to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
 		</p>
 	</section><section id="sotd" class="introductory" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#sotd" rel="bibo:Chapter"><h2 role="heading" id="h2_sotd">Status of This Document</h2>
   
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@
 
 		<p>
 			Web applications should have the ability to acquire, manipulate, and pass data in a wide variety of forms, including as a sequence of data made available over time.
-			This <a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> specification defines the basic representation for streams of data, and programmatic ways to read and write streams of data and errors raised on those operations.
+			The <a href="https://github.com/whatwg/streams">WHATWG Streams API</a> specification defines the basic representation for streams of data, and programmatic ways to read and write streams of data and errors raised on those operations.
                         This <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> spec had been defining a Streams API, but has been merged into the effort at WHATWG.
                         Feedback made for the <abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr> spec has been incorporated into the WHATWG Streams API specification.
                         Currently, the goal of this spec is for discussing and defining extensions to meet requirements specific to the browser environment.
@@ -382,6 +382,10 @@
 		</p>
 
                 <p>
+                  The WritableByteStream interface is extended version of WritableStream which has functionality for high performance binary data handling.
+                </p>
+
+                <p>
                   The ReadableByteStream interface is extended version of ReadableStream which has functionality for high performance binary data handling.
                   As well as Blob, it might be worth providing a way to get a URL from which we can load data stored in a ReadableByteStream.
                 </p>