--- a/rdf-layers/index.html	Wed May 02 09:23:47 2012 -0400
+++ b/rdf-layers/index.html	Wed May 02 09:27:28 2012 -0400
@@ -259,11 +259,11 @@
     <a>dataset</a>.</p>
 
     <p>In practice, the term is used more loosely to refer to the
-    graph part of those pairs or to the slot part of the pairs
-    in a graph store.  <a
+    graph part of those pairs or to the slot part of the pairs in a
+    <a>graph store</a>.  The text of <a
     href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-sparql11-update-20120105/">SPARQL
-    1.1 Update</a> does this, for example, with phrases like, "This
-    example copies triples from one named graph to another named
+    1.1 Update</a> does this, for example, as seen in phrases like,
+    "This example copies triples from one named graph to another named
     graph".</p>
 
     <p>We continue that practice, using "named graph" to refer