--- a/rdf-concepts/index.html Wed Dec 11 19:14:04 2013 +0100
+++ b/rdf-concepts/index.html Wed Dec 11 19:30:42 2013 +0100
@@ -365,21 +365,19 @@
<ul>
<li>An <a title="IRI">IRI</a>, once minted, should never
- change its intended <a>referent</a>. (See
- <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/#URI-persistence">URI
- persistence</a> [[WEBARCH]].)</li>
+ change its intended <a>referent</a>. (See
+ <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/webarch/#URI-persistence">URI persistence</a>
+ [[WEBARCH]].)</li>
<li><a title="literal">Literals</a>, by design, are constants and
- never change their <a title="literal value">value</a>.</li>
- <li>Some <a title="property">properties</a> may change over time.
- A relationship that holds between two <a title="resource">resources</a>
- at one time may not hold at another time.</li>
- <li><a title="RDF source">RDF sources</a> may change their state
- over time.
- That is, they may provide different <a title="RDF graph">RDF graphs</a>
- at different times.</li>
+ never change their <a title="literal value">value</a>.</li>
+ <li>A relationship that holds between two <a title="resource">resources</a>
+ at one time may not hold at another time.</li>
+ <li><a title="RDF source">RDF sources</a> may change their state over time.
+ That is, they may provide different <a title="RDF graph">RDF graphs</a>
+ at different times.</li>
<li>Some <a title="RDF source">RDF sources</a> may, however, be immutable
- snapshots of another RDF source, archiving its state at some
- point in time.</li>
+ snapshots of another RDF source, archiving its state at some
+ point in time.</li>
</ul>
</section>
@@ -1398,6 +1396,8 @@
<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/CR-rdf11-concepts-20131105/">5 November 2013 Candidate Recommendation (CR)</a>.</p>
<ul>
+ <li>2013-12-12: Editorial changes in response to a review by
+ <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-wg/2013Dec/0084.html">Thomas Baker</a></li>
<li>2013-12-12: Replace <a href="#changes" class="sectionRef"></a> with a reference to [[RDF11-NEW]]</li>
<li>2013-12-04: Editorial changes to <a href="#section-Graph-Literal" class="sectionRef"></a> as <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-wg/2013Nov/0078.html">discussed on the mailing list</a></li>
<li>2013-11-06: Editorial changes in response to a <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-rdf-wg/2013Nov/0027.html">review by Guus Schreiber</a></li>