Editoral changes from Souri
authorGavin Carothers <gavin@carothers.name>
Wed, 18 Sep 2013 08:00:30 -0700
changeset 1107 4a7ad904b5e5
parent 1106 c65f4e2234a7
child 1108 8e160eede8cf
Editoral changes from Souri

Ref: http://www.w3.org/mid/[email protected]
drafts/trig/Overview.html
trig/index.html
--- a/drafts/trig/Overview.html	Wed Sep 18 07:55:11 2013 -0700
+++ b/drafts/trig/Overview.html	Wed Sep 18 08:00:30 2013 -0700
@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@
 
 		<section id="sec-intro" typeof="bibo:Chapter" resource="#sec-intro" rel="bibo:chapter">
 			<!--OddPage--><h2 aria-level="1" role="heading" id="h2_sec-intro"><span class="secno">1. </span>Introduction</h2>
-			<p>This document defines TriG a concrete syntax for <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> as defined in the
+			<p>This document defines TriG, a concrete syntax for <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> as defined in the
 			<abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> Concepts and Abstract Syntax
 			([<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-rdf11-concepts">rdf11-concepts</a></cite>]). TriG is an extension of 
 			<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/turtle/">Turtle</a> ([<cite><a class="bibref" href="#bib-turtle">turtle</a></cite>]), extended 
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@
 
 			</p><p>Graph statements are a pair of an IRI or blank node label and a group of triple statements
 			surrounded by <code>{}</code>. The IRI or blank node label of the graph statement may be used in another graph statement which implies taking the union of the tripes generated
-			by each graph statement. A IRI or blank node label used as a graph label may also reoccur as part of any triple statement. 
+			by each graph statement. An IRI or blank node label used as a graph label may also reoccur as part of any triple statement. 
 			Optionally a graph statement may not not be labeled with an IRI. Such a 
 			graph statement corresponds to the Default Graph of an <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> Dataset.</p>
 			<p>
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@
 				
 				<p>A graph statement pairs an IRI or blank node with a <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> graph. The triple statements that make up the graph are enclosed in <code>{}</code>.</p>
 
-				<p>In a TriG document a graph IRI or blank node <em class="rfc2119" title="MAY">MAY</em> be used to label more then one graph. The graph label of a graph statement may be omitted. In this case the graph is considered the default graph of the <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> Dataset.</p>
+				<p>In a TriG document a graph IRI or blank node may be used as label for more than one graph statements. The graph label of a graph statement may be omitted. In this case the graph is considered the default graph of the <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> Dataset.</p>
 
 				<p>A <abbr title="Resource Description Framework">RDF</abbr> Dataset might contain only a single graph.</p>
 				<div class="example"><div class="example-title"><span>Example 1</span></div><pre class="example"><span># This document encodes one graph.
--- a/trig/index.html	Wed Sep 18 07:55:11 2013 -0700
+++ b/trig/index.html	Wed Sep 18 08:00:30 2013 -0700
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@
 
 		<section id="sec-intro">
 			<h2>Introduction</h2>
-			<p>This document defines TriG a concrete syntax for RDF as defined in the
+			<p>This document defines TriG, a concrete syntax for RDF as defined in the
 			RDF Concepts and Abstract Syntax
 			([[!rdf11-concepts]]). TriG is an extension of 
 			<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/turtle/">Turtle</a> ([[!turtle]]), extended 
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
 
 			<p>Graph statements are a pair of an IRI or blank node label and a group of triple statements
 			surrounded by <code>{}</code>. The IRI or blank node label of the graph statement may be used in another graph statement which implies taking the union of the tripes generated
-			by each graph statement. A IRI or blank node label used as a graph label may also reoccur as part of any triple statement. 
+			by each graph statement. An IRI or blank node label used as a graph label may also reoccur as part of any triple statement. 
 			Optionally a graph statement may not not be labeled with an IRI. Such a 
 			graph statement corresponds to the Default Graph of an RDF Dataset.</p>
 			<p>
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@
 				
 				<p>A graph statement pairs an IRI or blank node with a RDF graph. The triple statements that make up the graph are enclosed in <code>{}</code>.</p>
 
-				<p>In a TriG document a graph IRI or blank node MAY be used to label more then one graph. The graph label of a graph statement may be omitted. In this case the graph is considered the default graph of the RDF Dataset.</p>
+				<p>In a TriG document a graph IRI or blank node may be used as label for more than one graph statements. The graph label of a graph statement may be omitted. In this case the graph is considered the default graph of the RDF Dataset.</p>
 
 				<p>A RDF Dataset might contain only a single graph.</p>
 				<pre class="example">