--- a/rdf-primer/index.html	Wed Jan 29 01:53:54 2014 +0100
+++ b/rdf-primer/index.html	Wed Jan 29 02:13:28 2014 +0100
@@ -279,8 +279,9 @@
     one and the object of two triples. This ability to have the same resource be 
     in the subject position of one triple and the object position of another 
     makes it possible to find connections between triples, which is an 
-    important part of RDF's power. 
-    Wem can therefore visualise triples as a connected
+    important part of RDF's power.</p> 
+
+    <p>We can visualize triples as a connected
     <strong>graph</strong>. Graphs consists 
     of nodes and arcs. The subjects and
     objects of the triples make up the nodes in the graph; the
@@ -457,7 +458,7 @@
 
       <p>Below is an example of an unnamed graph. It contains two triples that
       have the graph name <code>&lt;http://example.org/bob&gt;</code>
-      as subject. The triples associate publisher and license information with the
+      as subject. The triples associate publisher and license information with
       this graph IRI: </p>
 
       <pre>
@@ -669,7 +670,8 @@
  &lt;http://example.org/bob#me&gt; &lt;http://xmlns.com/foaf/0.1/knows&gt; &lt;http://example.org/alice#me&gt; .
       </pre>
 
-      <p>In Turtle full IRIs are enclosed in angle brackets; the period signals the
+      <p>In Turtle full IRIs are enclosed in angle brackets (<code>&lt;&gt;</code>);
+      the period signals the
       end of the triple. This example represents concrete syntax for
       the second triple in <a href="#example-1">Example 1</a>.</p> 
 
@@ -705,8 +707,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>Lines 1-6 contain a number of directives which provide shorthands for
-writing down IRIs. In Turtle IRIs are enclosed in angle brackets
-(<code>&lt;&gt;</code>). Relative IRIs (such as <code>bob#me</code> on line 8) are 
+writing down IRIs. Relative IRIs (such as <code>bob#me</code> on line 8) are 
 resolved agains a base IRI, specified here in line 1.
 Lines 2-6 define IRI prefixes (such as <code>foaf:</code>), which  can
 be use for prefixed names (such as <code>foaf:Person</code>) instead of full IRIs.
@@ -775,8 +776,9 @@
   _:x a &lt;http://dbpedia.org/resource/Cypress&gt; .
 </pre>
 
-<p>The term <code>_:x</code> is a blank node. It represents an unnamed resource depicted in 
-> the Mona Lisa painting that is an instance of the <code>Cypress</code> class. </p>
+<p>The term <code>_:x</code> is a blank node. It represents an
+unnamed resource depicted in 
+the Mona Lisa painting; the unnamed resource is an instance of the <code>Cypress</code> class. </p>
 
 <p>The above is by no means a full account of the Turtle syntax. For
 more details about the syntax of Turtle please consult the Turtle specification [[TURTLE]].</p>