--- a/ontology/diagram-history/2012-07-09-david/expanded-terms-example-bundlePost.graffle	Sun Nov 25 17:48:32 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/diagram-history/2012-07-09-david/expanded-terms-example-bundlePost.graffle	Sun Nov 25 17:54:07 2012 -0500
@@ -4401,7 +4401,7 @@
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+		<string>{{604, -259}, {1192, 1137}}</string>
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--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Sun Nov 25 17:48:32 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Sun Nov 25 17:54:07 2012 -0500
@@ -125,8 +125,8 @@
                     alt="PROV-O Starting Point terms"/>
 
                <div class="figcaption"><a href="#expanded-example-illustration-1">Figure 4</a>. 
-                  An illustration of the PROV-O assertions in <a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1">Example 3</a>,<br/>
-                  where Derek published two versions of a blog for the National Newspaper, Inc.<br/>
+                  An illustration of the PROV-O assertions in <a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1">Example 3</a>, where Derek published<br/>
+                  two versions of a blog for the National Newspaper, Inc.<br/>
                   The diagrams in this document depict Entities as yellow ovals, Activities as blue rectangles, and Agents as orange pentagons.<br/>
                   The responsibility properties are shown in pink.
                </div>