--- a/primer/Primer.html	Fri Jul 06 16:55:19 2012 +0100
+++ b/primer/Primer.html	Fri Jul 06 17:21:19 2012 +0100
@@ -607,6 +607,11 @@
     which are first composing the data by region (<code>ex:compose</code>) and then generating the
     chart graphic (<code>ex:illustrate</code>).
    </p>
+   <!--p>
+    Further, the provenance describes the activities involved in generating chart from the data,
+    first composing the data by region (<code>ex:compose</code>) and then generating the
+    chart graphic (<code>ex:illustrate</code>).
+   </p -->
    <div class="turtle example">
     <div class="exampleheader">
      <span class="exampleheader"><b>Turtle Example</b></span></div>
@@ -1193,6 +1198,10 @@
     </pre>
    </div>
    <p>
+    Note that above we could have also
+    stated that <code>ex:articleV2</code> was a revision of <code>ex:articleV1</code>,
+    as we did between <code>ex:chart2</code> and <code>ex:chart1</code>,
+    which would describe more concretely how the alternate entities are related.
     Specialization and alternate relations connect entities, and so are visualized
     as links between them.
    </p>