--- a/links/diff.html Mon Apr 08 22:11:00 2013 +0100
+++ b/links/diff.html Mon Apr 08 22:13:53 2013 +0100
@@ -1433,7 +1433,8 @@
</span> Changed the status of this document <span class="delete">section: added new documents to the PROV Family of Document, and removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span><span class="insert">section.</span>
</li><li> Changed all URLs to PROV documents.
</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated XML schema definition.</span><span class="insert"> Minor editorial changes in section 1 and section 2.</span>
-</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated affiliations.</span><span class="insert"> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'
+</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated affiliations.</span><span class="insert"> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added namespace and convention sections.</span><span class="insert">Editorial pass following reviews.
</span></li></ul>
</section>
@@ -1441,16 +1442,16 @@
<h3><span class="secno"><span class="insert">A.2 </span></span><span class="insert">Change Log Since First Public Working Draft</span></h3>
<ul>
<li><span class="insert"> Checked all internal fragments resolved.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Added namespace</span><span class="insert">Changed the status of this document section: added new documents to the PROV Family of Document,</span> and <span class="delete">convention sections.</span><span class="insert">removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Updated grammar</span><span class="insert">Changed all URLs</span> to<span class="delete"> make prov prefix explicit.</span><span class="insert"> PROV documents.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Added new paragraph in introduction.</span><span class="insert">Updated XML schema definition.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.</span><span class="insert">Updated affiliations.</span>
-</li><li> Added <span class="delete">comment on TRIG notation.</span><span class="insert">namespace and convention sections.</span>
-</li><li> Updated <span class="insert">grammar to make prov prefix explicit.
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Updated grammar</span><span class="insert">Changed the status of this document section: added new documents</span> to <span class="delete">make prov prefix explicit.</span><span class="insert">the PROV Family of Document, and removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added new paragraph in introduction.</span><span class="insert">Changed all URLs to PROV documents.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.</span><span class="insert">Updated XML schema definition.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added comment on TRIG notation.</span><span class="insert">Updated affiliations.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="insert">Added namespace and convention sections.
+</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Updated grammar to make prov prefix explicit.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Added new paragraph in introduction.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Added comment on TRIG notation.
-</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Updated </span>xml example with new syntax of bundles.
+</span></li><li> Updated xml example with new syntax of bundles.
</li></ul>
</section>
</section>
@@ -1459,9 +1460,17 @@
<h2><span class="secno">B. </span>Acknowledgements</h2>
<p>
+
This document has been produced by the PROV Working Group, and its contents reflect extensive discussion within the Working Group as a whole. The editors extend special thanks to Ivan Herman (<abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr>/<abbr title="European Research Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</abbr>).
</p>
+<p><span class="insert">Thanks to
+Khalid Belhajjame,
+Tom De Nies,
+Graham Klyne, and
+Simon Miles for their reviews of the document.</span></p>
+
+
<p>
Members of the PROV Working Group at the time of publication of this document were:
--- a/links/prov-links.html Mon Apr 08 22:11:00 2013 +0100
+++ b/links/prov-links.html Mon Apr 08 22:13:53 2013 +0100
@@ -1268,6 +1268,7 @@
<li> Changed all URLs to PROV documents.
<li> Minor editorial changes in section 1 and section 2.
<li> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'
+<li> Editorial pass following reviews.
</ul>
</section>
@@ -1292,10 +1293,16 @@
<section class="appendix">
<h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
<p>
-
This document has been produced by the PROV Working Group, and its contents reflect extensive discussion within the Working Group as a whole. The editors extend special thanks to Ivan Herman (W3C/ERCIM).
</p>
+<p>Thanks to
+Khalid Belhajjame,
+Tom De Nies,
+Graham Klyne, and
+Simon Miles for their reviews of the document.</p>
+
+
<p>
Members of the PROV Working Group at the time of publication of this document were:
--- a/links/releases/NOTE-prov-links-20130430/Overview.html Mon Apr 08 22:11:00 2013 +0100
+++ b/links/releases/NOTE-prov-links-20130430/Overview.html Mon Apr 08 22:13:53 2013 +0100
@@ -1394,6 +1394,7 @@
</li><li> Changed all URLs to PROV documents.
</li><li> Minor editorial changes in section 1 and section 2.
</li><li> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'
+</li><li> Editorial pass following reviews.
</li></ul>
</section>
@@ -1418,10 +1419,16 @@
<section class="appendix" id="acknowledgements">
<!--OddPage--><h2><span class="secno">B. </span>Acknowledgements</h2>
<p>
-
This document has been produced by the PROV Working Group, and its contents reflect extensive discussion within the Working Group as a whole. The editors extend special thanks to Ivan Herman (<abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr>/<abbr title="European Research Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</abbr>).
</p>
+<p>Thanks to
+Khalid Belhajjame,
+Tom De Nies,
+Graham Klyne, and
+Simon Miles for their reviews of the document.</p>
+
+
<p>
Members of the PROV Working Group at the time of publication of this document were:
--- a/links/releases/NOTE-prov-links-20130430/diff.html Mon Apr 08 22:11:00 2013 +0100
+++ b/links/releases/NOTE-prov-links-20130430/diff.html Mon Apr 08 22:13:53 2013 +0100
@@ -1433,7 +1433,8 @@
</span> Changed the status of this document <span class="delete">section: added new documents to the PROV Family of Document, and removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span><span class="insert">section.</span>
</li><li> Changed all URLs to PROV documents.
</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated XML schema definition.</span><span class="insert"> Minor editorial changes in section 1 and section 2.</span>
-</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated affiliations.</span><span class="insert"> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'
+</li><li><span class="delete"> Updated affiliations.</span><span class="insert"> In both prov-n and prov-xml examples, used role 'ex:controler'</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added namespace and convention sections.</span><span class="insert">Editorial pass following reviews.
</span></li></ul>
</section>
@@ -1441,16 +1442,16 @@
<h3><span class="secno"><span class="insert">A.2 </span></span><span class="insert">Change Log Since First Public Working Draft</span></h3>
<ul>
<li><span class="insert"> Checked all internal fragments resolved.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Added namespace</span><span class="insert">Changed the status of this document section: added new documents to the PROV Family of Document,</span> and <span class="delete">convention sections.</span><span class="insert">removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Updated grammar</span><span class="insert">Changed all URLs</span> to<span class="delete"> make prov prefix explicit.</span><span class="insert"> PROV documents.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Added new paragraph in introduction.</span><span class="insert">Updated XML schema definition.</span>
-</li><li> <span class="delete">Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.</span><span class="insert">Updated affiliations.</span>
-</li><li> Added <span class="delete">comment on TRIG notation.</span><span class="insert">namespace and convention sections.</span>
-</li><li> Updated <span class="insert">grammar to make prov prefix explicit.
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Updated grammar</span><span class="insert">Changed the status of this document section: added new documents</span> to <span class="delete">make prov prefix explicit.</span><span class="insert">the PROV Family of Document, and removed the how to read section, referring instead to PROV-OVERVIEW.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added new paragraph in introduction.</span><span class="insert">Changed all URLs to PROV documents.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.</span><span class="insert">Updated XML schema definition.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="delete">Added comment on TRIG notation.</span><span class="insert">Updated affiliations.</span>
+</li><li> <span class="insert">Added namespace and convention sections.
+</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Updated grammar to make prov prefix explicit.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Added new paragraph in introduction.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Moved "inferred statements" into named graph tool:analysis01 in Example 3.
</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Added comment on TRIG notation.
-</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Updated </span>xml example with new syntax of bundles.
+</span></li><li> Updated xml example with new syntax of bundles.
</li></ul>
</section>
</section>
@@ -1459,9 +1460,17 @@
<h2><span class="secno">B. </span>Acknowledgements</h2>
<p>
+
This document has been produced by the PROV Working Group, and its contents reflect extensive discussion within the Working Group as a whole. The editors extend special thanks to Ivan Herman (<abbr title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</abbr>/<abbr title="European Research Consortium for Informatics and Mathematics">ERCIM</abbr>).
</p>
+<p><span class="insert">Thanks to
+Khalid Belhajjame,
+Tom De Nies,
+Graham Klyne, and
+Simon Miles for their reviews of the document.</span></p>
+
+
<p>
Members of the PROV Working Group at the time of publication of this document were: