--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-qualified-terms.inc.html	Tue Jul 10 16:17:00 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-qualified-terms.inc.html	Tue Jul 10 16:18:45 2012 -0400
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
       This new instance, in turn, can be annotated with additional descriptions about the influence relationship between the two resources cited. 
       The following two tables list the relations that can be qualified using the Qualification Pattern, along with the properties used to qualify them. 
 
-      For example, the second row of the first table indicates that when we want to elaborate how an <span class="repeated">prov:Activity</span>
-      <span class="repeated">prov:used</span> a particular <span class="repeated">prov:Entity</span>, we create an instance of <span class="repeated">prov:Usage</span>.
+      For example, the second row of the first table indicates that to elaborate how an <span class="repeated">prov:Activity</span>
+      <span class="repeated">prov:used</span> a particular <span class="repeated">prov:Entity</span>, one creates an instance of <span class="repeated">prov:Usage</span>.
       While the <span class="repeated">prov:Usage</span> cites the influencing entity with the <span class="repeated">prov:entity</span> property,
       the influenced <span class="repeated">prov:Activity</span> cites the <span class="repeated">prov:Usage</span> with the property <span class="repeated">prov:qualifiedUsage</span>.