--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html Wed Jul 25 03:12:04 2012 +0200
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html Thu Jul 26 02:48:43 2012 +0200
@@ -102,15 +102,15 @@
<p>
Agent <code>ex:derek</code>, acting again on behalf of the <code>:national_newspaper_inc</code> organization,
- publishes a post about his recent changes to the aggregated file (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>) using the tool <code>ex:postEditor</code>. Since he is the one who started and ended the publishing activity (<code>ex:publicationActivity1123</code>), that information
- is recorded as well. The post produced by <code>ex:derek</code> (<code>ex:post9821v1</code>) includes a permanent link where the content of the latest version is shown
- (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also adds additional metadata of the post, like the title.
+ published a post about his recent changes to the aggregated file (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>) using the tool <code>ex:postEditor</code>. Since he was the one who started and ended the publishing activity (<code>ex:publicationActivity1123</code>), that information
+ was recorded as well. The post produced by <code>ex:derek</code> (<code>ex:post9821v1</code>) included a permanent link where the content of the latest version is shown
+ (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also added additional metadata of the post, like the title.
</p>
<p>
- However, shortly after having published the post, Derek detects a typo. He does not want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just creates a new version and
- summarizes the changes in a revision of the original post (<code>ex:post9821v2</code>). This revision is also an alternate of the original post,
- since they are both forms of the long-standing blog.
- Thus, the permalink to the latest version (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) remains the same in the new revision, but a different URL is given for its snapshot (<code>ex:postContent1</code>).
+ However, shortly after having published the post, Derek detected a typo. He didn't not want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just created a new version and
+ summarized the changes in a revision of the original post (<code>ex:post9821v2</code>). This revision was also an alternate of the original post,
+ since they were both forms of the long-standing blog.
+ Thus, the permalink to the latest version (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) remained the same in the new revision, but a different URL was given for its snapshot (<code>ex:postContent1</code>).
</p>
<div id="expanded-example-illustration-1" style="text-align: center;" class="figure">
@@ -120,16 +120,16 @@
alt="PROV-O Starting Point terms"/>
<div class="figcaption"><a href="#expanded-example-illustration-1">Figure 4</a>.
- An illustration of the PROV-O assertions in <a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1">Example 3</a>, where Derek publishes a two versions of a blog for the National Newspaper, Inc.
+ An illustration of the PROV-O assertions in <a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1">Example 3</a>, where Derek published two versions of a blog for the National Newspaper, Inc.
</div>
</div>
<div id="narrative-example-expanded-1-a" about="#narrative-example-expanded-1-a" typeof="prov:Entity" class="exampleOuter" xmlns:prov="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">
- <p>Shortly after Derek's post publication, Monica adapts the text for a wider audience in a new post (<code>ex:post9822</code>). This version is a specialization of the original post,
- and an alternate of the version modified by Derek. Since the provenance produced by the activities of Derek and Monica correspond to different user views, the system
- automatically publish it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundle</a>s (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>).
+ <p>Shortly after Derek's post publication, Monica adapted the text for a wider audience in a new post (<code>ex:post9822</code>). This version was a specialization of the original post,
+ and an alternate of the version modified by Derek. Since the provenance produced by the activities of Derek and Monica corresponded to different user views, the system
+ automatically published it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundle</a>s (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>).
</p>
<p>
<a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1-a"/>Example 3</a>:
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
</div>
<div id="narrative-example-expanded-2" about="#narrative-example-expanded-2" typeof="prov:Entity" class="exampleOuter" xmlns:prov="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">
- <p>Some time passes by, and John writes his own conclusions quoting the previous two posts:
+ <p>After some time, John wrote his own conclusions quoting the previous two posts:
</p>
<p>
<a href="#narrative-example-expanded-2"/>Example 4</a>:
@@ -149,11 +149,11 @@
</div>
<p>
- Agent <code>ex:John</code> also names the URI of the original source (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>). All the provenance statements related to his post
+ Agent <code>ex:John</code> also named the URI of the original source (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>). All the provenance statements related to his post
are grouped in a new <span class="repeated">prov:Bundle</span> (<code>ex:bundlePost2</code>).
- Unfortunately, there is a problem in the servers where <code>:post19201</code> is being stored, and all the data related to the post is lost. Thus, the system
- invalidates the entity automatically and notifies John about the error.
+ Unfortunately, there was a problem in the servers where <code>:post19201</code> was being stored, and all the data related to the post was lost. Thus, the system
+ invalidated the entity automatically and notified John about the error.
</p>
<div id="narrative-example-expanded-3" about="#narrative-example-expanded-3" typeof="prov:Entity" class="exampleOuter" xmlns:prov="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">