--- a/primer/Primer.html	Sun Oct 09 14:33:24 2011 +0200
+++ b/primer/Primer.html	Sun Oct 09 15:27:58 2011 +0100
@@ -123,9 +123,7 @@
 
    <section>
     <h3>Provenance as data</h3>
-    <p>Describes a common pattern of production of Prov-DM data, e.g. the asserter being software
-     enacting the process that it is asserting about, to clarify who might be using the model
-     and in what context.</p>
+    <p>Explains the contexts in which the reader may see or create Prov-DM data.</p>
    </section>
   </section>
 
@@ -164,7 +162,7 @@
    <section>
     <h3>Accounts</h3>
 
-    <p>An intuitive overview of how to think about use and generation events in Prov-DM.</p>
+    <p>An intuitive overview of how to think about accounts in Prov-DM.</p>
    </section>
 
    <section>