--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Thu May 03 13:13:16 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Thu May 03 13:30:16 2012 -0400
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@
 		   (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also adds additional metadata of the post, like the title.
 		   </p>
 		   <p>
-		   However, inmediately after having published the post, Derek detects a typo. He doesnt' want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just creates a new version and 
+		   However, inmediately after having published the post, Derek detects a typo. He does not want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just creates a new version and 
 		   summarizes the changes in a revision of the original post(<code>ex:post9821v1</code>). This revision is also a specialization of the original post, since it is a refined version. 
-		   Thus, the location of the new revision has the same permalink, but a different url for its snapshot (<code>ex:postContent1</code>).
+         Thus, the permalink to the latest version (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) remains the same in the new revision, but a different URL is given for its snapshot (<code>ex:postContent1</code>).
 		   </p>
 		   <p>
 		   Shortly after Derek's post publication, ex:monica adapts the text for a wider audience in a new version (<code>ex:post9821v2</code>). This version is an specialization of the original post,