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authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Fri, 16 Nov 2012 11:54:02 +0000
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+  <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle"><a href="diff.html"><span class="insert">Changes</span></a><span class="insert"> since LC release</span></h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-16-november-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> <span class="delete">Working</span><span class="insert">Editor's</span> Draft <span class="delete">24 July</span><span class="insert">16 November</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html"><span class="insert">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</span></a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</span><span class="delete"> (</span><span class="delete">color-coded diffs</span><span class="delete">)</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</span></a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
 <dt><span class="delete">Contributors:</span><span class="insert">Authors:</span></dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
 <dd><span>Reza B'Far</span>, Oracle Corporation</dd>
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 instances of provenance for human consumption; this notation is used in examples in
 this document. </p>
 
+<p><span class="insert">The PROV Document Overview describes the overall state of PROV, and should be read before other PROV documents.</span></p>
+
     </div><div id="sotd" class="introductory section"><h2>Status of This Document</h2><p><em>This section describes the status of this document at the time of its publication. Other documents may supersede this document. A list of current <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> publications and the latest revision of this technical report can be found in the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> technical reports index</a> at http://www.w3.org/TR/.</em></p>
-<h4 id="last-call">Last Call</h4>
-<p>This is the fifth public release of the PROV-DM document. 
-This is a Last Call Working Draft. The design is not expected to change significantly, going forward, and now is the key time for external review.</p>
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-<p>This specification identifies one  <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi">feature at risk</a>: Mention (<a href="#term-mention">Section 5.5.3</a>) might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</p>
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-
-
-<h4 id="prov-family-of-specifications">PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
-This document is part of the PROV family of specifications, a set of specifications defining various aspects that are necessary to achieve the vision of inter-operable
-interchange of provenance information in heterogeneous environments such as the Web.  The specifications are:
+<span class="delete">Last Call</span><h4 id="prov-family-of-documents"><span class="insert">PROV Family of Documents</span></h4>
+This <span class="insert">document </span>is <span class="delete">the fifth public release of the PROV-DM document. 
+This is</span><span class="insert">part of the PROV family of documents,</span> a <span class="delete">Last Call Working Draft. The design is not expected to change significantly, going forward, and now is the key time for external review.</span>
+
+<span class="delete">This specification identifies one  </span><span class="delete">feature at risk</span><span class="delete">: Mention (</span><span class="delete">Section 5.5.3</span><span class="delete">) might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">PROV Family of Specifications</span><span class="delete">
+This document is part of the PROV family of specifications, a </span>set of <span class="delete">specifications</span><span class="insert">documents</span> defining various aspects that are necessary to achieve the vision of inter-operable
+interchange of provenance information in heterogeneous environments such as the Web.  <span class="delete">The specifications</span><span class="insert">These documents</span> are:
 <ul>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">PROV-DM</a>, the PROV data model for provenance (this document);</li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a>, a set of constraints applying to the PROV data model [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>];</li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">PROV-N</a>, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-N">PROV-N</a></cite>];</li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/">PROV-O</a>, the PROV ontology, an OWL2 ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-O">PROV-O</a></cite>];</li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">PROV-AQ</a>, the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-AQ">PROV-AQ</a></cite>]; </li>
-<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/">PROV-PRIMER</a>, a primer for the PROV data model [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-PRIMER">PROV-PRIMER</a></cite>].</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-overview/"><span class="insert">PROV-OVERVIEW</span></a><span class="insert"> (Note), an overview of the PROV family of documents [</span><cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-OVERVIEW"><span class="insert">PROV-OVERVIEW</span></a></cite><span class="insert">];</span></li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/"><span class="insert">PROV-PRIMER</span></a><span class="insert"> (Note), a primer for the PROV data model [</span><cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-PRIMER"><span class="insert">PROV-PRIMER</span></a></cite><span class="insert">];</span></li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/"><span class="insert">PROV-O</span></a><span class="insert"> (Recommendation), the PROV ontology, an OWL2 ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF [</span><cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-O"><span class="insert">PROV-O</span></a></cite><span class="insert">];</span></li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">PROV-DM</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert"> (Recommendation),</span> the PROV data model for provenance (this document);</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/"><span class="insert">PROV-N</span></a><span class="insert"> (Recommendation), a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption [</span><cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-N"><span class="insert">PROV-N</span></a></cite><span class="insert">];</span></li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert"> (Recommendation),</span> a set of constraints applying to the PROV data model [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>];</li>
+<li> <span class="delete">PROV-N</span><span class="delete">, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption [</span><span class="delete">PROV-N</span><span class="delete">];</span>
+ <span class="delete">PROV-O</span><span class="delete">, the PROV ontology, an OWL2 ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF [</span><span class="delete">PROV-O</span><span class="delete">];</span>
+ <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">PROV-AQ</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert"> (Note),</span> the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-AQ">PROV-AQ</a></cite>]; </li>
+<li> <span class="delete">PROV-PRIMER</span><span class="delete">, a primer</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-xml/"><span class="insert">PROV-XML</span></a><span class="insert"> (Note),  an XML schema</span> for the PROV data model [<cite><span class="delete">PROV-PRIMER</span><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-XML"><span class="insert">PROV-XML</span></a></cite>].</li>
+
+
 </ul>
-<h4 id="how-to-read-the-prov-family-of-specifications">How to read the PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
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 <li>The primer is the entry point to PROV offering an introduction to the provenance model.</li>
 <li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community should focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL2 ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. </li>
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 <p>This document was published by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/">Provenance Working Group</a> as <span class="delete">a Last Call Working</span><span class="insert">an Editor's</span> Draft.<span class="delete"> This document is intended to become a </span><span class="delete">W3C</span><span class="delete"> Recommendation.</span> If you wish to make comments regarding this document, please send them to <a href="mailto:[email protected]">[email protected]</a> (<a href="mailto:[email protected]?subject=subscribe">subscribe</a>, <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-prov-comments/">archives</a>).<span class="delete"> The Last Call period ends 18 September 2012.</span> All feedback is welcome.</p><p>Publication as <span class="delete">a Working</span><span class="insert">an Editor's</span> Draft does not imply endorsement by the <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Membership. This is a draft document and may be updated, replaced or obsoleted by other documents at any time. It is inappropriate to cite this document as other than work in progress.<span class="delete">This is a Last Call Working Draft and thus the Working Group has determined that this document has satisfied the relevant technical requirements and is sufficiently stable to advance through the Technical Recommendation process.</span></p><p>This document was produced by a group operating under the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/">5 February 2004 <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Patent Policy</a>. <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> maintains a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2004/01/pp-impl/46974/status" rel="disclosure">public list of any patent disclosures</a> made in connection with the deliverables of the group; that page also includes instructions for disclosing a patent. An individual who has actual knowledge of a patent which the individual believes contains <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#def-essential">Essential Claim(s)</a> must disclose the information in accordance with <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Patent-Policy-20040205/#sec-Disclosure">section 6 of the <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Patent Policy</a>.</p></div><div id="toc" class="section"><h2 class="introductory">Table of Contents</h2><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#introduction" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">1. </span>Introduction<br>
-</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#compliance-with-this-document" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="insert">1.1 </span></span><span class="insert">Compliance with this Document</span></a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#structure-of-this-document" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">1.1</span><span class="insert">1.2</span> </span>Structure of this Document</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#conventions" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">1.2</span><span class="insert">1.3</span> </span>Notational Conventions</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#namespaces" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">1.3</span><span class="insert">1.4</span> </span>Namespaces</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-overview" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2. </span>PROV Overview</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#core-structures" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1 </span>PROV Core Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-entity-activity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.1 </span>Entity and Activity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-derivation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.2 </span>Derivation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-agents-attribution-association-delegation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.3 </span>Agents and Responsibility</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-extended-structures" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2 </span>PROV Extended Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-mechanisms" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1 </span>Mechanisms to Define Extended Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-subtyping" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.1 </span>Subtyping</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-expanded-relation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.2 </span>Expanded Relations</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-optional-identification" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.3 </span>Optional Identification</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-further-relations" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.4 </span>Further Relations</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-provenance-of-provnance" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.2 </span>Provenance of Provenance</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-collections" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.3 </span>Collections</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-overview-components" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.3 </span>Modular Organization</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#prov-notation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">3. </span>The Provenance Notation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#prov-dm-example" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4. </span>Illustration of PROV-DM by an Example</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-one" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.1 </span>Example: The Authors View</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-two" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.2 </span>Example: The Process View</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-c" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.3 </span>Example: Attribution of Provenance</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#data-model-components" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5. </span>PROV-DM Types and Relations</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#component1" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1 </span>Component 1: Entities and Activities</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-entity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.1 </span>Entity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Activity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.2 </span>Activity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Generation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.3 </span>Generation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Usage" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.4 </span>Usage</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Communication" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.5 </span>Communication</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Start" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.6 </span>Start</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-End" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.7 </span>End</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Invalidation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.8 </span>Invalidation</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component2" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2 </span>Component 2: Derivations</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Derivation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.1 </span>Derivation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-revision" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.2 </span>Revision</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-quotation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.3 </span>Quotation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-primary-source" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.4 </span>Primary Source</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component3" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3 </span>Component 3: Agents, Responsibility, and Influence</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-agent" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.1 </span>Agent</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribution" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.2 </span>Attribution</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Association" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.3 </span>Association</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-delegation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.4 </span>Delegation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-influence" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.5 </span>Influence</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component4" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4 </span>Component 4: Bundles</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-bundle" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4.1 </span>Bundle constructor</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-bundle-entity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4.2 </span>Bundle Type</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component5" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5 </span>Component 5: Alternate Entities</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-specialization" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5.1 </span>Specialization</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-alternate" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5.2 </span>Alternate</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-mention" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5.3 </span>Mention</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component6" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6 </span>Component 6: Collections</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-collection" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6.1 </span>Collection</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-membership" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6.2 </span>Membership</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#second-class-elements" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7 </span>Further Elements of PROV-DM</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-identifier" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.1 </span>Identifier</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2 </span>Attribute</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-label" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.1 </span>prov:label</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-location" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.2 </span>prov:location</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-role" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.3 </span>prov:role</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-type" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.4 </span>prov:type</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-value" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.5 </span>prov:value</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-value" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.3 </span>Value</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-NamespaceDeclaration" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.4 </span>Namespace Declaration</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-qualified-name" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.5 </span>Qualified Name</a></li></ul></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#extensibility-section" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">6. </span>PROV-DM Extensibility Points</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#valid-provenance" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">7. </span>Creating Valid Provenance</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#cross-references-to-prov-o-and-prov-n" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">A. </span>Cross-References to PROV-O and PROV-N</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#changes-since-last-version" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="insert">B. </span></span><span class="insert">Changes since last version</span></a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#acknowledgements" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">B.</span><span class="insert">C.</span> </span>Acknowledgements</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#references" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.</span><span class="insert">D.</span> </span>References</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#normative-references" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.1</span><span class="insert">D.1</span> </span>Normative references</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#informative-references" class="tocxref"><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.2</span><span class="insert">D.2</span> </span>Informative references</a></li></ul></li></ul></div> 
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</span>PROV Core Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-entity-activity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.1 </span>Entity and Activity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-derivation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.2 </span>Derivation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-agents-attribution-association-delegation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.1.3 </span>Agents and Responsibility</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-extended-structures" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2 </span>PROV Extended Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-mechanisms" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1 </span>Mechanisms to Define Extended Structures</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-subtyping" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.1 </span>Subtyping</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-expanded-relation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.2 </span>Expanded Relations</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-optional-identification" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.3 </span>Optional Identification</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-prov-extended-approach-further-relations" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.1.4 </span>Further Relations</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-provenance-of-provnance" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.2 </span>Provenance of Provenance</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-collections" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.2.3 </span>Collections</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-overview-components" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">2.3 </span>Modular Organization</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#prov-notation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">3. </span>The Provenance Notation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#prov-dm-example" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4. </span>Illustration of PROV-DM by an Example</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-one" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.1 </span>Example: The Authors View</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-two" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.2 </span>Example: The Process View</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#section-example-c" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">4.3 </span>Example: Attribution of Provenance</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#data-model-components" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5. </span>PROV-DM Types and Relations</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#component1" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1 </span>Component 1: Entities and Activities</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-entity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.1 </span>Entity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Activity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.2 </span>Activity</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Generation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.3 </span>Generation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Usage" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.4 </span>Usage</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Communication" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.5 </span>Communication</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Start" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.6 </span>Start</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-End" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.7 </span>End</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Invalidation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.1.8 </span>Invalidation</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component2" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2 </span>Component 2: Derivations</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Derivation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.1 </span>Derivation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-revision" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.2 </span>Revision</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-quotation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.3 </span>Quotation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-primary-source" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.2.4 </span>Primary Source</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component3" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3 </span>Component 3: Agents, Responsibility, and Influence</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-agent" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.1 </span>Agent</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribution" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.2 </span>Attribution</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-Association" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.3 </span>Association</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-delegation" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.4 </span>Delegation</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-influence" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.3.5 </span>Influence</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component4" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4 </span>Component 4: Bundles</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-bundle" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4.1 </span>Bundle constructor</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-bundle-entity" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.4.2 </span>Bundle Type</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component5" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5 </span>Component 5: Alternate Entities</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-specialization" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5.1 </span>Specialization</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-alternate" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.5.2 </span>Alternate<span class="delete">5.5.3 </span><span class="delete">Mention</span></a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#component6" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6 </span>Component 6: Collections</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-collection" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6.1 </span>Collection</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-membership" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.6.2 </span>Membership</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#second-class-elements" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7 </span>Further Elements of PROV-DM</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-identifier" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.1 </span>Identifier</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2 </span>Attribute</a><ul class="toc"><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-label" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.1 </span>prov:label</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-location" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.2 </span>prov:location</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-role" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.3 </span>prov:role</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-type" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.4 </span>prov:type</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-attribute-value" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.2.5 </span>prov:value</a></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-value" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.3 </span>Value</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-NamespaceDeclaration" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.4 </span>Namespace Declaration</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#term-qualified-name" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">5.7.5 </span>Qualified Name</a></li></ul></li></ul></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#extensibility-section" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">6. </span>PROV-DM Extensibility Points</a></li><li class="tocline"><a href="#valid-provenance" class="tocxref"><span class="secno">7. </span>Creating Valid Provenance</a></li><li 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 <h3><span class="secno"><span class="insert">1.2 </span></span><span class="insert">Structure of this Document</span></h3><p><em><span class="insert">This section is non-normative.</span></em></p>
 
-<p><a href="#section-prov-overview">Section 2</a> provides an overview of the PROV Data Model,  distinguishing a core set of types and  relations, commonly found in provenance, from extended structures catering for more specific uses. It also introduces a modular organization of the data model in components. </p>
+<p><a href="#section-prov-overview">Section 2</a> provides an overview of the PROV <span class="delete">Data Model,</span><span class="insert">data model,</span>  distinguishing a core set of types and  relations, commonly found in provenance, from extended structures catering for more specific uses. It also introduces a modular organization of the data model in components. </p>
 
 <p><a href="#prov-notation">Section 3</a> overviews the Provenance Notation used to illustrate examples of provenance.</p>
 
@@ -1253,11 +1730,11 @@
 </p><div style="text-align: left;">
 <table class="thinborder" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
 <caption id="namespace-table"><span>Table 1<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#namespace-table"><span class="diamond"> ◊:</span></a></sup> </span>Prefix and Namespaces used in this specification</caption> 
-<tbody><tr><td><a><b>prefix</b></a></td><td><b>namespace uri</b></td> <td><b>definition</b></td></tr>
+<tbody><tr><td><a><b>prefix</b></a></td><td><b>namespace <span class="delete">uri</span><span class="insert">IRI</span></b></td> <td><b>definition</b></td></tr>
 <tr><td><a>prov</a></td><td>http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#</td><td>The PROV namespace (see <a class="section-ref" href="#term-NamespaceDeclaration"><span>Section 5.7.4</span></a>)</td></tr>
 <tr><td><a>xsd</a></td><td>http://www.w3.org/2000/10/XMLSchema#</td><td>XML Schema Namespace [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">XMLSCHEMA11-2</a></cite>]</td></tr>
 <tr><td><a>rdf</a></td><td>http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#</td><td>The RDF namespace  [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-RDF-CONCEPTS">RDF-CONCEPTS</a></cite>]</td></tr>
-<tr><td><a>(others)</a></td><td>(various)</td><td>All other namespace prefixes are used in examples only. <br> In particular, URIs starting with "http://example.com" represent<br> some application-dependent URI [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-URI">URI</a></cite>]</td></tr>
+<tr><td><a>(others)</a></td><td>(various)</td><td>All other namespace prefixes are used in examples only. <br> In particular, <span class="delete">URIs</span><span class="insert">IRIs</span> starting with "http://example.com" represent<br> some application-dependent <span class="delete">URI</span><span class="insert">IRI</span> [<cite><span class="delete">URI</span><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-IRI"><span class="insert">IRI</span></a></cite>]</td></tr>
 </tbody></table>
 </div>
 
@@ -1272,7 +1749,7 @@
 <h2><span class="secno">2. </span>PROV Overview</h2><p><em><span class="insert">This section is non-normative.</span></em></p>
 
 <p>This section introduces provenance concepts with informal explanations and illustrative
-examples. PROV distinguishes  <em>core structures</em>, forming the essence of  provenance, from <em>extended structures</em> catering for more specific uses of provenance.  Core and extended structures are respectively presented in <a href="#core-structures">Section 2.1</a> and <a href="#section-extended-structures">Section 2.2</a>. Furthermore, the PROV data model is organized according to components, which form thematic groupings of concepts (see <a href="#section-overview-components">Section 2.3</a>). A <em>provenance description</em> is an instance of  a core and extended provenance structure described below.
+examples. PROV distinguishes  <em>core structures</em>, forming the essence of  provenance, from <em>extended structures</em> catering for more specific uses of provenance.  Core and extended structures are respectively presented in <a href="#core-structures">Section 2.1</a> and <a href="#section-extended-structures">Section 2.2</a>. Furthermore, the PROV data model is organized according to components, which form thematic groupings of concepts (see <a href="#section-overview-components">Section 2.3</a>). A <em>provenance description</em> is an instance of  a <span class="insert">provenance structure, whether </span>core <span class="delete">and extended provenance structure</span><span class="insert">or extended,</span> described below.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -1334,6 +1811,15 @@
 
 
 
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 <form action="#"><p> 
 <input id="hide-examples" onclick="set_display_by_class('div','anexample conceptexample','none'); set_display_by_id('hide-examples','none'); set_display_by_id('show-examples','');" type="button" value="Hide Concept Examples"> 
 <input id="show-examples" onclick="set_display_by_class('div','anexample conceptexample',''); set_display_by_id('hide-examples',''); set_display_by_id('show-examples','none');" style="display: none" type="button" value="Show Concept Examples"> 
@@ -1359,7 +1845,7 @@
 
 
 <div class="anexample conceptexample" id="entity-example"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 1<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#entity-example"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
-<p>An entity may be the document at URI <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-17526723">http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-17526723</a>, a file in a file system, a car, or an idea.</p>
+<p>An entity may be the document at <span class="delete">URI</span><span class="insert">IRI</span> <a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-17526723">http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-17526723</a>, a file in a file system, a car, or an idea.</p>
 </div>
 
 
@@ -1372,7 +1858,7 @@
 information processing activities
  may for example move, copy, or duplicate  digital entities;
  physical activities can include
- driving a car from Boston to Cambridge or printing a book.
+ driving a car <span class="delete">from Boston to Cambridge</span><span class="insert">between two locations</span> or printing a book.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -1552,6 +2038,10 @@
 
 
 
+
+
+
+
 <div class="anexample conceptexample" id="agent-example"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">7</span><span class="insert">8</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#agent-example"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 Software for checking the use of grammar in a document may be defined as an agent of a document preparation activity;  one can also describe its provenance, including for instance the vendor and the version history. 
@@ -1577,6 +2067,9 @@
 
 
 
+
+
+
 <p>
 <span class="glossary-ref">   An activity <span class="dfn">association</span> is an assignment of responsibility to an agent for an activity, indicating that the agent had a role in the activity.  </span>
 [<a href="#term-Association">Detailed specification</a>]</p>
@@ -1657,7 +2150,7 @@
 
 
 
-<p><span class="insert">Indeed, binary relations are actually shorthands that can be 'opened up' by applications and filled in with further application details. For example, derivation is a very high level relationship between two entities: an application may decide to 'open up' that relationship in an expanded relation that describes how an entity was derived from another by virtue of listing the generation, usage, and activity involved in the 'WasDerivedFrom' relationship. Applications are free to decide which level of granularity they want describe, and   PROV gives them the way to do that.</span></p>
+<p><span class="insert">Indeed, binary relations are actually shorthands that can be 'opened up' by applications and filled in with further application details. For example, derivation is a very high level relationship between two entities: an application may decide to 'open up' that relationship in an expanded relation that describes how an entity was derived from another by virtue of listing the generation, usage, and activity involved in the derivation relationship. Applications are free to decide which level of granularity they want describe, and   PROV gives them the way to do that.</span></p>
 
 
 
@@ -1704,7 +2197,7 @@
 binary relation, and an extended use, expressed as n-ary relation.  In
 some cases, mapping the concept to a relation, whether binary or
 n-ary, is not sufficient: instead, it may be required to
-identify an instance of such concept.  In those cases, PROV-DM allows for 
+identify an instance of such concept.  In those cases, <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> allows for 
 an optional identifier to be
 expressed to identify an instance of an association between two or
 more elements.  This optional identifier can then be used to refer to
@@ -1722,7 +2215,7 @@
 <div id="section-prov-extended-approach-further-relations" class="section"> 
 <h5><span class="secno">2.2.1.4 </span>Further Relations</h5>
 
-<p>Finally, PROV-DM supports further relations that are not subtypes or expanded versions of existing relations (such as <a href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">specialization</a>, <a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">alternate</a>).</p>
+<p>Finally, <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> supports further relations that are not subtypes or expanded versions of existing relations (such as <a href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">specialization</a>, <a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">alternate</a>).</p>
 
 
 </div>
@@ -1752,7 +2245,7 @@
 
 <div class="anexample conceptexample" id="bundle-example"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">13</span><span class="insert">14</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#bundle-example"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
-In a decision making situation, decision makers may be presented with the same piece of knowledge, issued by multiple sources.  In order to validate this piece of knowledge, decision makers can consider its provenance, but also the provenance of their provenance, which may help determine whether it can be trusted.
+In a decision making situation, decision makers may be presented with the same piece of knowledge, issued by multiple sources.  In order to validate this piece of knowledge, decision makers can consider its provenance, but also the provenance of <span class="delete">their</span><span class="insert">its</span> provenance, which may help determine whether it can be trusted.
 </p>
 </div>
 </div>
@@ -1890,7 +2383,7 @@
 
 
 
-<p>We paraphrase some PROV-DM descriptions, express them with the PROV-N notation, and depict them with a graphical illustration (see <a href="#prov-a-document1-top">Figure 2</a>).
+<p>We paraphrase some <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> descriptions, express them with the PROV-N notation, and depict them with a graphical illustration (see <a href="#prov-a-document1-top">Figure 2</a>).
 Full details of the provenance record can be found <a href="examples/w3c-publication1.provn">here</a>.</p>
 
 <div style="text-align: center; ">
@@ -1933,7 +2426,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Provenance descriptions can be <em>illustrated</em> graphically. The illustration is not intended to represent all the details of the model, but it is intended to show the essence of a set of
-provenance descriptions.  Therefore, it should not be seen as an alternate notation for expressing provenance.</p>
+provenance <span class="delete">descriptions.</span><span class="insert">descriptions [</span><cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-LAYOUT"><span class="insert">PROV-LAYOUT</span></a></cite><span class="insert">].</span>  Therefore, it should not be seen as an alternate notation for expressing provenance.</p>
 
 <p>The graphical illustration takes the form of a graph. Entities, activities and agents are represented as nodes, with oval, rectangular, and pentagonal shapes, respectively.  Usage,
 Generation, Derivation, and Association are represented as directed edges.</p>
@@ -1956,11 +2449,11 @@
 must be preceded by a "publication request" to the Webmaster.  The
 very first version of a document must also be preceded by a
 "transition request" to be approved by the <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> director.  All working
-drafts are made available at a unique URI.  In this scenario, we consider two successive versions of a given document, the policy according to which they were published, and the associated requests.
+drafts are made available at a unique <span class="delete">URI.</span><span class="insert">IRI.</span>  In this scenario, we consider two successive versions of a given document, the policy according to which they were published, and the associated requests.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-We describe the kind of provenance record that the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium">WWW Consortium</a> could keep for auditors to check that due processes are followed. All entities involved in this example are Web resources, with well-defined URIs (some of which refer archived email messages, available to <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Members).</p>
+We describe the kind of provenance record that the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium">WWW Consortium</a> could keep for auditors to check that due processes are followed. All entities involved in this example are Web resources, with well-defined <span class="delete">URIs</span><span class="insert">IRIs</span> (some of which refer archived email messages, available to <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Members).</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li> Two versions of a document were involved: <span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111215">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</a></span> (second working draft) and <span class="name"><span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111018">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018</a></span></span> (first working draft);</li>
@@ -1973,7 +2466,7 @@
 
 <li> The publication activity <span class="name">ex:act1</span> used a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/08/01-transitions.html#pubreq">publication request</a> (<span class="name"><a href="https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/w3c-archive/2011Oct/0141">email:2011Oct/0141</a></span>) and a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/08/01-transitions.html#transreq">transition request</a> (<span class="name"><a href="https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/chairs/2011OctDec/0004">chairs:2011OctDec/0004</a></span>);</li>
 <li> The publication activity <span class="name">ex:act2</span> used a <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/08/01-transitions.html#pubreq">publication request</a> (<span class="name"><a href="https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/w3c-archive/2011Dec/0111">email:2011Dec/0111</a></span>);</li>
-<li> Documents were published according to the process rules (<span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html#rec-advance">process:rec-advance</a></span>), a plan in PROV-DM terminology.</li>
+<li> Documents were published according to the process rules (<span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr.html#rec-advance">process:rec-advance</a></span>), a plan in <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> terminology.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>
@@ -2027,7 +2520,7 @@
 
 
 
-<p> This simple example has shown a variety of PROV concepts, such as Entity, Agent, Activity, Usage, Generation, Derivation, and Association. In this example, it happens that all entities were already Web resources, with readily available URIs, which we used. We note that some of the resources are public, whereas others have restricted access: provenance statements only make use of their identifiers. If identifiers do not pre-exist, e.g. for activities, then they can be generated, for instance <span class="name">ex:act2</span>, occurring in the namespace identified by prefix <span class="name">ex</span>.  We note that the URI scheme developed by <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> is particularly suited for expressing provenance of these documents, since each URI denotes a specific version of a document. It then becomes easy to relate the various versions with  PROV-DM relations. We note that an Association is a ternary relation (represented by a multi-edge labeled wasAssociatedWith) from an activity to an agent and a plan.</p>
+<p> This simple example has shown a variety of PROV concepts, such as Entity, Agent, Activity, Usage, Generation, Derivation, and Association. In this example, it happens that all entities were already Web resources, with readily available <span class="delete">URIs,</span><span class="insert">IRIs,</span> which we used. We note that some of the resources are public, whereas others have restricted access: provenance statements only make use of their identifiers. If identifiers do not pre-exist, e.g. for activities, then they can be generated, for instance <span class="name">ex:act2</span>, occurring in the namespace identified by prefix <span class="name">ex</span>.  We note that the <span class="delete">URI</span><span class="insert">IRI</span> scheme developed by <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> is particularly suited for expressing provenance of these documents, since each <span class="delete">URI</span><span class="insert">IRI</span> denotes a specific version of a document. It then becomes easy to relate the various versions with  <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> relations. We note that an Association is a ternary relation (represented by a multi-edge labeled wasAssociatedWith) from an activity to an agent and a plan.</p>
 
 
 </div>
@@ -2118,8 +2611,8 @@
 </div>
 
 <p>
-While  not all PROV-DM relations are binary, they all involve two primary elements. Hence, <a href="#relations-at-a-glance">Table 4</a> indexes all relations<span class="insert"> (except </span><a href="#dfn-wasinfluencedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">wasInfluencedBy</span></a><span class="insert">)</span> according to their two primary elements (referred to as subject and object).  The table adopts the same color scheme as <a href="#prov-dm-components">Figure 4</a>, allowing components to be readily identified.
-Note that for simplicity, this table  does not include collection-oriented relations.
+While  not all PROV-DM relations are binary, they all involve two primary elements. Hence, <a href="#relations-at-a-glance">Table 4</a> indexes all relations <span class="insert">(except </span><a href="#dfn-wasinfluencedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">wasInfluencedBy</span></a><span class="insert">) </span>according to their two primary elements (referred to as subject and object).  The table adopts the same color scheme as <a href="#prov-dm-components">Figure 4</a>, allowing components to be readily identified.<span class="delete">
+Note that for simplicity, this table  does not include collection-oriented relations.</span>
 Relation names appearing in bold correspond to the core structures introduced
 in <a href="#core-structures">Section 2.1</a>.</p>
 
@@ -2129,7 +2622,7 @@
 <caption id="relations-at-a-glance"><span>Table 4<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#relations-at-a-glance"><span class="diamond"> ◊:</span></a></sup> </span>PROV-DM Relations At a Glance</caption> 
 <tbody><tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td colspan="6">Object</td></tr> 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td colspan="2">Entity</td><td colspan="2">Activity</td><td colspan="2">Agent</td></tr> 
-<tr><td rowspan="3">Subject</td><td>Entity</td><td colspan="2"><div class="component2-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasderivedfrom">WasDerivedFrom</a><br><a href="#concept-revision" class="internalDFN">Revision</a><br><a href="#concept-quotation" class="internalDFN">Quotation</a><br><a>PrimarySource</a></div><div class="component5-color"><a href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN">AlternateOf</a><br><a href="#dfn-specializationof" class="internalDFN">SpecializationOf</a><br><a href="#dfn-mentionof" class="internalDFN">MentionOf</a></div></td><td class="component1-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" title="wasGeneratedBy" href="#dfn-wasgeneratedby">WasGeneratedBy</a><br><a title="wasInvalidatedBy" href="#dfn-wasinvalidatedby" class="internalDFN">WasInvalidatedBy</a></td><td class="component1-color" style="font-style: italic; "><a title="role" href="#concept-role" class="internalDFN">R</a><br><a title="time" href="#dfn-time" class="internalDFN">T</a><br><a title="location" href="#concept-location" class="internalDFN">L</a><br></td><td class="component3-color" colspan="2"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasattributedto">WasAttributedTo</a></td></tr>
+<tr><td rowspan="3">Subject</td><td>Entity</td><td colspan="2"><div class="component2-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasderivedfrom">WasDerivedFrom</a><br><a href="#concept-revision" class="internalDFN">Revision</a><br><a href="#concept-quotation" class="internalDFN">Quotation</a><br><a>PrimarySource</a></div><div class="component5-color"><a href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN">AlternateOf</a><br><a href="#dfn-specializationof" class="internalDFN">SpecializationOf</a><span class="delete">MentionOf</span></div><div class="component6-color"><a href="#dfn-hadmember" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">HadMember</span></a></div></td><td class="component1-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" title="wasGeneratedBy" href="#dfn-wasgeneratedby">WasGeneratedBy</a><br><a title="wasInvalidatedBy" href="#dfn-wasinvalidatedby" class="internalDFN">WasInvalidatedBy</a></td><td class="component1-color" style="font-style: italic; "><a title="role" href="#concept-role" class="internalDFN">R</a><br><a title="time" href="#dfn-time" class="internalDFN">T</a><br><a title="location" href="#concept-location" class="internalDFN">L</a><br></td><td class="component3-color" colspan="2"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasattributedto">WasAttributedTo</a></td></tr>
 <tr><td>Activity</td><td class="component1-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-used">Used</a><br><a href="#dfn-wasstartedby" class="internalDFN">WasStartedBy</a><br><a href="#dfn-wasendedby" class="internalDFN">WasEndedBy</a></td><td class="component1-color" style="font-style: italic; "><a title="role" href="#concept-role" class="internalDFN">R</a><br><a title="time" href="#dfn-time" class="internalDFN">T</a><br><a title="location" href="#concept-location" class="internalDFN">L</a><br></td><td colspan="2" class="component1-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasinformedby">WasInformedBy</a></td><td class="component3-color"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasassociatedwith">WasAssociatedWith</a></td><td class="component3-color" style="font-style: italic; "><a title="role" href="#concept-role" class="internalDFN">R</a><br></td></tr>
 <tr><td>Agent</td><td colspan="2">—</td><td colspan="2">—</td><td class="component3-color" colspan="2"><a class="essential internalDFN" href="#dfn-actedonbehalfof">ActedOnBehalfOf</a></td></tr>
 </tbody></table>
@@ -2147,17 +2640,17 @@
 
 
 <p><span class="insert">
-Some PROV-DM relations are not binary and involve extra optional element. They are summarized in  </span><a href="#secondary-elements-relations-at-a-glance-div"><span class="insert">Table 5</span></a><span class="insert"> grouping secondary objects, according to their type.  The table also adopts the same color scheme as </span><a href="#prov-dm-components"><span class="insert">Figure 4</span></a><span class="insert">, allowing components to be readily identified. None of these associations correspond to the core structures introduced
+Some PROV-DM relations are not binary and involve extra optional element. They are summarized in  </span><a href="#secondary-elements-relations-at-a-glance-div"><span class="insert">Table 5</span></a><span class="insert"> grouping secondary objects, according to their type.  The table also adopts the same color scheme as </span><a href="#prov-dm-components"><span class="insert">Figure 4</span></a><span class="insert">, allowing components to be readily identified. None of these relations correspond to the core structures introduced
 in </span><a href="#core-structures"><span class="insert">Section 2.1</span></a><span class="insert">.</span></p>
 
 
 <div id="secondary-elements-relations-at-a-glance-div" style="text-align: center;">
 <table class="thinborder" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
 <caption id="secondary-elements-relations-at-a-glance"><span><span class="insert">Table 5</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#secondary-elements-relations-at-a-glance"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊:</span></span></a></sup> </span><span class="insert">Secondary optional elements in PROV-DM Relations</span></caption> 
-<tbody><tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px;§&gt; "></td><td colspan="6"><span class="insert">Secondary Object</span></td></tr> 
+<tbody><tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px;§&gt; "></td><td colspan="3"><span class="insert">Secondary Object</span></td></tr> 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td><span class="insert">Entity</span></td><td><span class="insert">Activity</span></td><td><span class="insert">Agent</span></td></tr> 
-<tr><td rowspan="3"><span class="insert">Subject</span></td><td><span class="insert">Entity</span></td><td class="component5-color"><a href="#dfn-mentionof" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">MentionOf</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#mention.bundle"><span class="insert">bundle</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td class="component2-color"><a href="#dfn-wasderivedfrom" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasDerivedFrom</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#derivation.activity"><span class="insert">activity</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td colspan="2"><span class="insert">—</span></td></tr>
-<tr><td><span class="insert">Activity</span></td><td class="component3-color"><a href="#dfn-wasassociatedwith" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasAssociatedWith</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#association.plan"><span class="insert">plan</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td class="component1-color"><a href="#dfn-wasstartedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasStartedBy</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#start.starter"><span class="insert">starter</span></a><span class="insert">)</span><br><a href="#dfn-wasendedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasEndedBy</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#end.ender"><span class="insert">ender</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td colspan="2"><span class="insert">—</span></td></tr>
+<tr><td rowspan="3"><span class="insert">Subject</span></td><td><span class="insert">Entity</span></td><td><span class="insert">—</span></td><td class="component2-color"><a href="#dfn-wasderivedfrom" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasDerivedFrom</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#derivation.activity"><span class="insert">activity</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td><span class="insert">—</span></td></tr>
+<tr><td><span class="insert">Activity</span></td><td class="component3-color"><a href="#dfn-wasassociatedwith" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasAssociatedWith</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#association.plan"><span class="insert">plan</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td class="component1-color"><a href="#dfn-wasstartedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasStartedBy</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#start.starter"><span class="insert">starter</span></a><span class="insert">)</span><br><a href="#dfn-wasendedby" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">WasEndedBy</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#end.ender"><span class="insert">ender</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td><span class="insert">—</span></td></tr>
 <tr><td><span class="insert">Agent</span></td><td><span class="insert">—</span></td><td class="component3-color"><a href="#dfn-actedonbehalfof" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">ActedOnBehalfOf</span></a><span class="insert"> (</span><a href="#delegation.activity"><span class="insert">activity</span></a><span class="insert">)</span></td><td><span class="insert">—</span></td></tr>
 </tbody></table>
 </div>
@@ -2202,13 +2695,13 @@
 
 
 
-<tr class="component4-color"><td><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">Bundle constructor</a></td><td><a title="dfn-bundle" href="#dfn-bundle-constructor" class="internalDFN">bundle id description_1 ... description_n endBundle</a></td><td rowspan="2"><a href="#component5">Component 4: Bundles</a></td></tr>
+<tr class="component4-color"><td><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">Bundle constructor</a></td><td><a title="dfn-bundle" href="#dfn-bundle-constructor" class="internalDFN">bundle id description_1 ... description_n endBundle</a></td><td rowspan="2"><a href="#component4">Component 4: Bundles</a></td></tr>
 <tr class="component4-color"><td class="provType"><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">Bundle type</a></td><td><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">... prov:type='prov:Bundle' ...</a></td></tr>
 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td></tr>
-<tr class="component5-color"><td><a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">Alternate</a></td><td><a title="alternateOf" href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN">alternateOf(alt1, alt2)</a></td><td rowspan="3"><a href="#component4">Component 5: Alternate</a></td></tr>
+<tr class="component5-color"><td><a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">Alternate</a></td><td><a title="alternateOf" href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN">alternateOf(alt1, alt2)</a></td><td rowspan="2"><a href="#component5">Component 5: Alternate</a></td></tr>
 <tr class="component5-color"><td><a href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">Specialization</a></td><td><a title="specializationOf" href="#dfn-specializationof" class="internalDFN">specializationOf(infra, supra)</a></td></tr>
-<tr class="component5-color"><td><a href="#concept-mention" class="internalDFN">Mention</a></td><td><a title="mentionOf" href="#dfn-mentionof" class="internalDFN">mentionOf(infra, supra,bundle)</a></td></tr> 
+<span class="delete">Mention</span><span class="delete">mentionOf(infra, supra,bundle)</span> 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td></tr>
 
 
@@ -2263,6 +2756,7 @@
 </pre>
 states the existence of an entity, denoted by identifier <span class="name">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</span>,  with type <span class="name">document</span> and version number <span class="name">2</span>. The attribute <span class="name">ex:version</span> is application specific, whereas the attribute <span class="name">type</span> (see <a href="#term-attribute-type">Section 5.7.4.4</a>) is reserved in the <a title="prov-namespace" href="#dfn-prov-namespace" class="internalDFN">PROV namespace</a>.
 
+
 </div>
 
 
@@ -2336,9 +2830,9 @@
 <pre class="codeexample">  wasGeneratedBy(e1, a1, 2001-10-26T21:32:52, [ ex:port="p1" ])
   wasGeneratedBy(e2, a1, 2001-10-26T10:00:00, [ ex:port="p2" ])
 </pre>
-<p>state the existence of two generations (with respective times <span class="name">2001-10-26T21:32:52</span> and <span class="name">2001-10-26T10:00:00</span>), at which new entities,  identified by <span class="name">e1</span> and <span class="name">e2</span>, are created by an
+<p>state the existence of two generations (with respective times <span class="name">2001-10-26T21:32:52</span> and <span class="name">2001-10-26T10:00:00</span>), at which new entities,  identified by <span class="name">e1</span> and <span class="name">e2</span>, <span class="delete">are</span><span class="insert">were</span> created by an
 activity,  identified by <span class="name">a1</span>.
-The first one is available  on port <span class="name">p1</span>, whereas the other is available on port <span class="name">p2</span>.  The semantics of <span class="name">port</span> are application specific.
+The first one <span class="delete">is</span><span class="insert">was</span> available  on port <span class="name">p1</span>, whereas the other <span class="delete">is</span><span class="insert">was</span> available on port <span class="name">p2</span>.  The semantics of <span class="name">port</span> are application specific.
 </p>
 </div>
 
@@ -2436,7 +2930,7 @@
 <div id="term-Start" class="section">
 <h4><span class="secno">5.1.6 </span>Start</h4>
 
-<div class="glossary-ref">   <dfn id="concept-start" class="internalDFN">Start</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is when an activity is deemed to have started.  The activity did not exist before its start. Any usage or generation involving an activity follows the activity's start. A start may refer to an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger" class="internalDFN">trigger</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start-trigger"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>, that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter" class="internalDFN">starter</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start-starter"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>, that generated the trigger. </div>
+<div class="glossary-ref">   <dfn id="concept-start" class="internalDFN">Start</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is when an activity is deemed to have <span class="delete">started.  The activity did not exist before its start. Any usage or generation involving an activity follows the activity's start. A start may refer to</span><span class="insert">been started by</span> an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger" class="internalDFN">trigger</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start-trigger"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">.  The activity did not exist before its start. Any usage, generation, or invalidation involving an activity follows the activity's start. A start may refer to a trigger entity</span> that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter" class="internalDFN">starter</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-start-starter"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>, that generated the trigger. </div>
 
 
 
@@ -2516,7 +3010,7 @@
 <div id="term-End" class="section">
 <h4><span class="secno">5.1.7 </span>End</h4>
 
-<div class="glossary-ref">   <dfn id="concept-end" class="internalDFN">End</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is when an activity is deemed to have ended.  The activity no longer exists after its end. Any usage, generation, or invalidation involving an activity precedes the activity's end. An end may refer to an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-end-trigger" class="internalDFN">trigger</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end-trigger"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>, that terminated the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-end-ender" class="internalDFN">ender</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end-ender"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> that generated the trigger. </div>
+<div class="glossary-ref">   <dfn id="concept-end" class="internalDFN">End</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is when an activity is deemed to have <span class="delete">ended.  The activity no longer exists after its end. Any usage, generation, or invalidation involving an activity precedes the activity's end. An end may refer to</span><span class="insert">been ended by</span> an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-end-trigger" class="internalDFN">trigger</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end-trigger"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">.  The activity no longer exists after its end. Any usage, generation, or invalidation involving an activity precedes the activity's end. An end may refer to a trigger entity</span> that terminated the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-end-ender" class="internalDFN">ender</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-end-ender"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> that generated the trigger. </div>
 
 
 
@@ -2571,7 +3065,9 @@
 </li><li> an entity is time limited: e.g. the BBC news site on April 3rd, 2012;
 </li><li> an entity attribute is changing: e.g. the traffic light changed from green to red.
 </li></ul>
-<p>In the first two cases, the entity has physically disappeared after its termination: there is no more soup, or painting.  In the <span class="delete">last three cases,</span><span class="insert">third case,</span> there may be an "offer voucher" that still exists, but it is no longer valid; likewise, on April 4th, the BBC news site still exists but it is not the same entity as BBC news Web site on April 3rd; or the traffic light became red and therefore is regarded as a different entity to the green light.
+<p>In the first two cases, the entity has physically disappeared after its termination: there is no more soup, or painting.  In the <span class="delete">last three cases,</span><span class="insert">third case,</span> there may be an "offer voucher" that still exists, but it is no longer valid; likewise, on April 4th, the BBC news site still exists but it is not the same entity as BBC news Web site on April 3rd; or the<span class="insert"> 
+green</span> traffic light <span class="insert">(an entity with a fixed aspect green light) </span>became <span class="insert">the
+</span>red <span class="delete">and therefore is regarded as</span><span class="insert">traffic light (anohter entity with</span> a <span class="delete">different entity to the green light.</span><span class="insert">fixed aspect red light).</span>
 </p>
 
 
@@ -2664,7 +3160,7 @@
 
 
 
-<p>The third component of PROV-DM is concerned with: <a title="derivation" href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivations</a> of <a title="entity" href="#concept-entity" class="internalDFN">entities</a> from other entities and derivation subtypes <span class="insert">WasRevisionOf (</span><a href="#concept-revision" class="internalDFN">Revision</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">), WasQuotedFrom (</span><a href="#concept-quotation" class="internalDFN">Quotation</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">),</span> and <span class="insert">HasPrimarySource (</span><a href="#concept-primary-source" class="internalDFN">Primary Source</a><span class="delete">.</span><span class="insert">).</span>
+<p>The <span class="delete">third</span><span class="insert">second</span> component of PROV-DM is concerned with: <a title="derivation" href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivations</a> of <a title="entity" href="#concept-entity" class="internalDFN">entities</a> from other entities and derivation subtypes <span class="insert">WasRevisionOf (</span><a href="#concept-revision" class="internalDFN">Revision</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">), WasQuotedFrom (</span><a href="#concept-quotation" class="internalDFN">Quotation</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">),</span> and <span class="insert">HasPrimarySource (</span><a href="#concept-primary-source" class="internalDFN">Primary Source</a><span class="delete">.</span><span class="insert">).</span>
  <a href="#figure-component2">Figure 6</a> depicts the third component
 with PROV core structures in the yellow area, including two classes
 (<a href="#concept-entity" class="internalDFN">Entity</a>, <a href="#concept-activity" class="internalDFN">Activity</a>) and binary association<span class="insert"> WasDerivedFrom</span>
@@ -2704,8 +3200,8 @@
 <li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.generatedEntity">generatedEntity</span>: the identifier (<span class="name">e2</span>) of the entity generated by the derivation;</li>
 <li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.usedEntity">usedEntity</span>: the identifier (<span class="name">e1</span>) of the entity used by the derivation;</li>
 <li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.activity">activity</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier (<span class="name">a</span>) for the activity using and generating the above entities;</li>
-<li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.generation">generation</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier (<span class="name">g2</span>) for the generation involving the generated entity (<span class="name">e2</span>) and activity;</li> 
-<li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.usage">usage</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier (<span class="name">u1</span>) for the usage involving the used entity (<span class="name">e1</span>) and activity;</li> 
+<li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.generation">generation</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier (<span class="name">g2</span>) for the generation involving the generated entity (<span class="name">e2</span>) and <span class="delete">activity;</span><span class="insert">activity (</span><span class="name"><span class="insert">a</span></span><span class="insert">);</span></li> 
+<li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.usage">usage</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier (<span class="name">u1</span>) for the usage involving the used entity (<span class="name">e1</span>) and <span class="delete">activity;</span><span class="insert">activity (</span><span class="name"><span class="insert">a</span></span><span class="insert">);</span></li> 
 <li><span class="attribute" id="derivation.attributes">attributes</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> set (<span class="name">attrs</span>) of attribute-value pairs representing additional information about this derivation.</li>
 </ul>
 </div>
@@ -2726,7 +3222,7 @@
 wasGeneratedBy(g2; e2, a, -)
 used(u1; a, e1, -)
 </pre>
-<p>With such a comprehensive description of derivation, a program that analyzes provenance can identify the activity underpinning the derivation, it can identify how the original entity <span class="name">e1</span> was used by  the activity (e.g. for instance, which argument it was passed as, if the activity is the result of a function invocation), and which output the derived entity <span class="name">e2</span> was obtained from (say, for a function returning multiple results).</p>
+<p>With such a comprehensive description of derivation, a program that analyzes provenance can identify the activity underpinning the derivation, it can identify how the <span class="delete">original</span><span class="insert">preceding</span> entity <span class="name">e1</span> was used by  the activity (e.g. for instance, which argument it was passed as, if the activity is the result of a function invocation), and which output the derived entity <span class="name">e2</span> was obtained from (say, for a function returning multiple results).</p>
 </div>
 
 
@@ -2744,8 +3240,8 @@
   The implication here is that
      the resulting entity contains substantial content from the
      original.
-<span class="delete">Revision</span><span class="insert">A </span><dfn id="dfn-revision" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">revision</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-revision"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊</span></span></a></sup><span class="insert"> relation</span> is a particular case of<span class="insert"> a</span> <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of</span><span class="insert">relation between</span> an entity <span class="delete">into</span><span class="insert">and</span> its revised version.
-The type is of a revision derivation is denoted by:
+<span class="delete">Revision</span><span class="insert">A </span><dfn id="dfn-revision" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">revision</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-revision"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊</span></span></a></sup><span class="insert"> relation</span> is a <span class="delete">particular case</span><span class="insert">kind</span> of <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of an</span><span class="insert">relation from a revised</span> entity <span class="delete">into its revised version.</span><span class="insert">to a preceding  entity.</span>
+The type <span class="delete">is </span>of a revision <span class="delete">derivation</span><span class="insert">relation</span> is denoted by:
 <dfn title="dfn-prov:revision" id="dfn-prov:revision" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:Revision</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:revision"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.
 <span class="insert">PROV defines no revision-specific attributes.
 </span></p>
@@ -2782,8 +3278,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>A <dfn id="dfn-quotation" class="internalDFN">quotation</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-quotation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation
- is a particular case of<span class="insert"> a</span>  <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">in</span><span class="insert">relation, for</span> which an entity <span class="delete">is</span><span class="insert">was</span> derived from an original entity by copying, or "quoting", some or all of it.
-The type is of a quotation derivation is denoted by:
+ is a <span class="delete">particular case</span><span class="insert">kind</span> of  <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">in</span><span class="insert">relation, for</span> which an entity <span class="delete">is</span><span class="insert">was</span> derived from <span class="delete">an original</span><span class="insert">a preceding</span> entity by copying, or "quoting", some or all of it.
+The type <span class="delete">is </span>of a quotation <span class="delete">derivation</span><span class="insert">relation</span> is denoted by:
 <dfn title="dfn-prov:quotation" id="dfn-prov:quotation" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:Quotation</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:quotation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.<span class="insert">
 PROV defines no quotation-specific attributes.</span>
 </p>
@@ -2835,12 +3331,12 @@
 
 <p><span class="insert">It is also important to note that a given entity might be a primary source for one entity but not another. It the reason why Primary Source is defined as a relation as opposed to a subtype of Entity.</span></p>
 
-<p>A <dfn id="dfn-primary-source" class="internalDFN">primary source</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation is a particular case of <span class="insert">a </span><a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of</span><span class="insert">relation from</span>
+<p>A <dfn id="dfn-primary-source" class="internalDFN">primary source</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation is a <span class="delete">particular case of</span><span class="insert">kind of a</span> <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a> <span class="delete">of</span><span class="insert">relation from</span>
 secondary materials <span class="delete">from</span><span class="insert">to</span> their primary sources. It is recognized that
 the determination of primary sources can be up to interpretation, and
 should be done according to conventions accepted within the
 application's domain. 
-The type is of a  primary source derivation is denoted by:
+The type <span class="delete">is </span>of a  primary source <span class="delete">derivation</span><span class="insert">relation</span> is denoted by:
 <dfn title="dfn-prov:primary-source" id="dfn-prov:primary-source" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:PrimarySource</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov:primary-source"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>.<span class="insert">
 PROV defines no attributes specific to primary source.</span>
 </p>
@@ -2873,10 +3369,10 @@
 <div id="component3" class="section"> 
 <h3><span class="secno">5.3 </span>Component 3: Agents, Responsibility, and Influence</h3>
 
-<p>The second component of PROV-DM, depicted in  <a href="#figure-component3">Figure 7</a>, is concerned with <a title="agent" href="#concept-agent" class="internalDFN">agents</a> and the <span class="delete">notions of
+<p>The <span class="delete">second</span><span class="insert">third</span> component of PROV-DM, depicted in  <a href="#figure-component3">Figure 7</a>, is concerned with <a title="agent" href="#concept-agent" class="internalDFN">agents</a> and the <span class="delete">notions of
 </span><span class="insert">relations WasAttributedTo
 (</span><a href="#concept-attribution" class="internalDFN">Attribution</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">), WasAssociatedWith (</span><a href="#concept-activityAssociation" class="internalDFN">Association</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">), ActedOnBehalfOf (</span><a href="#concept-delegation" class="internalDFN">Delegation</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">),</span> relating agents to entities, activities, and agents, respectively.
- Core structures are displayed in the yellow area and include three classes and three binary associations. Outside the yellow area, extended structures comprise UML association classes to express expanded n-ary relations, and subclasses <a href="#concept-plan" class="internalDFN">Plan</a>, <a href="#concept-person" class="internalDFN">Person</a>, <a title="software-agent" href="#concept-software-agent" class="internalDFN">SofwareAgent</a>, and <a href="#concept-organization" class="internalDFN">Organization</a>. The subclasses are marked by the UML stereotype "prov:type" to indicate that that these are valid values for the attribute <a href="#term-attribute-type">prov:type</a>
+ Core structures are displayed in the yellow area and include three classes and three binary associations. Outside the yellow area, extended structures comprise UML association classes to express expanded n-ary relations, and subclasses <a href="#concept-plan" class="internalDFN">Plan</a>, <a href="#concept-person" class="internalDFN">Person</a>, <a title="software-agent" href="#concept-software-agent" class="internalDFN">SofwareAgent</a>, and <a href="#concept-organization" class="internalDFN">Organization</a>. The subclasses are marked by the UML stereotype "prov:type" to indicate that that these are valid values for the attribute <a href="#term-attribute-type">prov:type</a><span class="insert">.</span>
 </p>
 
 
@@ -2887,7 +3383,7 @@
 </span>
 </div>
 
-<p>Component 3 further defines a general notion of <a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">influence</a>, <span class="delete">as a super-relation of</span><span class="insert">a relation implied by</span> all relations defined so far. <a href="#figure-component3b">Figure 8</a> displays one new association class, generalizing previously introduced associations.</p>
+<p>Component 3 further defines a general notion of <a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">influence</a>, <span class="delete">as </span>a <span class="delete">super-relation of</span><span class="insert">relation implied by</span> all relations defined so far. <a href="#figure-component3b">Figure 8</a> displays one new association class, generalizing previously introduced associations.</p>
 
 
 <div style="text-align: center;">
@@ -2974,7 +3470,8 @@
 <p>
 Revisiting the example of 
 <a class="section-ref" href="#section-example-one"><span>Section 4.1</span></a>,
-we can ascribe <span class="name">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</span> to some agents without an explicit activity. The reserved attribute <span class="name">role</span> (see <a class="section-ref" href="#term-attribute-role"><span>Section 5.7.2.3</span></a>) allows for role of the agent in the attribution to be specified.
+we can ascribe <span class="name">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</span> to some agents without an explicit activity.<span class="delete"> The reserved attribute </span><span class="delete">role</span><span class="delete"> (see </span><span class="delete">Section 5.7.2.3</span><span class="delete">) allows for role of the agent in the attribution to be specified.
+</span> 
 </p><pre class="codeexample">agent(ex:Paolo, [ prov:type='prov:Person' ])
 agent(ex:Simon, [ prov:type='prov:Person' ])
 entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215, [ prov:type='rec54:WD' ])
@@ -3011,7 +3508,7 @@
 
 
 <div class="anexample" id="anexample-wasAssociatedWith"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">35</span><span class="insert">36</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-wasAssociatedWith"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
-<p>In the following example, a designer agent and an operator agent are associated with an activity. The designer's goals are achieved by a workflow <span class="name">ex:wf</span>, described as an an entity of type <span class="name"><a href="#concept-plan" class="internalDFN">plan</a></span>.   </p>
+<p>In the following example, a designer agent and an operator agent are associated with an activity. The designer's goals are achieved by a workflow <span class="name">ex:wf</span>, described as an <span class="delete">an </span>entity of type <span class="name"><a href="#concept-plan" class="internalDFN">plan</a></span>.   </p>
 <pre class="codeexample">activity(ex:a, [ prov:type="workflow execution" ])
 agent(ex:ag1,  [ prov:type="operator" ])
 agent(ex:ag2,  [ prov:type="designer" ])
@@ -3021,7 +3518,7 @@
                 ex:label="Workflow 1", 
                 prov:location="http://example.org/workflow1.bpel" %% xsd:anyURI ])
 </pre>
-Since the workflow <span class="name">ex:wf</span> is itself an entity, its provenance can also be expressed in PROV-DM: it can be generated by some activity and derived from other entities,
+Since the workflow <span class="name">ex:wf</span> is itself an entity, its provenance can also be expressed in <span class="delete">PROV-DM:</span><span class="insert">PROV:</span> it can be generated by some activity and derived from other entities,
 for instance.
 </div>
 
@@ -3048,7 +3545,7 @@
 <div class="glossary-ref">   <dfn id="concept-delegation" class="internalDFN">Delegation</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-delegation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is the assignment of authority and responsibility to an agent (by itself or by another agent)  to carry out a specific activity as a delegate or representative, while the agent it acts on behalf of retains some responsibility for the outcome of the delegated work. </div>
 
 <p>For example, a
-student acted on behalf of his supervisor, who acted on behalf of the
+student acted on behalf of his <span class="insert">or her </span>supervisor, who acted on behalf of the
 department chair, who acted on behalf of the university; all those
 agents are responsible in some way for the activity that took place but
 we do not say explicitly who bears responsibility and to what
@@ -3100,20 +3597,22 @@
 on  <span class="name">o1</span> that signifies some form of influence of <span class="name">o1</span> on <span class="name">o2</span>.</p>
 
 
-<p>A <dfn title="wasInfluencedBy" id="dfn-wasinfluencedby" class="internalDFN">Influence</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasinfluencedby"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation<span class="withPn">, written <span class="pnExpression">wasInfluencedBy(id; o2, o1, attrs)</span> in PROV-N,</span> has:</p>
+<p>
+</p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-influence">
+A <dfn title="wasInfluencedBy" id="dfn-wasinfluencedby" class="internalDFN">Influence</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-wasinfluencedby"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation<span class="withPn">, written <span class="pnExpression">wasInfluencedBy(id; o2, o1, attrs)</span> in PROV-N,</span> has:
 <ul>
 <li><span class="attribute" id="influence.id">id</span>:  an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier identifying the relation;</li> 
 <li><span class="attribute" id="influence.influencee">influencee</span>:  an identifier (<span class="name">o2</span>) for an entity, activity, or agent;
 </li><li><span class="attribute" id="influence.influencer">influencer</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">o1</span>) for an ancestor entity, activity, or agent that the former depends on;
 </li><li><span class="attribute" id="influence.attributes">attributes</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> set (<span class="name">attrs</span>) of attribute-value pairs representing additional information about this relation.</li>
-</ul>
+</ul></div>
 
 <p>
 <a href="#concept-usage" class="internalDFN">Usage</a>, <a href="#concept-start" class="internalDFN">start</a>, <a href="#concept-end" class="internalDFN">end</a>, <a href="#concept-generation" class="internalDFN">generation</a>, <a href="#concept-invalidation" class="internalDFN">invalidation</a>, <a href="#concept-communication" class="internalDFN">communication</a>, <a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">derivation</a>, <a href="#concept-attribution" class="internalDFN">attribution</a>, <a href="#concept-activityAssociation" class="internalDFN">association</a>, and <a href="#concept-delegation" class="internalDFN">delegation</a> are <span class="delete">particular cases of  influence.</span><span class="insert">also </span><a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">influence</span></a><span class="insert">.</span> It is <em class="rfc2119" title="recommended">recommended</em> to adopt these more specific relations when writing provenance descriptions. It is anticipated that the <a href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">Influence</a> relation may be useful to express queries over provenance information.
 </p>
 
 
-<div id="mapping-relations-to-influence-table" style="text-align: left;"><span class="insert">
+<div id="mapping-relations-to-influence-table_text" style="text-align: left;"><span class="insert">
 The following table establishes the correspondence between 
 the attributes </span><a class="attribute" href="#influence.influencee"><span class="insert">influencee</span></a><span class="insert"> and </span><a class="attribute" href="#influence.influencer"><span class="insert">influencer</span></a><span class="insert">, and attributes of
 </span><a href="#concept-usage" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">usage</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-start" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">start</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-end" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">end</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-generation" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">generation</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-invalidation" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">invalidation</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-communication" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">communication</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">derivation</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-attribution" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">attribution</span></a><span class="insert">, </span><a href="#concept-activityAssociation" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">association</span></a><span class="insert">, and </span><a href="#concept-delegation" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">delegation</span></a><span class="insert">.</span>
@@ -3144,7 +3643,7 @@
 </div>
 
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example_39"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">38</span><span class="insert">39</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_39"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="influence-example"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">38</span><span class="insert">39</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#influence-example"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>We refer to the example of <a class="section-ref" href="#section-example-two"><span>Section 4.2</span></a>, and specifically to <a href="#prov-a-document2-top">Figure 3</a>.
 We could have expressed that the influence of
 <span class="name">w3:Consortium</span> 
@@ -3325,9 +3824,9 @@
 
 
 <p>The fifth component of PROV-DM is concerned with
-relations <span class="insert">SpecializationOf (</span><a href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">specialization</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">), AlternateOf (</span><a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">alternate</a><span class="delete">,</span><span class="insert">),</span> and <span class="insert">MentionOf (</span><a href="#concept-mention" class="internalDFN">mention</a><span class="insert">)</span> between entities.
+relations <span class="insert">SpecializationOf (</span><a href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">specialization</a><span class="delete">, </span><span class="insert">) and AlternateOf (</span><a href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">alternate</a><span class="delete">, and </span><span class="delete">mention</span><span class="insert">)</span> between entities.
  <a href="#figure-component5">Figure 10</a> depicts
-the fifth component with a single class,  two binary associations, and a ternary association.
+the fifth component with a single <span class="delete">class,</span><span class="insert">class and</span>  two binary <span class="delete">associations, and a ternary association.</span><span class="insert">associations.</span>
 </p>
 
 
@@ -3344,7 +3843,7 @@
 <p>User Alice writes an article. In its provenance, she wishes to refer to the precise version of the article with a date-specific IRI, as she might edit the article later. Alternatively, user Bob refers to the article in general, independently of its variants over time.</p>
 </div>
 <p>
-The PROV data model introduces relations, called specialization, alternate, and mention
+The PROV data model introduces relations, called <span class="delete">specialization, alternate,</span><span class="insert">specialization</span> and <span class="delete">mention</span><span class="insert">alternate</span>
 that allow entities  to be linked together. They are defined as follows. </p>
 
 
@@ -3423,7 +3922,7 @@
 <p><span class="insert">
 Note that </span><a title="alternateOf" href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">alternateOf</span></a><span class="insert"> is a necessarily very general
 relationship that, in reasoning, only states that the two
-alternate entities fix different aspects of some common thing
+alternate entities respectively fix some aspects of some common thing
 (possibly evolving over time), and so there is some relevant
 connection between the provenance of the alternates. In a
 specific application context, </span><a title="alternateOf" href="#dfn-alternateof" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">alternateOf</span></a><span class="insert">, or a subtype of it,
@@ -3460,67 +3959,60 @@
 </div>
 
 
-<div id="term-mention" class="section">
-
-<h4><span class="secno">5.5.3 </span>Mention</h4>
-
-
-<div class="note">
-<p>This feature is "<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi">at risk</a>" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to [email protected]</p>
-<p>The "Mention" construct might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</p>
-</div>
-
-
-<p>An entity <span class="name">e1</span> may be mentioned in a bundle <span class="name">b</span>, which contains some
- descriptions about this entity <span class="name">e1</span>: how <span class="name">e1</span> was generated and used, which activities <span class="name">e1</span> is involved with, the agents <span class="name">e1</span> is attributed to, etc. Other bundles may contain other descriptions about the same entity <span class="name">e1</span>.
+
+
+<span class="delete">5.5.3 </span><span class="delete">Mention</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">This feature is "</span><span class="delete">at risk</span><span class="delete">" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to [email protected]</span>
+<span class="delete">The "Mention" construct might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">An entity </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> may be mentioned in a bundle </span><span class="delete">b</span><span class="delete">, which contains some
+ descriptions about this entity </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete">: how </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> was generated and used, which activities </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> is involved with, the agents </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> is attributed to, etc. Other bundles may contain other descriptions about the same entity </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete">.
 Some applications may want to interpret
-this entity <span class="name">e1</span> with respect to the descriptions found in the bundle <span class="name">b</span> it occurs in. To this end, PROV allows a new entity <span class="name">e2</span> to be created, which is a specialization of the original entity <span class="name">e1</span>, and which presents an additional aspect:  the bundle <span class="name">b</span> containing some descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span>.  With this relation, applications that process <span class="name">e2</span>
-can know that the attributes of <span class="name">e2</span> may have been computed according to the descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span> in <span class="name">b</span>.</p>
-
-
-
-<p>Thus, the following notion is a relation between two entities with regard to a bundle.
-It is a special case of specialization.</p> 
-
-
-<span class="glossary-ref">   The <dfn id="concept-mention" class="internalDFN">mention</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-mention"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> of an entity in a bundle (containing a description of this entity) is another entity that is a specialization of the former and that presents the bundle as a further additional aspect. </span>
-
-
-
-<p>
+this entity </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> with respect to the descriptions found in the bundle </span><span class="delete">b</span><span class="delete"> it occurs in. To this end, PROV allows a new entity </span><span class="delete">e2</span><span class="delete"> to be created, which is a specialization of the original entity </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete">, and which presents an additional aspect:  the bundle </span><span class="delete">b</span><span class="delete"> containing some descriptions of </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete">.  With this relation, applications that process </span><span class="delete">e2</span><span class="delete">
+can know that the attributes of </span><span class="delete">e2</span><span class="delete"> may have been computed according to the descriptions of </span><span class="delete">e1</span><span class="delete"> in </span><span class="delete">b</span><span class="delete">.</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">Thus, the following notion is a relation between two entities with regard to a bundle.
+It is a special case of specialization.</span> 
+
+
+<span class="delete">   The </span><span class="delete">mention</span><span class="delete"> ◊</span><span class="delete"> of an entity in a bundle (containing a description of this entity) is another entity that is a specialization of the former and that presents the bundle as a further additional aspect. </span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">
 An entity is interpreted with respect to a bundle's description in a
 domain specific manner.  The mention of this entity with respect to
 this bundle offers the opportunity to specialize it according to some
 domain-specific interpretation.
-</p>
-
-
-<p>A mention of an entity in a bundle results in a specialization of this entity with extra fixed aspects, including the  bundle that it is described in. 
-</p>
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-<p></p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-mention">A <dfn title="mentionOf" id="dfn-mentionof" class="internalDFN">mention</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-mentionof"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup>  relation<span class="withPn">, written <span class="pnExpression">mentionOf(infra, supra, b)</span> in PROV-N,</span> has:
-<ul>
-<li><span class="attribute" id="mention.specificEntity">specificEntity</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">infra</span>)
-of the entity that is a mention of the general entity (<span class="name">supra</span>);</li>
-<li><span class="attribute" id="mention.generalEntity">generalEntity</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">supra</span>) of the entity that is being mentioned.</li>
-<li><span class="attribute" id="mention.bundle">bundle</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">b</span>) of a bundle that contains a description of <span class="name">supra</span> and further constitutes one additional aspect presented by <span class="name">infra</span>.</li>
-</ul>
-</div>
-
-<p><span class="insert">Mention is not  defined as Influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</span></p>
-
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-mention-rating"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">45</span><span class="insert">46</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-mention-rating"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
-<p>This example is concerned with a performance rating tool that reads and processes provenance to determine the performance of agents.  To keep the example simple, an agent's performance is determined by the duration of the activities it is associated with. </p>
-<p>As an illustration, we consider that two bundles <span class="name">ex:run1</span> and <span class="name">ex:run2</span> refer to an agent <span class="name">ex:Bob</span> that controlled two activities <span class="name">ex:a1</span> and <span class="name">ex:a2</span>. </p>
-
-<pre class="codeexample">bundle ex:run1
+</span>
+
+
+<span class="delete">A mention of an entity in a bundle results in a specialization of this entity with extra fixed aspects, including the  bundle that it is described in. 
+</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">A </span><span class="delete">mention</span><span class="delete"> ◊</span><span class="delete">  relation</span><span class="delete">, written </span><span class="delete">mentionOf(infra, supra, b)</span><span class="delete"> in PROV-N,</span><span class="delete"> has:
+</span>
+<span class="delete">specificEntity</span><span class="delete">: an identifier (</span><span class="delete">infra</span><span class="delete">)
+of the entity that is a mention of the general entity (</span><span class="delete">supra</span><span class="delete">);</span>
+<span class="delete">generalEntity</span><span class="delete">: an identifier (</span><span class="delete">supra</span><span class="delete">) of the entity that is being mentioned.</span>
+<span class="delete">bundle</span><span class="delete">: an identifier (</span><span class="delete">b</span><span class="delete">) of a bundle that contains a description of </span><span class="delete">supra</span><span class="delete"> and further constitutes one additional aspect presented by </span><span class="delete">infra</span><span class="delete">.</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">Example 45</span><span class="delete"> ◊</span>
+<span class="delete">This example is concerned with a performance rating tool that reads and processes provenance to determine the performance of agents.  To keep the example simple, an agent's performance is determined by the duration of the activities it is associated with. </span>
+<span class="delete">As an illustration, we consider that two bundles </span><span class="delete">ex:run1</span><span class="delete"> and </span><span class="delete">ex:run2</span><span class="delete"> refer to an agent </span><span class="delete">ex:Bob</span><span class="delete"> that controlled two activities </span><span class="delete">ex:a1</span><span class="delete"> and </span><span class="delete">ex:a2</span><span class="delete">. </span>
+
+<span class="delete">bundle ex:run1
     activity(ex:a1, 2011-11-16T16:00:00, 2011-11-16T17:00:00)  //duration: 1hour
     wasAssociatedWith(ex:a1, ex:Bob, [prov:role="controller"])
 endBundle
@@ -3529,59 +4021,56 @@
     activity(ex:a2, 2011-11-17T10:00:00, 2011-11-17T17:00:00)  //duration: 7hours
     wasAssociatedWith(ex:a2, ex:Bob, [prov:role="controller"])
 endBundle
-</pre> 
-<p>The performance rating tool reads these bundles, and rates the performance of the agent described in these bundles. The performance rating tool creates a new bundle <span class="name">tool:analysis01</span> containing the following. A new agent <span class="name">tool:Bob-2011-11-16</span> is declared as a mention of <span class="name">ex:Bob</span> as described in  bundle <span class="name">ex:run1</span>, and likewise for  <span class="name">tool:Bob-2011-11-17</span> with respect to <span class="name">ex:run2</span>. The tool adds a domain-specific performance attribute to each of these specialized entities as follows: the performance of the agent in the first bundle is judged to be good since the duration of <span class="name">ex:a1</span> is one hour, whereas it is judged to be bad in the second bundle since <span class="name">ex:a2</span>'s duration is seven hours.
-
-</p><pre class="codeexample">bundle tool:analysis01
+</span> 
+<span class="delete">The performance rating tool reads these bundles, and rates the performance of the agent described in these bundles. The performance rating tool creates a new bundle </span><span class="delete">tool:analysis01</span><span class="delete"> containing the following. A new agent </span><span class="delete">tool:Bob-2011-11-16</span><span class="delete"> is declared as a mention of </span><span class="delete">ex:Bob</span><span class="delete"> as described in  bundle </span><span class="delete">ex:run1</span><span class="delete">, and likewise for  </span><span class="delete">tool:Bob-2011-11-17</span><span class="delete"> with respect to </span><span class="delete">ex:run2</span><span class="delete">. The tool adds a domain-specific performance attribute to each of these specialized entities as follows: the performance of the agent in the first bundle is judged to be good since the duration of </span><span class="delete">ex:a1</span><span class="delete"> is one hour, whereas it is judged to be bad in the second bundle since </span><span class="delete">ex:a2</span><span class="delete">'s duration is seven hours.
+
+</span><span class="delete">bundle tool:analysis01
     agent(tool:Bob-2011-11-16, [perf:rating="good"])
     mentionOf(tool:Bob-2011-11-16, ex:Bob, ex:run1)
 
     agent(tool:Bob-2011-11-17, [perf:rating="bad"])
     mentionOf(tool:Bob-2011-11-17, ex:Bob, ex:run2)
 endBundle
-</pre>
-</div>
-
-
-<div class="anexample" id="aexample-mention-viz"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">46</span><span class="insert">47</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#aexample-mention-viz"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
-<p>Consider the following bundle of descriptions, in which derivation and generations have been identified.
-</p><pre class="codeexample"> 
+</span>
+
+
+
+<span class="delete">Example 46</span><span class="delete"> ◊</span>
+<span class="delete">Consider the following bundle of descriptions, in which derivation and generations have been identified.
+</span><span class="delete"> 
 bundle obs:bundle1
-  entity(ex:report1, <span class="delete">[prov:type="report", ex:version=1])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type="report", ex:version=1 ])</span>
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; <span class="delete">ex:report1,-,2012-05-24T10:00:01)</span><span class="insert">ex:report1, -, 2012-05-24T10:00:01)</span>
-  entity(ex:report2, <span class="delete">[prov:type="report", ex:version=2])</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type="report", ex:version=2 ])</span>
-  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; <span class="delete">ex:report2,-,2012-05-25T11:00:01)</span><span class="insert">ex:report2, -, 2012-05-25T11:00:01)</span>
+  entity(ex:report1, [prov:type="report", ex:version=1])
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g1; ex:report1,-,2012-05-24T10:00:01)
+  entity(ex:report2, [prov:type="report", ex:version=2])
+  wasGeneratedBy(ex:g2; ex:report2,-,2012-05-25T11:00:01)
   wasDerivedFrom(ex:report2, ex:report1)
 endBundle
 entity(obs:bundle1, [ prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
 wasAttributedTo(obs:bundle1, ex:observer01)
-</pre>
-Bundle <span class="name">obs:bundle1</span> is rendered by a visualisation tool.  It may useful for the visualization layout of this bundle to be shared along with the provenance descriptions, so that other users can render provenance as it was originally rendered.  The original  bundle obviously cannot be changed. However, one can create a new bundle, as follows.
-<pre class="codeexample"> 
+</span><span class="delete">
+Bundle </span><span class="delete">obs:bundle1</span><span class="delete"> is rendered by a visualisation tool.  It may useful for the visualization layout of this bundle to be shared along with the provenance descriptions, so that other users can render provenance as it was originally rendered.  The original  bundle obviously cannot be changed. However, one can create a new bundle, as follows.
+</span><span class="delete"> 
 bundle tool:bundle2
   entity(tool:bundle2, [ prov:type='viz:Configuration', prov:type='prov:Bundle' ])
   wasAttributedTo(tool:bundle2, viz:Visualizer)
 
-  entity(tool:report1, <span class="delete">[viz:color="orange"])</span><span class="insert">[ viz:color="orange" ])</span>
+  entity(tool:report1, [viz:color="orange"])
   mentionOf(tool:report1, ex:report1, obs:bundle1)
 
-  entity(tool:report2, <span class="delete">[viz:color="blue"])</span><span class="insert">[ viz:color="blue" ])</span>              
+  entity(tool:report2, [viz:color="blue"])              
   mentionOf(tool:report2, ex:report2, obs:bundle1)
 endBundle
-</pre>
-
-<p>In bundle <span class="name">tool:bundle2</span>, the prefix <span class="name">viz</span> is used for naming visualisation-specific attributes, types or values.</p>
-
-<p>Bundle <span class="name">tool:bundle2</span> is given type <span class="name">viz:Configuration</span> to indicate that it consists of descriptions that pertain to the configuration of the visualisation tool. This type attribute can be used for searching bundles containing visualization-related descriptions.
-</p>
-
-<p>The visualisation tool
- created  new identifiers <span class="name">tool:report1</span> and
-<span class="name">tool:report2</span>.
-They denote entities which are specializations of <span class="name">ex:report1</span> and <span class="name">ex:report2</span>, described in bundle <span class="name">obs:bundle1</span>, with visualization attribute for the color to be used when rendering these entities.   </p>
-
-</div>
-
+</span>
+
+<span class="delete">In bundle </span><span class="delete">tool:bundle2</span><span class="delete">, the prefix </span><span class="delete">viz</span><span class="delete"> is used for naming visualisation-specific attributes, types or values.</span>
+
+<span class="delete">Bundle </span><span class="delete">tool:bundle2</span><span class="delete"> is given type </span><span class="delete">viz:Configuration</span><span class="delete"> to indicate that it consists of descriptions that pertain to the configuration of the visualisation tool. This type attribute can be used for searching bundles containing visualization-related descriptions.
+</span>
+
+<span class="delete">The visualisation tool
+ created  new identifiers </span><span class="delete">tool:report1</span><span class="delete"> and
+</span><span class="delete">tool:report2</span><span class="delete">.
+They denote entities which are specializations of </span><span class="delete">ex:report1</span><span class="delete"> and </span><span class="delete">ex:report2</span><span class="delete">, described in bundle </span><span class="delete">obs:bundle1</span><span class="delete">, with visualization attribute for the color to be used when rendering these entities.   </span>
 
 
 </div>
@@ -3594,7 +4083,7 @@
 
 
 
-</div>
+
 
 <div id="component6" class="section"> 
 <h3><span class="secno">5.6 </span>Component 6: Collections</h3>
@@ -3635,7 +4124,7 @@
 
 <p><span class="insert">PROV defines no collection-specific attributes.</span></p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example_48"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">47</span><span class="insert">48</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_48"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="example_46"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">47</span><span class="insert">46</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_46"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <pre class="codeexample">entity(c0, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection'</span> ])  // c0 is an empty collection
 entity(c1, <span class="delete">[prov:type='prov:Collection'</span><span class="insert">[ prov:type='prov:Collection'</span>  ])      // c1 is a collection, with unknown content
 </pre>
@@ -3669,7 +4158,7 @@
 <p><span class="insert">Membership is not  defined as Influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</span></p>
 
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example_49"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">48</span><span class="insert">49</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_49"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="example_47"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">48</span><span class="insert">47</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_47"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>In this example, <span class="name">c</span> is a collection known to have <span class="name">e0</span>, <span class="name">e1</span>, and <span class="name">e2</span> as members, and may have other members.</p>
 <pre class="codeexample">entity(e0)
 entity(e1)
@@ -3750,7 +4239,7 @@
 <span class="glossary-ref">    The attribute <dfn id="concept-label" title="label" class="internalDFN"><span class="name">prov:label</span></dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-label"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> provides a human-readable representation of an instance of a PROV-DM type or relation.   </span>
 The value associated with the attribute <span class="name">prov:label</span> <em class="rfc2119" title="must">must</em> be a string.</p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example_50"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">49</span><span class="insert">50</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_50"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="example_48"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">49</span><span class="insert">48</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_48"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>The following entity is provided with a label attribute.</p>
 <pre class="codeexample"> entity(ex:e1, [ prov:label="This is a human-readable label" ])
 </pre>
@@ -3776,7 +4265,7 @@
 
 <p><span class="insert">While the attribute </span><span class="name"><span class="insert">prov:location</span></span><span class="insert"> is allowed for several PROV concepts, it may not make sense to use it in some cases. For example, an activity that describes the relocation of an entity will have start and end locations, as well as every place in between those points.</span></p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example-location"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">50</span><span class="insert">51</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example-location"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="example-location"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">50</span><span class="insert">49</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example-location"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>The following expression describes entity Mona Lisa, a painting, with a location attribute. </p>
 <pre class="codeexample"> entity(ex:MonaLisa, [ prov:location="Le Louvre, Paris", prov:type="StillImage" ])
 </pre>
@@ -3797,7 +4286,7 @@
 <p>
 The attribute <span class="name">prov:role</span> is allowed to occur multiple times in a list of attribute-value pairs. The value associated with a <span class="name">prov:role</span> attribute <em class="rfc2119" title="must">must</em> be a PROV-DM <a title="value" href="#concept-value" class="internalDFN">Value</a>.</p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-role"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">51</span><span class="insert">52</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-role"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-role"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">51</span><span class="insert">50</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-role"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>The following activity is associated with an agent acting as the operator. </p>
 <pre class="codeexample"> wasAssociatedWith(a, ag, [ prov:role="operator" ])
 </pre>
@@ -3818,7 +4307,7 @@
 the value associated with a <span class="name">prov:type</span> attribute <em class="rfc2119" title="must">must</em> be a PROV-DM <a title="value" href="#concept-value" class="internalDFN">Value.</a> The attribute <span class="name">prov:type</span>
 is allowed to occur multiple times.</p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="example_53"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">52</span><span class="insert">53</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_53"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="example_51"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">52</span><span class="insert">51</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#example_51"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>The following describes an agent of type software agent.</p>
 <pre class="codeexample">   agent(ag, [ prov:type='prov:SoftwareAgent' ])
 </pre>
@@ -3855,7 +4344,7 @@
 
 <p>The attribute <span class="name">prov:value</span> is an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> attribute of entity.  The value associated with the  attribute <span class="name">prov:value</span> <em class="rfc2119" title="must">must</em> be a PROV-DM <a title="value" href="#concept-value" class="internalDFN">Value</a>. The attribute <span class="name">prov:value</span> <em class="rfc2119" title="may">may</em> occur at most once in a set of attribute-value pairs.</p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value1"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">53</span><span class="insert">54</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value1"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value1"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">53</span><span class="insert">52</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value1"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>The following example illustrates the provenance of the number <span class="name">4</span> obtained by an activity that computed the length of an input string <span class="name">"abcd"</span>.
 The input and the output are expressed as entities <span class="name">ex:in</span> and <span class="name">ex:out</span>, respectively. They each have a <span class="name">prov:value</span> attribute associated with the corresponding value.
 </p>
@@ -3875,8 +4364,8 @@
 different activities, as illustrated
 by the following example.</span></p>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value2"><div class="anexampleTitle"><span class="insert">Example 55</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value2"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊</span></span></a></sup></div>
-<p><a href="#anexample-value1" class="anexample-ref"><span><span class="insert">Example 54</span></span></a><span class="insert"> illustrates an entity with a given value
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value2"><div class="anexampleTitle"><span class="insert">Example 53</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value2"><span class="diamond"><span class="insert"> ◊</span></span></a></sup></div>
+<p><a href="#anexample-value1" class="anexample-ref"><span><span class="insert">Example 52</span></span></a><span class="insert"> illustrates an entity with a given value
  </span><span class="name"><span class="insert">4</span></span><span class="insert">. This examples shows that another entity with the same value may be computed differently (by an addition).
 </span></p>
 <pre class="codeexample"><span class="insert">entity(ex:in1, [ prov:value=3 ]) 
@@ -3921,6 +4410,10 @@
 
 
 
+
+
+
+
 <p id="conformance-to-rdf-datatypes"><b>Conformance to RDF Datatypes</b> As of the publication of this document, RDF 1.1 Concepts and Abstract Syntax [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-RDF-CONCEPTS11">RDF-CONCEPTS11</a></cite>] is not yet a <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Recommendation (see <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/">http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/</a> for the latest version). 
 Both the PROV Working Group and the RDF Working Group are confident that there will be only minor changes before it becomes a <acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Recommendation. In order to take advantage of the anticipated corrections and new features sooner, while also providing stability in case the specification does not advance as expected, conformance to PROV as it relates to RDF Datatypes is defined as follows:</p>
 
@@ -3941,7 +4434,14 @@
 
 
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">54</span><span class="insert">56</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+
+
+
+
+
+
+
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-value"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 54<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-value"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 The following examples respectively are the string "abc", the integer number 1, and the IRI "http://example.org/foo".
 </p><pre class="codeexample">  "abc"
@@ -3960,10 +4460,10 @@
 </pre>
 </div>
 
-<p>We note that PROV-DM <dfn title="time" id="dfn-time" class="internalDFN">time instants</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-time"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> are defined according to xsd:dateTime [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">XMLSCHEMA11-2</a></cite>].</p> 
-
-
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-time"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">55</span><span class="insert">57</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-time"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<p>We note that <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> <dfn title="time" id="dfn-time" class="internalDFN">time instants</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-time"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> are defined according to xsd:dateTime [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">XMLSCHEMA11-2</a></cite>].</p> 
+
+
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-time"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 55<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-time"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 In the following example, the generation time of entity <span class="name">e1</span> is expressed according to 
 <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/xmlschema11-2/#dateTime">xsd:dateTime</a>  [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">XMLSCHEMA11-2</a></cite>].</p>
@@ -3977,7 +4477,7 @@
 <div id="term-NamespaceDeclaration" class="section">
 <h4><span class="secno">5.7.4 </span>Namespace Declaration</h4>
 
-<p>A PROV-DM <dfn id="dfn-namespace" class="internalDFN">namespace</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-namespace"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is identified by an IRI [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-IRI">IRI</a></cite>]. In PROV-DM, attributes, identifiers, and values with <a title="qualified name" href="#concept-qualifiedName" class="internalDFN">qualified names</a> as data type can be placed in a namespace using the mechanisms described in this specification. </p>
+<p>A <span class="delete">PROV-DM </span><dfn id="dfn-namespace" class="internalDFN">namespace</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-namespace"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is identified by an IRI [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-IRI">IRI</a></cite>]. In PROV-DM, attributes, identifiers, and values with <a title="qualified name" href="#concept-qualifiedName" class="internalDFN">qualified names</a> as data type can be placed in a namespace using the mechanisms described in this specification. </p>
 
 
 <p>A <dfn id="dfn-namespaceDeclaration" class="internalDFN">namespace declaration</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-namespaceDeclaration"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> consists of a binding between a prefix and a namespace. Every qualified name with this prefix in the scope of this
@@ -3986,7 +4486,7 @@
 <p>A <dfn id="dfn-defaultNamespaceDeclaration" class="internalDFN">default namespace declaration</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-defaultNamespaceDeclaration"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> consists of a namespace. Every un-prefixed qualified name
 refers to default namespace declaration.</p>
 
-<p>The <dfn title="prov-namespace" id="dfn-prov-namespace" class="internalDFN">PROV namespace</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov-namespace"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is identified by the URI <a href="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#</a>.</p>
+<p>The <dfn title="prov-namespace" id="dfn-prov-namespace" class="internalDFN">PROV namespace</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-prov-namespace"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is identified by the <span class="delete">URI</span><span class="insert">IRI</span> <a href="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#</a>.</p>
 
 </div>
 
@@ -4027,7 +4527,7 @@
 <li>Sub-types and sub-relations can be expressed by means of the reserved attribute 
 <a href="#term-attribute-type"><span class="name">prov:type</span></a>.
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-sub-relation"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">56</span><span class="insert">58</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-sub-relation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-sub-relation"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 56<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-sub-relation"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 In the following example,  <span class="name">e2</span> is a translation of <span class="name">e1</span>,
 expressed as a sub-type of derivation.
@@ -4036,7 +4536,7 @@
 </pre>
 </div>
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-sub-type"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">57</span><span class="insert">59</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-sub-type"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-sub-type"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 57<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-sub-type"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 In the following example,  <span class="name">e</span> is described as a Car, a type of entity.
 </p><pre class="codeexample"> 
@@ -4052,7 +4552,7 @@
 <li>Application and domain specific roles can be expressed by means of the reserved attribute 
 <a href="#term-attribute-role"><span class="name">prov:role</span></a>.
 
-<div class="anexample" id="anexample-usage-with-role"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example <span class="delete">58</span><span class="insert">60</span><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-usage-with-role"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
+<div class="anexample" id="anexample-usage-with-role"><div class="anexampleTitle">Example 58<sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#anexample-usage-with-role"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup></div>
 <p>
 In the following example,  two computers  <span class="name">ex:laptop4</span> and <span class="name">ex:desktop9</span> are used in different roles in a work activity.
 </p><pre class="codeexample"> 
@@ -4095,8 +4595,8 @@
 thing to be expressed.  However, with this data model, it is also possible to compose
 descriptions that would not make sense: for instance, one could
 express that an entity was used before it was generated, or that the
-activity that generated an entity began its existence after the entity
-generation.  A set of constraints have been defined for PROV-DM and
+activity that generated an entity <span class="delete">began its existence</span><span class="insert">started</span> after the entity
+generation.  A set of constraints have been defined for <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> and
 can be found in a companion specification [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>].
 They <em class="rfc2119" title="should">should</em> be used by developers to compose provenance descriptions that are valid, and
 by implementers of reasoning engines aiming to check whether provenance descriptions have problems. </li>
@@ -4104,18 +4604,22 @@
 
 
 <li>
-<p> The example of <a href="#prov-dm-example">section 3</a> contains identifiers such as <span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111215">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</a></span>, which denotes a specific version of a technical report.  On the other hand, a URI such as <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a> denotes the latest version of a document. One needs to ensure that provenance descriptions for the latter resource remain valid as the resource state changes. </p>
-
-<p>To this end, PROV-DM allows asserters to describe "<em>partial states</em>" of entities by means of attributes and associated values. Some further constraints apply to the use of these attributes, since the values associated with them are expected to remain unchanged for some period of time. The constraints associated to attributes allow provenance descriptions to be refined, they can also be found in the companion specification [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>].</p>
+<p> The example of <a href="#prov-dm-example">section 3</a> contains identifiers such as <span class="name"><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-prov-dm-20111215">tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215</a></span>, which denotes a specific version of a technical report.  On the other hand, <span class="delete">a URI</span><span class="insert">an IRI</span> such as <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a> denotes the latest version of a document. One needs to ensure that provenance descriptions for the latter resource remain valid as the resource state changes. </p>
+
+<p>To this end, <span class="delete">PROV-DM</span><span class="insert">PROV</span> allows asserters to describe "<em>partial states</em>" of entities by means of attributes and associated values. Some further constraints apply to the use of these attributes, since the values associated with them are expected to remain unchanged for some period of time. The constraints associated to attributes allow provenance descriptions to be refined, they can also be found in the companion specification [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>].</p>
 
 
 </li>
 
 
-<li>
-<p>The idea of bundling provenance descriptions is crucial to the PROV approach. Indeed, it allows multiple provenance perspectives to be provided for a given entity. It is also the mechanism by which provenance of provenance can be expressed.
-Descriptions in bundles are expected to satisfy constraints specified in the companion specification [<cite><a class="bibref" rel="biblioentry" href="#bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a></cite>].</p>
-</li>
+
+<span class="delete">The idea of bundling provenance descriptions is crucial to the PROV approach. Indeed, it allows multiple provenance perspectives to be provided for a given entity. It is also the mechanism by which provenance of provenance can be expressed.
+Descriptions in bundles are expected to satisfy constraints specified in the companion specification [</span><span class="delete">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</span><span class="delete">].</span>
+
+
+
+
+
 
 
 </ul>
@@ -4139,50 +4643,50 @@
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Entity" href="#concept-entity" class="internalDFN">Entity</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Entity">Entity</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-entityExpression">entityExpression</a></code>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Entity">Entity</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-entityExpression">entityExpression</a></code>
 </td><td rowspan="8"><a href="#component1">Component 1:<br> Entities/Activities</a></td></tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Activity" href="#concept-activity" class="internalDFN">Activity</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Entity">Activity</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-activityExpression">activityExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Entity">Activity</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-activityExpression">activityExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Generation" href="#concept-generation" class="internalDFN">Generation</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasGeneratedBy">wasGeneratedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Generation">Generation</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-generationExpression">generationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasGeneratedBy">wasGeneratedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Generation">Generation</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-generationExpression">generationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Usage" href="#concept-usage" class="internalDFN">Usage</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#used">used</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Usage">Usage</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-usageExpression">usageExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#used">used</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Usage">Usage</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-usageExpression">usageExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Communication" href="#concept-communication" class="internalDFN">Communication</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasInformedBy">wasInformedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Communication">Communication</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-communicationExpression">communicationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasInformedBy">wasInformedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Communication">Communication</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-communicationExpression">communicationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Start" href="#concept-start" class="internalDFN">Start</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasStartedBy">wasStartedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Start">Start</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-startExpression">startExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasStartedBy">wasStartedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Start">Start</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-startExpression">startExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="End" href="#concept-end" class="internalDFN">End</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasEndedBy">wasEndedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#End">End</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-endExpression">endExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasEndedBy">wasEndedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#End">End</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-endExpression">endExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component1-color">
 <td><a title="Invalidation" href="#concept-invalidation" class="internalDFN">Invalidation</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasInvalidatedBy">wasInvalidatedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Invalidation">Invalidation</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-invalidationExpression">invalidationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasInvalidatedBy">wasInvalidatedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Invalidation">Invalidation</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-invalidationExpression">invalidationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td>
 </tr>
@@ -4191,26 +4695,26 @@
 
 <tr class="component2-color">
 <td><a title="Derivation" href="#concept-derivation" class="internalDFN">Derivation</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasDerivedFrom">wasDerivedFrom</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Derivation">Derivation</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-derivationExpression">derivationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasDerivedFrom">wasDerivedFrom</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Derivation">Derivation</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-derivationExpression">derivationExpression</a></code></td>
 <td rowspan="4"><a href="#component2">Component 2:<br> Derivations</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component2-color">
 <td class="provType"><a title="Revision" href="#concept-revision" class="internalDFN">Revision</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasRevisionOf">wasRevisionOf</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Revision">Revision</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Revision">Revision</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasRevisionOf">wasRevisionOf</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Revision">Revision</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Revision">Revision</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component2-color">
 <td class="provType"><a title="Quotation" href="#concept-quotation" class="internalDFN">Quotation</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasQuotedFrom">wasQuotedFrom</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Quotation">Quotation</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Quotation">Quotation</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasQuotedFrom">wasQuotedFrom</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Quotation">Quotation</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Quotation">Quotation</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component2-color"><td class="provType"><a title="Primary Source" href="#concept-primary-source" class="internalDFN">Primary Source</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#hadPrimarySource">hadPrimarySource</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Source">Source</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Primary-Source">PrimarySource</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#hadPrimarySource">hadPrimarySource</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Source">Source</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Primary-Source">PrimarySource</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td>
 </tr>
@@ -4219,57 +4723,57 @@
 
 <tr class="component3-color" style="border-collapse: collapse; ">
 <td><a title="Agent" href="#concept-agent" class="internalDFN">Agent</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Agent">Agent</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-agentExpression">agentExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Agent">Agent</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-agentExpression">agentExpression</a></code></td>
 <td rowspan="9"><a href="#component3">Component 3: <br>Agents, Responsibility, <br>Influence</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Attribution" href="#concept-attribution" class="internalDFN">Attribution</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasAttributedTo">wasAttributedTo</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Attribution">Attribution</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-attributionExpression">attributionExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasAttributedTo">wasAttributedTo</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Attribution">Attribution</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-attributionExpression">attributionExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Association" href="#concept-activityAssociation" class="internalDFN">Association</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasAssociatedWith">wasAssociatedWith</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Association">Association</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-associationExpression">associationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasAssociatedWith">wasAssociatedWith</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Association">Association</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-associationExpression">associationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Delegation" href="#concept-delegation" class="internalDFN">Delegation</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#actedOnBehalfOf">actedOnBehalfOf</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Delegation">Delegation</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-delegationExpression">delegationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#actedOnBehalfOf">actedOnBehalfOf</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Delegation">Delegation</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-delegationExpression">delegationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Plan" href="#concept-plan" class="internalDFN">Plan</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Plan">Plan</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Plan">Plan</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Plan">Plan</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Plan">Plan</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Person" href="#concept-person" class="internalDFN">Person</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Person">Person</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Person">Person</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Person">Person</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Person">Person</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Organization" href="#concept-organization" class="internalDFN">Organization</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Organization">Organization</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Organization">Organization</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Organization">Organization</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Organization">Organization</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="software-agent" href="#concept-software-agent" class="internalDFN">SoftwareAgent</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#SoftwareAgent">SoftwareAgent</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-SoftwareAgent">SoftwareAgent</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#SoftwareAgent">SoftwareAgent</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-SoftwareAgent">SoftwareAgent</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component3-color">
 <td><a title="Influence" href="#concept-influence" class="internalDFN">Influence</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#wasInfluencedBy">wasInfluencedBy</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Influence">Influence</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-influenceExpression">influenceExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#wasInfluencedBy">wasInfluencedBy</a>, <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Influence">Influence</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-influenceExpression">influenceExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td>
@@ -4279,14 +4783,14 @@
 
 <tr class="component4-color">
 <td><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">Bundle constructor</a></td>
-<td> <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#description-bundle">bundle description</a> </td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-namedBundle">namedBundle</a></code></td>
+<td> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#description-bundle">bundle description</a> </td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-namedBundle">namedBundle</a></code></td>
 <td rowspan="2"><a href="#component5">Component 4: <br> Bundles</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component4-color"><td class="provType"><a title="bundle" href="#concept-bundle" class="internalDFN">Bundle type</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Bundle">Bundle</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Bundle">Bundle</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Bundle">Bundle</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Bundle">Bundle</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td>
@@ -4294,56 +4798,59 @@
 
 <tr class="component5-color">
 <td><a title="Alternate" href="#concept-alternate" class="internalDFN">Alternate</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#alternateOf">alternateOf</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-alternateExpression">alternateExpression</a></code></td>
-<td rowspan="3"><a href="#component4">Component 5: <br> Alternate</a></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#alternateOf">alternateOf</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-alternateExpression">alternateExpression</a></code></td>
+<td rowspan="2"><a href="#component4">Component 5: <br> Alternate</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component5-color">
 <td><a title="Specialization" href="#concept-specialization" class="internalDFN">Specialization</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#specializationOf">specializationOf</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-specializationExpression">specializationExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#specializationOf">specializationOf</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-specializationExpression">specializationExpression</a></code></td>
 </tr>
 
-<tr class="component5-color">
-<td><a title="Mention" href="#concept-mention" class="internalDFN">Mention</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#mentionOf">mentionOf</a>, <a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#asInBundle">asInBundle</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-mentionExpression">mentionExpression</a></code></td>
-</tr> 
+
+<span class="delete">Mention</span>
+<span class="delete">mentionOf</span><span class="delete">, </span><span class="delete">asInBundle</span>
+<span class="delete">mentionExpression</span>
+ 
 <tr><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td><td style="border-width: 0px; "></td>
 </tr>
 
 
 
+
+
 <tr class="component6-color">
 <td><a title="Collection" href="#concept-collection" class="internalDFN">Collection</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#Collection">Collection</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-Collection">Collection</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#Collection">Collection</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-Collection">Collection</a></code></td>
 <td rowspan="3"><a href="#component6">Component 6: <br> Collections</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component6-color">
 <td><a title="Empty Collection" href="#concept-empty-collection" class="internalDFN">EmptyCollection</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#EmptyCollection">EmptyCollection</a></td>
-<td>type <code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#provn-type-EmptyCollection">EmptyCollection</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#EmptyCollection">EmptyCollection</a></td>
+<td>type <code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#provn-type-EmptyCollection">EmptyCollection</a></code></td>
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 <td><a title="Membership" href="#concept-membership" class="internalDFN">Membership</a></td>
-<td><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/ontology/last-call/2012-07-03-internal-review/Overview.html#hadMember">hadMember</a></td>
-<td><code><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html#prod-membershipExpression">membershipExpression</a></code></td>
+<td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-o-20120724/#hadMember">hadMember</a></td>
+<td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/#prod-membershipExpression">membershipExpression</a></code></td>
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 </tbody></table>
 </div>
 
 
+
 </div>
 
 <div class="appendix section" id="changes-since-last-version"> 
       <h2><span class="secno"><span class="insert">B. </span></span><span class="insert">Changes since last version</span></h2> 
-      <p> 
-
-</p><ul>
+      <p><span class="insert"> Please see the </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/ResponsesToPublicComments"><span class="insert">Responses to Public Comments on the Last Call Working Draft</span></a><span class="insert"> for more details about the justification of these changes.</span></p>
+
+<ul>
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/506"><span class="insert">ISSUE-506</span></a><span class="insert">: Updated role from author to contributor, in line with text.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/492"><span class="insert">ISSUE-492</span></a><span class="insert">: Fixed typos in  </span><a href="#anexample-invalidation3" class="anexample-ref"><span><span class="insert">Example 29</span></span></a><span class="insert">.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/508"><span class="insert">ISSUE-508</span></a><span class="insert">: Clarified the bold names and parameters  in  text preceding </span><a href="#prov-dm-types-and-relations-fig"><span class="insert">Table 5</span></a><span class="insert">.
@@ -4372,7 +4879,9 @@
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/526"><span class="insert">ISSUE-526</span></a><span class="insert">: Added sentence clarifying sentence in section 5.5.2.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/462"><span class="insert">ISSUE-462</span></a><span class="insert">: Added clarification regarding entity attributes (with respect to fixed aspects) and role of identifier with respect to equality.
 </span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/518"><span class="insert">ISSUE-518</span></a><span class="insert">: Added clarifying sentence of primary source.
-</span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/552"><span class="insert">ISSUE-552</span></a><span class="insert">: Clarifying phrasing around a quotation/revision/primary-source relation is a particular case of a derivation relation ...
+</span></li><li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/552"><span class="insert">ISSUE-552</span></a><span class="insert">: Clarifying phrasing around a quotation/revision/primary-source relation is a particular case of a derivation relation ...; updated definitions for start and end.
+</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Rephrased original entity to preceding entity.
+</span></li><li><span class="insert"> Moved feature at risk, Mention, to note document (prov-mention).
 </span></li></ul>
 
 </div>
@@ -4386,6 +4895,22 @@
       </p> 
 
 <p>
+<span class="insert">The editors acknowledge valuable contributions from the following:
+David Booth,
+Robert Freimuth,
+Satrajit Ghosh,
+Ralph Hodgson,
+Renato Iannella,
+Jacek Kopecky,
+James Leigh,
+Jacco van Ossenbruggen,
+Alan Ruttenberg,
+Reza Samavi, and
+Antoine Zimmermann.
+</span></p>
+
+
+<p>
 Members of the PROV Working Group at the time of publication of this document were:
 
 Ilkay Altintas (Invited expert),
@@ -4451,19 +4976,23 @@
 
  
 
-<div id="references" class="appendix section"><h2><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.</span><span class="insert">D.</span> </span>References</h2><div id="normative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.1</span><span class="insert">D.1</span> </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-IRI">[IRI]</dt><dd>M. Duerst, M. Suignard. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt"><cite>Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRI).</cite></a> January 2005. Internet RFC 3987. URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt</a> 
-</dd><dt id="bib-RDF-CONCEPTS">[RDF-CONCEPTS]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne; Jeremy J. Carroll. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210"><cite>Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax.</cite></a> 10 February 2004. W3C Recommendation. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210">http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210</a> 
+<div id="GOOGLE_INPUT_CHEXT_FLAG" style="display: none; "></div><div id="references" class="appendix section"><h2><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.</span><span class="insert">D.</span> </span>References</h2><div id="normative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.1</span><span class="insert">D.1</span> </span>Normative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-IRI">[IRI]</dt><dd>M. Duerst, M. Suignard. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt"><cite>Internationalized Resource Identifiers (IRI).</cite></a> January 2005. Internet RFC 3987. URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3987.txt</a> 
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS"><span class="insert">[PROV-CONSTRAINTS]</span></dt><dd><span class="insert">James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.), Tom De Nies. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/"><cite><span class="insert">Constraints of the PROV Data Model</span></cite></a><span class="insert">. 2012, Candidate Recommendation. URL: </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-constraints-20121211/</span></a><span class="insert">.
+</span></dd><dt id="bib-PROV-N"><span class="insert">[PROV-N]</span></dt><dd><span class="insert">Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/"><cite><span class="insert">PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</span></cite></a><span class="insert">. 2012, Candidate Recommendation. URL: </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/</span></a><span class="insert">.
+</span></dd><dt id="bib-PROV-O"><span class="insert">[PROV-O]</span></dt><dd><span class="insert">Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, Stephan Zednik, and Jun Zhao. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-o-20121211/"><cite><span class="insert">Provenance Formal Model</span></cite></a><span class="insert">. 2012, Candidate Recommendation. URL: </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-o-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-o-20121211/</span></a><span class="insert">.
+</span></dd><dt id="bib-RDF-CONCEPTS">[RDF-CONCEPTS]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne; Jeremy J. Carroll. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210"><cite>Resource Description Framework (RDF): Concepts and Abstract Syntax.</cite></a> 10 February 2004. W3C Recommendation. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210">http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-RFC2119">[RFC2119]</dt><dd>S. Bradner. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt"><cite>Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels.</cite></a> March 1997. Internet RFC 2119.  URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt</a> 
 </dd><dt id="bib-UML">[UML]</dt><dd>Object Management Group <a href="http://www.omg.org/spec/UML/2.0/Superstructure/PDF/"><cite>Unified Modeling Language: Superstructure</cite></a>. version 2.0, 2005 URL: <a href="http://www.omg.org/spec/UML/2.0/Superstructure/PDF/">http://www.omg.org/spec/UML/2.0/Superstructure/PDF/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-URI">[URI]</dt><dd>T. Berners-Lee; R. Fielding; L. Masinter. <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt"><cite>Uniform Resource Identifiers (URI): generic syntax.</cite></a> January 2005. Internet RFC 3986. URL: <a href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt</a> 
-</dd><dt id="bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">[XMLSCHEMA11-2]</dt><dd>Henry S. Thompson; et al. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/"><cite>W3C XML Schema Definition Language (XSD) 1.1 Part 2: Datatypes.</cite></a> 5 April 2012. W3C Recommendation URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/</a> 
+</dd><span class="delete">[URI]</span><span class="delete">T. Berners-Lee; R. Fielding; L. Masinter. </span><span class="delete">Uniform Resource Identifiers (URI): generic syntax.</span><span class="delete"> January 2005. Internet RFC 3986. URL: </span><span class="delete">http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3986.txt</span> 
+<dt id="bib-XMLSCHEMA11-2">[XMLSCHEMA11-2]</dt><dd>Henry S. Thompson; et al. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/"><cite>W3C XML Schema Definition Language (XSD) 1.1 Part 2: Datatypes.</cite></a> 5 April 2012. W3C Recommendation URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/REC-xmlschema11-2-20120405/</a> 
 </dd></dl></div><div id="informative-references" class="section"><h3><span class="secno"><span class="delete">C.2</span><span class="insert">D.2</span> </span>Informative references</h3><dl class="bibliography"><dt id="bib-Logic">[Logic]</dt><dd>W. E. Johnson <a href="http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html"><cite>Logic: Part III</cite></a>.1924. URL: <a href="http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html">http://www.ditext.com/johnson/intro-3.html</a>
 </dd><dt id="bib-Mappings">[Mappings]</dt><dd>Satya Sahoo and Paul Groth and Olaf Hartig and Simon Miles and Sam Coppens and James Myers and Yolanda Gil and Luc Moreau and Jun Zhao and Michael Panzer and Daniel Garijo <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings"><cite>Provenance Vocabulary Mappings</cite></a>. August 2010 URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings">http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/prov/wiki/Provenance_Vocabulary_Mappings</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-AQ">[PROV-AQ]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne and Paul Groth (eds.) Luc Moreau, Olaf Hartig, Yogesh Simmhan, James Meyers, Timothy Lebo, Khalid Belhajjame, and Simon Miles <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/"><cite>Provenance Access and Query</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-CONSTRAINTS">[PROV-CONSTRAINTS]</dt><dd>James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.) <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/"><cite>Constraints of the PROV Data Model</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-N">[PROV-N]</dt><dd>Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/"><cite>PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-O">[PROV-O]</dt><dd>Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/"><cite>Provenance Formal Model</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/</a>
-</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-PRIMER">[PROV-PRIMER]</dt><dd>Yolanda Gil and Simon Miles (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, Helena Deus, Daniel Garijo, Graham Klyne, Paolo Missier, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/"><cite>Prov Model Primer</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/</a>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-AQ">[PROV-AQ]</dt><dd>Graham Klyne and Paul Groth (eds.) Luc Moreau, Olaf Hartig, Yogesh Simmhan, James Meyers, Timothy Lebo, Khalid Belhajjame, and Simon <span class="delete">Miles </span><span class="insert">Miles. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-aq-20120619/"><cite>Provenance Access and Query</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-aq-20120619/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-aq-20120619/</span></a><span class="insert">.</span>
+</dd><span class="delete">[PROV-CONSTRAINTS]</span><dt id="bib-PROV-LAYOUT"><span class="insert">[PROV-LAYOUT]</span></dt><dd><span class="delete">James Cheney, Paolo Missier, and Luc Moreau (eds.) </span><span class="insert">W3C PROV Working Group. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/Diagrams/"><cite><span class="delete">Constraints of the </span>PROV <span class="delete">Data Model</span><span class="insert">Graph Layout Conventions</span></cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011, Working Draft.</span><span class="insert">2012.</span> URL: <span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/Diagrams/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/wiki/Diagrams/</span></a><span class="insert">.</span>
+</dd><span class="delete">[PROV-N]</span><dt id="bib-PROV-OVERVIEW"><span class="insert">[PROV-OVERVIEW]</span></dt><dd><span class="delete">Luc Moreau and Paolo Missier (eds.) James Cheney, Stian Soiland-Reyes </span><span class="insert">AUTHORS TBD. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-overview-20121211/"><cite><span class="delete">PROV-N:</span><span class="insert">PROV-OVERVIEW:</span> The <span class="delete">Provenance Notation</span><span class="insert">PROV Family of Documents</span></cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</span>
+<span class="delete">[PROV-O]</span><span class="delete">Timothy Lebo, Satya Sahoo and Deborah McGuinness (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, James Cheney, David Corsar, Daniel Garijo, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan Zednik </span><span class="delete">Provenance Formal Model</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-overview-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-overview-20121211/</span></a>.<span class="delete"> 2011, Working Draft. URL: </span><span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/</span>
+</dd><dt id="bib-PROV-PRIMER">[PROV-PRIMER]</dt><dd>Yolanda Gil and Simon Miles (eds.) Khalid Belhajjame, Helena Deus, Daniel Garijo, Graham Klyne, Paolo Missier, Stian Soiland-Reyes, and Stephan <span class="delete">Zednik </span><span class="insert">Zednik. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-primer-20121211/"><cite>Prov Model Primer</cite></a>. <span class="delete">2011,</span><span class="insert">2012,</span> Working Draft. URL: <span class="delete">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-primer-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-primer-20121211/</span></a><span class="insert">.
+</span></dd><dt id="bib-PROV-XML"><span class="insert">[PROV-XML]</span></dt><dd><span class="insert">Hook Hua, Curt Tilmes, and Stephan Zednik (eds.) Luc Moreau. </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-xml-20121211/"><cite><span class="insert">PROV-XML: The PROV XML Schema</span></cite></a><span class="insert">. 2012, Candidate Recommendation. URL: </span><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-xml-20121211/"><span class="insert">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-xml-20121211/</span></a><span class="insert">.</span>
 </dd><dt id="bib-RDF-CONCEPTS11">[RDF-CONCEPTS11]</dt><dd>Richard Cyganiak and David Wood (eds.) RDF 1.1 Concepts and Abstract Syntax <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/"><cite>RDF 1.1 Concepts and Abstract Syntax</cite></a>. URL: <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/">http://www.w3.org/TR/rdf11-concepts/</a>
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