implemented fixed identified by simon
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Tue, 23 Apr 2013 13:02:05 +0100
changeset 6254 680fc5bf24da
parent 6253 d4ba2a63f676
child 6255 7ac02b01eb44
implemented fixed identified by simon
model/prov-dm.html
--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Tue Apr 23 12:49:07 2013 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Tue Apr 23 13:02:05 2013 +0100
@@ -1414,7 +1414,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>There exist no
-prescriptive requirement on the nature of plans, their representation, the
+prescriptive requirements on the nature of plans, their representation, the
 actions or steps they consist of, or their intended goals.  Since plans may evolve over time,
 it may become necessary to track their provenance, so plans themselves are
 entities. Representing the plan explicitly in the provenance can be useful for various tasks: for example, to  
@@ -1529,7 +1529,7 @@
 <tr><td>2</td><td style="text-align: left;">Derivation</td><td>&#10004;</td><td><a href="#section-derivation">2.1.2</a></td><td><a href="#component2">5.2</a></td><td  style="text-align: left;">about derivation and its subtypes</td></tr> 
 <tr><td>3</td><td style="text-align: left;">Agent and Responsibility</td><td>&#10004;</td><td><a href="#section-agents-attribution-association-delegation">2.1.3</a></td><td><a href="#component3">5.3</a></td><td style="text-align: left;">about agents and concepts ascribing responsibility to them</td></tr> 
 <tr><td>4</td><td style="text-align: left;">Bundles</td><td></td><td><a href="#section-provenance-of-provnance">2.2.2</a></td><td><a href="#component4">5.4</a></td><td style="text-align: left;">about bundles, a mechanism to support provenance of provenance</td></tr> 
-<tr><td>5</td><td style="text-align: left;">Alternate</td><td></td><td>&mdash;</td><td><a href="#component5">5.5</a></td><td  style="text-align: left;">about relations linking entities referring the same thing</td></tr> 
+<tr><td>5</td><td style="text-align: left;">Alternate</td><td></td><td>&mdash;</td><td><a href="#component5">5.5</a></td><td  style="text-align: left;">about relations linking entities referring to the same thing</td></tr> 
 <tr><td>6</td><td style="text-align: left;">Collections</td><td></td><td><a href="#section-collections">2.2.3</a></td><td><a href="#component6">5.6</a></td><td style="text-align: left;">about collections</td></tr> 
 </table>
 </div>
@@ -1645,7 +1645,7 @@
 
 <li>There was an editing activity.
 <pre>
-activity(ex:edit1, [ prov:type="edit" ])
+activity(ex:edit1, [ prov:type="editing" ])
 </pre>
 </li>
 
@@ -2587,7 +2587,7 @@
 from which they were derived, so that their reliability can be
 investigated.</p>
 
-<p>It is also important to note that a given entity might be a primary source for one entity but not another. It the reason why Primary Source is defined as a relation as opposed to a subtype of Entity.</p>
+<p>It is also important to note that a given entity might be a primary source for one entity but not another. It is the reason why Primary Source is defined as a relation as opposed to a subtype of Entity.</p>
 
 <p>A <dfn>primary source</dfn> relation is a kind of a <a title="Derivation">derivation</a> relation from
 secondary materials to their primary sources. It is recognized that
@@ -2629,8 +2629,8 @@
 <h3>Component 3: Agents, Responsibility, and Influence</h3>
 
 <p>The third component of PROV-DM, depicted in  <a href="#figure-component3">Figure 7</a>, is concerned with <a title="Agent">agents</a> and the relations WasAttributedTo
-(<a>Attribution</a>), WasAssociatedWith (<a>Association</a>), ActedOnBehalfOf (<a>Delegation</a>), relating agents to entities, activities, and agents, respectively.
- Core structures are displayed in the yellow area and include three classes and three binary associations. Outside the yellow area, extended structures comprise UML association classes to express expanded n-ary relations, and subclasses <a>Plan</a>, <a>Person</a>, <a title="software-agent">SofwareAgent</a>, and <a>Organization</a>. The subclasses are marked by the UML stereotype "prov:type" to indicate that that these are valid values for the attribute <a href="#term-attribute-type">prov:type</a>.
+(<a>Attribution</a>), WasAssociatedWith (<a>Association</a>), and ActedOnBehalfOf (<a>Delegation</a>), relating agents to entities, activities, and agents, respectively.
+ Core structures are displayed in the yellow area and include three classes and three binary associations. Outside the yellow area, extended structures comprise UML association classes to express expanded n-ary relations, and subclasses <a>Plan</a>, <a>Person</a>, <a title="software-agent">SoftwareAgent</a>, and <a>Organization</a>. The subclasses are marked by the UML stereotype "prov:type" to indicate that that these are valid values for the attribute <a href="#term-attribute-type">prov:type</a>.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -2879,7 +2879,7 @@
 </ul></div>
 
 <p>
-A <a>Usage</a>, <a title="Start">start</a>, <a title="End">end</a>, <a title="Generation">generation</a>, <a title="Invalidation">invalidation</a>, <a title="Communication">communication</a>, <a title="Derivation">derivation</a>, <a title="Attribution">attribution</a>, <a title="Association">association</a>, and <a title="Delegation">delegation</a> is also an <a title="Influence">influence</a>. It is RECOMMENDED to adopt these more specific relations when writing provenance descriptions. It is anticipated that the <a>Influence</a> relation may be useful to express queries over provenance information.
+A <a title="Usage">usage</a>, <a title="Start">start</a>, <a title="End">end</a>, <a title="Generation">generation</a>, <a title="Invalidation">invalidation</a>, <a title="Communication">communication</a>, <a title="Derivation">derivation</a>, <a title="Attribution">attribution</a>, <a title="Association">association</a>, and <a title="Delegation">delegation</a> is also an <a title="Influence">influence</a>. It is RECOMMENDED to adopt these more specific relations when writing provenance descriptions. It is anticipated that the <a>Influence</a> relation may be useful to express queries over provenance information.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -3217,7 +3217,7 @@
 entity(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
 alternateOf(tr:WD-prov-dm-20111018, tr:WD-prov-dm-20111215)
 </pre>
-<p>They are both specialization of the page <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a>.</p>
+<p>They are both specializations of the page <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a>.</p>
 </div>
 
 </section>
@@ -3274,7 +3274,7 @@
 <section id="term-membership">
 <h3>Membership</h3>
 
-<p>A <strong>membership</strong> relation is defined the  members of a Collection to be stated. </p>
+<p>A <strong>membership</strong> relation is defined for stating the  members of a Collection. </p>
 
 <span class="glossary-ref" data-ref="glossary-membership"></span>
 
@@ -3898,7 +3898,7 @@
 <td><a title="Bundle">Bundle constructor</a></td>
 <td> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-prov-o-20130430/#description-bundle">bundle description</a> </td>
 <td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-prov-n-20130430/#prod-bundle">bundle</a></code></td>
-<td  rowspan="2"><a href="#component5">Component 4: <br> Bundles</a></td>
+<td  rowspan="2"><a href="#component4">Component 4: <br> Bundles</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component4-color"><td class="provType"><a title="Bundle Type">Bundle type</a></td>
@@ -3913,7 +3913,7 @@
 <td><a title="Alternate">Alternate</a></td>
 <td><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-prov-o-20130430/#alternateOf">alternateOf</a></td>
 <td><code><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/REC-prov-n-20130430/#prod-alternateExpression">alternateExpression</a></code></td>
-<td  rowspan="2"><a href="#component4">Component 5: <br> Alternate</a></td>
+<td  rowspan="2"><a href="#component5">Component 5: <br> Alternate</a></td>
 </tr>
 
 <tr class="component5-color">
@@ -3957,6 +3957,7 @@
 <li> Changed all URLs to  PROV documents.
 <li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/653">ISSUE-653</a>: Fixed typo in example to ensure compatibility with prov-n grammar.
 <li> Fixed capitalization in definition of software agent, organization, and person.
+<li> Fixed some typos and incorrect link.
 </ul>
 
 </section>