--- a/model/comments/issue-437-james.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:25 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-james.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:46 2012 -0400
@@ -30,8 +30,9 @@
> collection)"? This is what I thought we agreed at f2f3. We could
> also omit EmptyCollection and the completeness flag.
-TODO. Non alignment between prov-o and prov-dm.
+My understanding is that we were keeping previous definitions for
+collections, and moving dictionaries elsewhere.
>
--- a/model/comments/issue-437-jun.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:25 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-jun.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:46 2012 -0400
@@ -152,7 +152,8 @@
> - The narratives in this section are rather complex. But I am not
> going into details because it's marked as at risk at the moment.
-TODO
+Added an introduction
+
>
> 5.6.
>
--- a/model/comments/issue-437-satya.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:25 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-satya.txt Mon Jul 09 16:59:46 2012 -0400
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
> physical activities."
>
-TODO
+I kept the same form, to parallel what we say for entities.
> As Example 2 already describes the information processing activity and
> driving of car from Boston to Cambridge.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
> tapping issue (it is very country specific)
>
-TODO
+I didn't think this was country specific. Do you have another example?
> Section 5.1.6
> 1. Start: By defining all the attributes except Activity (being
@@ -107,11 +107,10 @@
The text says:
"A bundle constructor allows the content and the name of a bundle to be specified;"
-Can you explain what the issue is? Is it a question of naming? Or is the idea
+Can you explain what the issue is? Is it a question of naming? Or is the issue
that we want to express the content and name?
-
>
> Section 5.4.2
> 1. Suggest that in example 39, the assertion
--- a/model/diff.html Mon Jul 09 16:59:25 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/diff.html Mon Jul 09 16:59:46 2012 -0400
@@ -521,7 +521,7 @@
pre.sh_sourceCode .sh_paren { color: red; }
pre.sh_sourceCode .sh_attribute { color: #006400; }
-</style><style type="text/css">
+</style><span class="delete">
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background-color: rgba(255,42,42,0.2);
@@ -971,7 +971,7 @@
font-size:120%;
font-family: monospace;
}
-</style><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head>
+</span><link href="./extra-dm.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head>
<body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="subtitle">Final review before Last Call Vote (WD6) (<a href="diff.html">Diffs since last release</a>)</h2><h2 id="w3c-editor-s-draft-09-july-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Editor's Draft <span class="delete">28 June</span><span class="insert">09 July</span> 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</a></dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
<dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
<dt>Authors:</dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
@@ -1316,7 +1316,7 @@
information processing activities
may for example move, copy, or duplicate digital entities;
physical activities can include
- driving a car from Boston to Cambridge.
+ driving a car from Boston to <span class="delete">Cambridge.</span><span class="insert">Cambridge or printing a book.</span>
</p>
@@ -2092,7 +2092,7 @@
<tr class="component6-color"><td class="provType"><a href="#concept-collection" class="internalDFN">Collection</a></td><td><a title="collection" href="#concept-collection" class="internalDFN">... prov:type='prov:Collection' ...</a></td><td rowspan="3"><a href="#component6">Component 6: Collections</a></td></tr>
<tr class="component6-color"><td class="provType"><a title="empty collection" href="#concept-empty-collection" class="internalDFN">EmptyCollection</a></td><td><a title="empty collection" href="#concept-empty-collection" class="internalDFN">... prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection' ...</a></td></tr>
-<tr class="component6-color"><td><a href="#concept-collection-membership" class="internalDFN">Collection Membership</a></td><td><a title="memberOf" href="#dfn-memberof" class="internalDFN">memberOf(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</a></td></tr>
+<tr class="component6-color"><td><a href="#concept-collection-membership" class="internalDFN">Collection Membership</a></td><td><span class="delete">memberOf(id;</span><a title="hadMembers" href="#dfn-hadmembers" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">hadMembers(id;</span> c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</a></td></tr>
</tbody></table>
</div>
@@ -2233,7 +2233,7 @@
<div id="term-Usage" class="section">
<h4><span class="secno">5.1.4 </span>Usage</h4>
-<div class="glossary-ref"> <dfn id="concept-usage" class="internalDFN">Usage</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-usage"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is the beginning of utilizing an entity by an activity. Before usage, the activity had not begun to utilize this entity and could not have been affected by the entity. </div>
+<p><span class="glossary-ref"> <dfn id="concept-usage" class="internalDFN">Usage</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#concept-usage"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> is the beginning of utilizing an entity by an activity. Before usage, the activity had not begun to utilize this entity and could not have been affected by the entity. </span><span class="insert"> (Note: This definition is formulated for a given usage; it is permitted for an activity to have used a same entity multiple times.)</span></p>
<p></p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-usage"><dfn title="used" id="dfn-used" class="internalDFN">Usage</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-used"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup><span class="withPn">, written <span class="pnExpression">used(id; a, e, t, attrs)</span> in PROV-N,</span> has:
@@ -2466,14 +2466,14 @@
<a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-17595024">bbc:news/uk-17595024</a>,
but the BBC news home page on the next day did not.
</p><pre class="codeexample">entity(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03)
-memberOf(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, {bbc:news/uk-17595024})
+<span class="delete">memberOf(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03,</span><span class="insert">hadMembers(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03,</span> {bbc:news/uk-17595024})
wasGeneratedBy (ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, -, 2012-04-03T00:00:01)
wasInvalidatedBy(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, -, 2012-04-03T23:59:59)
</pre>
We refer to example
<a href="#anexample-specialization" class="anexample-ref"><span>Example 42</span></a>
- for further descriptions of the BBC Web site, and to <a href="#term-collection-membership">Section 5.6.2</a> for a description of the relation <a title="memberOf" href="#dfn-memberof" class="internalDFN">memberOf</a>.
+ for further descriptions of the BBC Web site, and to <a href="#term-collection-membership">Section 5.6.2</a> for a description of the relation <span class="delete">memberOf</span><a title="hadMembers" href="#dfn-hadmembers" class="internalDFN"><span class="insert">hadMembers</span></a>.
</div>
@@ -3009,7 +3009,7 @@
<p>A bundle's identifier <span class="name">id</span> identifies a unique set of descriptions.</p>
</div>
-<p>There may be other kinds of bundles not directly expressible by this constructor, such as <span class="delete">napkin,</span><span class="insert">provenance descriptions handwritten on a letter or a</span> whiteboard, etc. What ever the means by which bundles are expressed, all can be described, as in the following section.</p>
+<p>There may be other kinds of bundles not directly expressible by this constructor, such as <span class="delete">napkin,</span><span class="insert">provenance descriptions handwritten on a letter or a</span> whiteboard, etc. <span class="delete">What ever</span><span class="insert">Whatever</span> the means by which bundles are expressed, all can be described, as in the following section.</p>
</div>
@@ -3243,7 +3243,7 @@
<div class="note">
-<p><span class="insert">Note: </span>This <span class="insert">feature is "</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi"><span class="insert">at risk</span></a><span class="insert">" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to public-prov-comments@w3.org.</span></p>
+<p>This <span class="insert">feature is "</span><a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi"><span class="insert">at risk</span></a><span class="insert">" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to public-prov-comments@w3.org.</span></p>
<p><span class="insert">The "Mention" </span>construct <span class="delete">is a </span><span class="delete">FEATURE AT RISK</span><span class="delete">.
</span><span class="insert">might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</span></p>
</div>
@@ -3417,8 +3417,8 @@
<p>
-</p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-memberOf">
- A <dfn title="memberOf" id="dfn-memberof" class="internalDFN">membership</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-memberof"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation, written <span class="pnExpression">memberOf(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</span>, has:
+</p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-hadMembers">
+ A <dfn title="hadMembers" id="dfn-hadmembers" class="internalDFN">membership</dfn><sup><a class="internalDFN" href="#dfn-hadmembers"><span class="diamond"> ◊</span></a></sup> relation, written <span class="pnExpression"><span class="delete">memberOf(id;</span><span class="insert">hadMembers(id;</span> c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</span>, has:
<ul>
<li><span class="attribute" id="membership.id">id</span>: an <em class="rfc2119" title="optional">optional</em> identifier identifying the relation;</li>
<li><span class="attribute" id="membership.collection">collection</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">c</span>) for the collection whose members are asserted; </li>
@@ -3438,7 +3438,7 @@
</div>
<p id="complete-attribute-note">
-Note that the attribute <a href="#membership.complete">complete</a> indicates that the <a title="memberOf" href="#dfn-memberof" class="internalDFN">membership</a> relation provides a complete description of the collection membership. It is possible for different provenance descriptions to provide different membership statements regarding the same collection. The resolution of any potential conflict amongst such membership statements is defined by applications.</p>
+Note that the attribute <a href="#membership.complete">complete</a> indicates that the <a title="hadMembers" href="#dfn-hadmembers" class="internalDFN">membership</a> relation provides a complete description of the collection membership. It is possible for different provenance descriptions to provide different membership statements regarding the same collection. The resolution of any potential conflict amongst such membership statements is defined by applications.</p>
</div>
--- a/model/prov-dm.html Mon Jul 09 16:59:25 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html Mon Jul 09 16:59:46 2012 -0400
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@
information processing activities
may for example move, copy, or duplicate digital entities;
physical activities can include
- driving a car from Boston to Cambridge.
+ driving a car from Boston to Cambridge or printing a book.
</p>
@@ -1545,7 +1545,7 @@
<tr class="component6-color"><td class="provType"><a>Collection</a></td><td><a title="collection">... prov:type='prov:Collection' ...</a></td><td rowspan="3"><a href="#component6">Component 6: Collections</a></td></tr>
<tr class="component6-color"><td class="provType"><a title="empty collection">EmptyCollection</a></td><td><a title="empty collection">... prov:type='prov:EmptyCollection' ...</a></td></tr>
-<tr class="component6-color"><td><a>Collection Membership</a></td><td><a title="memberOf">memberOf(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</a></td></tr>
+<tr class="component6-color"><td><a>Collection Membership</a></td><td><a title="hadMembers">hadMembers(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</a></td></tr>
</table>
</div>
@@ -1701,7 +1701,7 @@
<section id="term-Usage">
<h3>Usage</h3>
-<div class="glossary-ref" data-ref="glossary-usage"></div>
+<p><span class="glossary-ref" data-ref="glossary-usage"></span> (Note: This definition is formulated for a given usage; it is permitted for an activity to have used a same entity multiple times.)</p>
<p><div class="attributes" id="attributes-usage"><dfn title="used">Usage</dfn><span class="withPn">, written <span class="pnExpression">used(id; a, e, t, attrs)</span> in PROV-N,</span> has:
@@ -1947,14 +1947,14 @@
but the BBC news home page on the next day did not.
<pre class="codeexample">
entity(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03)
-memberOf(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, {bbc:news/uk-17595024})
+hadMembers(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, {bbc:news/uk-17595024})
wasGeneratedBy (ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, -, 2012-04-03T00:00:01)
wasInvalidatedBy(ex:bbcNews2012-04-03, -, 2012-04-03T23:59:59)
</pre>
We refer to example
<a href="#anexample-specialization" class="anexample-ref"><span>Example REF</span></a>
- for further descriptions of the BBC Web site, and to <a href="#term-collection-membership">Section 5.6.2</a> for a description of the relation <a title="memberOf">memberOf</a>.
+ for further descriptions of the BBC Web site, and to <a href="#term-collection-membership">Section 5.6.2</a> for a description of the relation <a title="hadMembers">hadMembers</a>.
</div>
@@ -2535,7 +2535,7 @@
<p>A bundle's identifier <span class="name">id</span> identifies a unique set of descriptions.</p>
</div>
-<p>There may be other kinds of bundles not directly expressible by this constructor, such as provenance descriptions handwritten on a letter or a whiteboard, etc. What ever the means by which bundles are expressed, all can be described, as in the following section.</p>
+<p>There may be other kinds of bundles not directly expressible by this constructor, such as provenance descriptions handwritten on a letter or a whiteboard, etc. Whatever the means by which bundles are expressed, all can be described, as in the following section.</p>
</section>
@@ -2906,7 +2906,7 @@
<div class="note">
-<p>Note: This feature is "<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi">at risk</a>" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to public-prov-comments@w3.org.</p>
+<p>This feature is "<a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi">at risk</a>" and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to public-prov-comments@w3.org.</p>
<p>The "Mention" construct might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</p>
</div>
@@ -3186,8 +3186,8 @@
<p>
-<div class="attributes" id="attributes-memberOf">
- A <dfn title="memberOf">membership</dfn> relation, written <span class="pnExpression">memberOf(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</span>, has:
+<div class="attributes" id="attributes-hadMembers">
+ A <dfn title="hadMembers">membership</dfn> relation, written <span class="pnExpression">hadMembers(id; c, {e_1, ..., e_n}, cplt, attrs)</span>, has:
<ul>
<li><span class='attribute' id="membership.id">id</span>: an OPTIONAL identifier identifying the relation;</li>
<li><span class='attribute' id="membership.collection">collection</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">c</span>) for the collection whose members are asserted; </li>
@@ -3206,7 +3206,7 @@
</div>
<p id="complete-attribute-note">
-Note that the attribute <a href="#membership.complete">complete</a> indicates that the <a title="memberOf">membership</a> relation provides a complete description of the collection membership. It is possible for different provenance descriptions to provide different membership statements regarding the same collection. The resolution of any potential conflict amongst such membership statements is defined by applications.</p>
+Note that the attribute <a href="#membership.complete">complete</a> indicates that the <a title="hadMembers">membership</a> relation provides a complete description of the collection membership. It is possible for different provenance descriptions to provide different membership statements regarding the same collection. The resolution of any potential conflict amongst such membership statements is defined by applications.</p>
</section>