simon's comments
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Thu, 22 Nov 2012 21:21:19 +0000
changeset 4935 567c1318c375
parent 4934 7f46eddc8b07
child 4936 beac6b568c21
simon's comments
model/prov-dm.html
--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Thu Nov 22 19:59:30 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Thu Nov 22 21:21:19 2012 +0000
@@ -3447,7 +3447,7 @@
 </ul></div>
 
 <p>
-<a>Usage</a>, <a>start</a>, <a>end</a>, <a>generation</a>, <a>invalidation</a>, <a>communication</a>, <a>derivation</a>, <a>attribution</a>, <a>association</a>, and <a>delegation</a> are also <a>influence</a>. It is RECOMMENDED to adopt these more specific relations when writing provenance descriptions. It is anticipated that the <a>Influence</a> relation may be useful to express queries over provenance information.
+A <a>Usage</a>, <a>start</a>, <a>end</a>, <a>generation</a>, <a>invalidation</a>, <a>communication</a>, <a>derivation</a>, <a>attribution</a>, <a>association</a>, and <a>delegation</a> is also an <a>influence</a>. It is RECOMMENDED to adopt these more specific relations when writing provenance descriptions. It is anticipated that the <a>Influence</a> relation may be useful to express queries over provenance information.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -3708,7 +3708,7 @@
 </ul>
 </div>
 
-<p>Specialization is not  defined as Influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>
+<p>A specialization is not, as  defined here, also an influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>
 
 
 
@@ -3747,7 +3747,7 @@
 </ul>
 </div>
 
-<p>Alternate is not  defined as Influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>  
+<p>An alternate is not, as  defined  here, also an influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>  
 
 <p>
 Note that <a title="alternateOf">alternateOf</a> is a necessarily very general
@@ -3857,7 +3857,7 @@
 </div>
 
 
-<p>Membership is not  defined as Influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>
+<p>Membership is not, as defined here, also an influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>
 
 
 <div class="anexample" >