Listed new version changes at end of primer.
authorSimon Miles <simon.miles@kcl.ac.uk>
Sun, 30 Sep 2012 18:50:28 +0100
changeset 4500 49fdf67c7820
parent 4499 c74501d2d4fe
child 4501 dcb14db2788f
Listed new version changes at end of primer.
primer/Primer.html
primer/WD-prov-primer-next/Overview.html
--- a/primer/Primer.html	Sun Sep 30 18:43:48 2012 +0100
+++ b/primer/Primer.html	Sun Sep 30 18:50:28 2012 +0100
@@ -1234,14 +1234,11 @@
  </section>
 
  <section class="appendix"> 
-  <h2>Changes Since Second Public Working Draft</h2> 
+  <h2>Changes Since Third Public Working Draft</h2> 
   <ul>
-   <li>Added selection between Turtle and PROV-N examples with supporting text.</li>
-   <li>Removed PROV-N appendix.</li>
-   <li>Removed reference to accounts, using bundles instead.</li>
-   <li>Scaled the width of wide figures to aid printing.</li>
-   <li>Used generatedAtTime rather than qualified PROV-O.</li>
-   <li>Many clarifications and improvements throughout the text.</li>
+   <li>Corrected mailing list address for public comments.</li>
+   <li>Fixed the status to clarify this is a note, not a recommendation.</li>
+   <li>Fixed minor typos.</li>
   </ul>
  </section>
 
--- a/primer/WD-prov-primer-next/Overview.html	Sun Sep 30 18:43:48 2012 +0100
+++ b/primer/WD-prov-primer-next/Overview.html	Sun Sep 30 18:50:28 2012 +0100
@@ -1545,14 +1545,11 @@
  <div class="appendix section" id="changes-since-second-public-working-draft"> 
   
 <!-- OddPage -->
-<h2><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes Since Second Public Working Draft</h2> 
+<h2><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes Since Third Public Working Draft</h2> 
   <ul>
-   <li>Added selection between Turtle and PROV-N examples with supporting text.</li>
-   <li>Removed PROV-N appendix.</li>
-   <li>Removed reference to accounts, using bundles instead.</li>
-   <li>Scaled the width of wide figures to aid printing.</li>
-   <li>Used generatedAtTime rather than qualified PROV-O.</li>
-   <li>Many clarifications and improvements throughout the text.</li>
+   <li>Corrected mailing list address for public comments.</li>
+   <li>Fixed the status to clarify this is a note, not a recommendation.</li>
+   <li>Fixed minor typos.</li>
   </ul>
  </div>