edited definition of start
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Sun, 04 Nov 2012 13:18:05 +0000
changeset 4630 38d5d16a9bed
parent 4629 b6c6896623ec
child 4631 2ccd3eed53ff
edited definition of start
model/glossary.html
model/glossary.js
--- a/model/glossary.html	Sun Nov 04 13:13:53 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/glossary.html	Sun Nov 04 13:18:05 2012 +0000
@@ -151,9 +151,9 @@
 </span>
 
 <span class="glossary" id="glossary-start">  
-<dfn id="concept-start">Start</dfn> is when an activity is deemed to have started.
+<dfn id="concept-start">Start</dfn> is when an activity is deemed to have been started by an an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger">trigger</dfn>.
  The activity did not exist before its start. Any usage or generation involving an activity follows the activity's start.
-A start may refer to an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger">trigger</dfn>, that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter">starter</dfn>, that generated the trigger.
+A start may refer to a trigger entity that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter">starter</dfn>, that generated the trigger.
 </span>
 
 
--- a/model/glossary.js	Sun Nov 04 13:13:53 2012 +0000
+++ b/model/glossary.js	Sun Nov 04 13:18:05 2012 +0000
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //  with <script src="glossary.js" class="remove"></script>
 //Insert glossary definitions with the following 
 // <div class="glossary-ref" ref="glossary-generation"></div>
-glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file/458418092b96/model/glossary.html';
+glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file/b6c6896623ec/model/glossary.html';
 glossary_string= 
 ' ' + 
 '<html> ' + 
@@ -158,9 +158,9 @@
 '</span> ' + 
 ' ' + 
 '<span class="glossary" id="glossary-start">   ' + 
-'<dfn id="concept-start">Start</dfn> is when an activity is deemed to have started. ' + 
+'<dfn id="concept-start">Start</dfn> is when an activity is deemed to have been started by an an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger">trigger</dfn>. ' + 
 ' The activity did not exist before its start. Any usage or generation involving an activity follows the activity\'s start. ' + 
-'A start may refer to an entity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-trigger">trigger</dfn>, that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter">starter</dfn>, that generated the trigger. ' + 
+'A start may refer to a trigger entity that set off the activity, or to an activity, known as <dfn id="concept-start-starter">starter</dfn>, that generated the trigger. ' + 
 '</span> ' + 
 ' ' + 
 ' ' +