--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html Thu Jul 26 03:50:24 2012 +0200
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html Thu Jul 26 04:19:19 2012 +0200
@@ -102,7 +102,8 @@
<p>
Agent <code>ex:derek</code>, acting again on behalf of the <code>:national_newspaper_inc</code> organization,
- published a post about his recent changes to the aggregated file (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>) using the tool <code>ex:postEditor</code>. Since he was the one who started and ended the publishing activity (<code>ex:publicationActivity1123</code>), that information
+ published a post about his recent changes to the aggregated file (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>) using the tool <code>ex:postEditor</code> (which was included in a user action tracking system compliant to PROV)
+ . Since he was the one who started and ended the publishing activity (<code>ex:publicationActivity1123</code>), that information
was recorded as well. The post produced by <code>ex:derek</code> (<code>ex:post9821v1</code>) included a permanent link where the content of the latest version is shown
(<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also added additional metadata of the post, like the title.
</p>
@@ -129,7 +130,8 @@
<div id="narrative-example-expanded-1-a" about="#narrative-example-expanded-1-a" typeof="prov:Entity" class="exampleOuter" xmlns:prov="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">
<p>Shortly after Derek's post publication, Monica adapted the text for a wider audience in a new post (<code>ex:post9822</code>). This version was a specialization of the original post,
and an alternate of the version modified by Derek. Since the provenance produced by the activities of Derek and Monica corresponded to different user views, the system
- automatically published it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundle</a>s (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>).
+ automatically published it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundles</a> (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>). The system also tagged them as the topic of
+ the bundle (so as to be able to locate easily their actions) and added additional metadata, such as the date of creation of the bundle or the creator.
</p>
<p>
<a href="#narrative-example-expanded-1-a"/>Example 3</a>:
@@ -152,7 +154,7 @@
Agent <code>ex:John</code> also named the URI of the original source (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>). All the provenance statements related to his post
are grouped in a new <span class="repeated">prov:Bundle</span> (<code>ex:bundlePost2</code>).
- Unfortunately, there was a problem in the servers where <code>:post19201</code> was being stored, and all the data related to the post was lost. Thus, the system
+ Unfortunately, there was a problem in the servers where <code>:post19201</code> was being stored, and all the data related to the post was lost permanently. Thus, the system
invalidated the entity automatically and notified John about the error.
</p>