section 4
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Thu, 04 Aug 2011 10:03:33 +0100
changeset 94 2cc4a7bfd5fa
parent 92 23d330242e61
child 95 46a94f1a5991
section 4
model/ProvenanceModel.html
--- a/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Thu Aug 04 09:43:37 2011 +0100
+++ b/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Thu Aug 04 10:03:33 2011 +0100
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 
 <div class='pending'>Alter example to cater for multiple ivpOf. This is <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/33">ISSUE-33</a>.</div>
 
-<div class='issue'>Some comments on the example. This is <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/63">ISSUE-63</a>.</div>
+<div class='pending'>Some comments on the example. This is <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/63">ISSUE-63</a>.</div>
 
     <section> 
 <h3>A File Scenario</h3>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@
     <section> 
 <h3>Encoding in PIL</h3>
 
-In this section, the example is encoded using PIL constructs, expressed in the Abstract Syntax Notation. Details about the Abstract Syntax Notation can be found in <a href="'#ASN-convention'">appendix</a>.
+In this section, the example is encoded using PIL constructs (specified in section <a href="\data-model-concepts">concepts</a>), expressed in the Abstract Syntax Notation. Details about the Abstract Syntax Notation can be found in <a href="'#ASN-convention'">appendix</a>.
 <p>
 Entities (construct described at <a href="#concept-Entity">entity</a>):
 <pre>
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
 entity(e3, [ type: "File", location: "/shared/crime.txt", creator: "Alice", content: "There was a lot of crime in London and New York last month."])
 entity(e4)
 entity(e5)
-entity(e6, [ type: "File", location: "/shared/crime.txt", creator: "Alice", content: "There was a lot of crime in London and New York last month.", disclaimer: "some text"])
+entity(e6, [ type: "File", location: "/shared/crime.txt", creator: "Alice", content: "There was a lot of crime in London and New York last month.", spellchecked: "yes"])
 </pre>
 </p>
 
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
 
 <p>Furthermore, this specification is concerned with <em>characterized
 things</em>, that is, things and their situation in
-the world, as perceived by their asserters.</p>
+the world, as characterized by their asserters.</p>
 
 <p>
 In the rest of the document, we are concerned with the representation of such things; their situation in the world will be represented using sets of attributes.