--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Sun Nov 25 16:14:48 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Sun Nov 25 16:17:21 2012 -0500
@@ -104,11 +104,11 @@
 		   <p>
 		   Agent <code>:derek</code>, acting again on behalf of the <code>:national_newspaper_inc</code> organization, 
 		   used the <code>:postEditor</code> tool to publish a post about his recent data analysis <code>:aggregatedByRegions</code>.
-         The tool tracks user actions using PROV-O, which is in turn published as a Bundle.
-		   The blog editor tool recorded that <code>:derek</code> was the one who started and ended the publishing activity <code>:publicationActivity1123</code>,
-         which generated the post <code>:post9821v1</code>. The post
+         The blog editor tool tracks user actions using PROV-O and published them as a Bundle.
+		   The tool recorded that <code>:derek</code> started and ended the publishing activity <code>:publicationActivity1123</code>,
+         that generated the post <code>:post9821v1</code>. The post
 		   included a permanent link where the content of the latest version is shown
-		   (<code>:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>:postContent0</code>). 
+		   (<code>:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) in addition to a snapshot of the current version (<code>:postContent0</code>). 
          Derek also included additional descriptions of the post, such as its title.
 		   </p>
 		   <p>