tweak to communication definition
authorLuc Moreau <l.moreau@ecs.soton.ac.uk>
Thu, 28 Jun 2012 15:56:53 +0100
changeset 3474 f95d77f42f4f
parent 3473 8ef8cc423807
child 3475 4db2c8bc3167
tweak to communication definition
model/glossary.html
model/glossary.js
--- a/model/glossary.html	Thu Jun 28 14:39:03 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/glossary.html	Thu Jun 28 15:56:53 2012 +0100
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
 </span>
 
 <span class="glossary" id="glossary-communication">  
-<dfn id="concept-communication">Communication</dfn> is the exchange of an unspecified entity by two activities, one activity using some entity generated by the other.
+<dfn id="concept-communication">Communication</dfn> is the exchange of some unspecified entity by two activities, one activity using some entity generated by the other.
 </span>
 
 
--- a/model/glossary.js	Thu Jun 28 14:39:03 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/glossary.js	Thu Jun 28 15:56:53 2012 +0100
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //  with <script src="glossary.js" class="remove"></script>
 //Insert glossary definitions with the following 
 // <div class="glossary-ref" ref="glossary-generation"></div>
-glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file/b6516d7f78f9/model/glossary.html';
+glossary_hg='http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/file/8ef8cc423807/model/glossary.html';
 glossary_string= 
 ' ' + 
 '<html> ' + 
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
 '</span> ' + 
 ' ' + 
 '<span class="glossary" id="glossary-communication">   ' + 
-'<dfn id="concept-communication">Communication</dfn> is the exchange of an unspecified entity by two activities, one activity using some entity generated by the other. ' + 
+'<dfn id="concept-communication">Communication</dfn> is the exchange of some unspecified entity by two activities, one activity using some entity generated by the other. ' + 
 '</span> ' + 
 ' ' + 
 ' ' +