--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-association.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:01:00 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-association.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:08:12 2012 -0500
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 @prefix prov: <http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#> .
 @prefix :     <http://example.org#> .
 
-:illustrationActivity             
+:illustrationActivity
    a prov:Activity;                ## Using Starting Point terms
    prov:wasAssociatedWith :derek;  ## Derek was responsible for the chart making in some way.
 .
@@ -9,12 +9,13 @@
 :derek a prov:Agent .
 
 :illustrationActivity
-   prov:qualifiedAssociation [       ## Qualify Derek's association in the illustration activity.
-      a prov:Association;            
-      prov:agent   :derek
+   prov:qualifiedAssociation [       ## Qualify how the :illustrationActivity
+      a prov:Association;            ##   was associated with
+      prov:agent   :derek            ##     Derek.
+
       prov:hadRole :illustrationist; ## Qualification: The role that Derek served.
-      prov:hadPlan :tutorial_blog;   ## Qualification: The plan (or recipe, instructions) 
-                                     ## that Derek followed when creating the graphical chart.
+      prov:hadPlan :tutorial_blog;   ## Qualification: The plan (or recipe, instructions)
+                                     ##  that Derek followed when creating the graphical chart.
    ];
 .
 

--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-generation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:01:00 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-generation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:08:12 2012 -0500
@@ -2,18 +2,19 @@
 @prefix prov: <http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#> .
 @prefix :     <http://example.org#> .
 
-:bar_chart 
-   a prov:Entity;                              ## Using Starting Point terms
-   prov:wasGeneratedBy :illustrationActivity;  ## The chart was generated in an illustration activity.
+:bar_chart
+   a prov:Entity;                              ## Using Starting Point terms,
+   prov:wasGeneratedBy :illustrationActivity;  ## the chart was generated in an illustration activity.
 .
 
 :illustrationActivity a prov:Activity .
 
 :bar_chart
-   prov:qualifiedGeneration [ ## Qualify the illustrationActivity's generation of bar_chart.
-      a prov:Generation;
-      prov:activity :illustrationActivity;               
-      prov:atTime "2011-07-14T15:52:14Z"^^xsd:dateTime; ## Qualification: The Activity generated 
+   prov:qualifiedGeneration [                           ## Qualify how :bar_chart
+      a prov:Generation;                                ##  was generated by
+      prov:activity :illustrationActivity;              ##   :illustrationActivity.
+
+      prov:atTime "2011-07-14T15:52:14Z"^^xsd:dateTime; ## Qualification: The Activity generated
                                                         ## the bar_chart at a particular time.
    ];
 .

--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-usage.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:01:00 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-usage.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:08:12 2012 -0500
@@ -10,9 +10,11 @@
 :aggregatedByRegions a prov:Entity .
 
 :illustrationActivity		
-   prov:qualifiedUsage [           ## Qualify illustrationActivity's usage of aggregatedByRegions.
-      a prov:Usage;
-      prov:entity :aggregatedByRegions;                 ## Qualification: The aggregated data was used 
-      prov:atTime "2011-07-14T03:03:03Z"^^xsd:dateTime; ## at a particular time when creating the chart.
+   prov:qualifiedUsage [                ## Qualify how the :illustrationActivity
+      a prov:Usage;                     ##  used
+      prov:entity :aggregatedByRegions; ##   the Entity :aggregatedByRegions
+
+      prov:atTime "2011-07-14T03:03:03Z"^^xsd:dateTime; ## Qualification: The aggregated data was used 
+                                                        ## at a particular time to create the bar chart..
    ];
 .