--- a/links/prov-links.html Mon Nov 26 08:43:40 2012 -0500
+++ b/links/prov-links.html Mon Nov 26 08:43:55 2012 -0500
@@ -853,28 +853,30 @@
</section>
<section id="mention-dm">
-<h2>Data Model Definition</h2>
+<h2>Conceptual Definition of Mention</h2>
<p>An entity <span class="name">e1</span> may be mentioned in a bundle <span class="name">b</span>, which contains some
- descriptions about this entity <span class="name">e1</span>: how <span class="name">e1</span> was generated and used, which activities <span class="name">e1</span> is involved with, the agents <span class="name">e1</span> is attributed to, etc. Other bundles may contain other descriptions about the same entity <span class="name">e1</span>.
-Some applications may want to interpret
-the latter descriptions of entity <span class="name">e1</span> with respect to the descriptions found in the bundle <span class="name">b</span> it occurs in. To this end, PROV allows a new entity <span class="name">e2</span> to be created, which is a specialization of the preceding entity <span class="name">e1</span>, and which presents an additional aspect: the bundle <span class="name">b</span> containing some descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span>. With this relation, applications that process <span class="name">e2</span>
-can know that the attributes of <span class="name">e2</span> may have been computed according to the descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span> in <span class="name">b</span>.</p>
-
+ descriptions about this entity <span class="name">e1</span>: how <span class="name">e1</span> was generated and used, which activities <span class="name">e1</span> is involved with, the agents <span class="name">e1</span> is attributed to, etc.
+Other bundles may contain other descriptions about the same entity <span class="name">e1</span>.
+Some applications may want to augment
+the descriptions of entity <span class="name">e1</span> found in bundle <span class="name">b</span> with other information.
+To this end, PROV allows a new entity <span class="name">e2</span> to be created and defined as a specialization of the preceding entity <span class="name">e1</span>, and which presents an additional aspect: the bundle <span class="name">b</span> containing some descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span>. With this relation, applications that process <span class="name">e2</span>
+can know that the attributes of <span class="name">e2</span> may have been computed according to the descriptions of <span class="name">e1</span> in <span class="name">b</span>.
+Thus, the mentionOf relation cannot be inferred from knowing that <span class="name">e2</span> is a specialization of <span class="name">e1</span> that appears in bundle <span class="name">b</span>.</p>
<p>
<a href="#figure-component5">Figure 1</a> depicts
-the relation MentionOf (<a>mention</a>).
+the relation MentionOf (<a>mention</a>) as a ternary relation.
</p>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<figure style="max-width: 95%; ">
<img src="figures/component5.png" alt="mention"/><br>
-<figcaption id="figure-component5">Mention UML Diagram</figcaption>
+<figcaption id="figure-component5"> UML Diagram for Mention</figcaption>
</figure>
</div>
@@ -905,12 +907,13 @@
<ul>
<li><span class='attribute' id="mention.specificEntity">specificEntity</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">infra</span>)
of the entity that is a mention of the general entity (<span class="name">supra</span>);</li>
-<li><span class='attribute' id="mention.generalEntity">generalEntity</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">supra</span>) of the entity that is being mentioned.</li>
+<li><span class='attribute' id="mention.generalEntity">generalEntity</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">supra</span>) for an entity that appears in bundle <span class="name">b</span>.</li>
<li><span class='attribute' id="mention.bundle">bundle</span>: an identifier (<span class="name">b</span>) of a bundle that contains a description of <span class="name">supra</span> and further constitutes one additional aspect presented by <span class="name">infra</span>.</li>
</ul>
</div>
-<p>A mention is not, as defined here, as an influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.</p>
+<p>A mention is not, as defined here, an influence, and therefore does not have an id and attributes.
+Its grammar, in the provenance notation, is written as follows.</p>
<table class="grammar">
<tbody class="prod"> <tr valign="baseline"> <td><a id="prod-mentionExpression" name="prod-mentionExpression"></a><span class="prodNo"></span> </td> <td><code class="production prod">mentionExpression</code></td> <td> ::= </td> <td><code class="content">"mentionOf" "(" <span class="prod"><a class="grammarRef" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/#prod-eIdentifier">eIdentifier</a></span> "," <span class="prod"><a class="grammarRef" href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-prov-n-20121211/#prod-eIdentifier">eIdentifier</a></span> "," <span class="prod"><a class="grammarRef" href="#prod-bIdentifier">bIdentifier</a></span> ")"</code></td> </tr> </tbody>
@@ -918,7 +921,7 @@
</table>
</table>
-<p>The following table summarizes how each constituent of a PROV-DM Mention maps to a PROV-N syntax element.</p>
+<p>The following table summarizes how each constituent of a Mention maps to a syntax element, in the provenance notation.</p>
<div style="text-align: left; ">
<table class="thinborder" style="margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;">
<tr><td><b><a href="#dfn-mentionof">Mention</a></b></td><td><b>Non-Terminal</b></td></tr>