provo narrative
authorTim L <lebot@rpi.edu>
Fri, 06 Jul 2012 14:15:25 -0400
changeset 3768 ac06549f086f
parent 3767 579ffd6da2f6
child 3769 02040b5aa4c7
provo narrative
ontology/ProvenanceOntology.owl
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html
--- a/ontology/ProvenanceOntology.owl	Fri Jul 06 14:06:21 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/ProvenanceOntology.owl	Fri Jul 06 14:15:25 2012 -0400
@@ -542,6 +542,7 @@
         <dm rdf:datatype="&xsd;anyURI">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120703/prov-dm.html#term-mention</dm>
         <inverse>hadMention</inverse>
         <category>expanded</category>
+        <rdfs:comment>When :x prov:mentionOf :y and :y is described in Bundle :b, the triple :x prov:asInBundle :b is also asserted to cite the Bundle in which :y was described.</rdfs:comment>
         <definition xml:lang="en">The mention of an Entity in a Bundle (containing a description of this Entity) is another Entity that is a specialization of the former and that presents the Bundle as a further additional aspect. </definition>
         <rdfs:comment xml:lang="en">The prov:mentionOf and prov:asInBundle properties are &quot;at risk&quot; (http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi) and may be removed from this specification based on feedback. Please send feedback to public-prov-comments@w3.org.
 
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Fri Jul 06 14:06:21 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Fri Jul 06 14:15:25 2012 -0400
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
 		</p>
 
  
-      <p>The <strong>fourth</strong> category describes the lifetime of an Entity beyond being <strong>generated</strong> by an Activity and <strong>used</strong> by other Activities. For example, a painting could not have been displayed before it was painted, and it cannot be sold after it is destroyed by fire. 
-      Similarly to how Activities have start and end times, an Entity may be bound by points in time for which it was generated or is no longer usable. 
+      <p>The <strong>fourth</strong> category describes the lifetime of an Entity beyond being <strong>generated</strong> by an Activity and <strong>used</strong> by other Activities. For example, a painting could not have been displayed before it was painted, and it could not be sold after it was destroyed by fire. 
+      Similar to how Activities have start and end times, an Entity may be bound by points in time for which it was generated or is no longer usable. 
 The properties <a href="#generatedAtTime" class="qname">prov:generatedAtTime</a> and <a href="#invalidatedAtTime" class="qname">prov:invalidatedAtTime</a> can be used to bound the starting and ending moments of an Entity's existence. The Activities that led to the generation or invalidation of an Entity can be provided using <span class="repeated">prov:wasGeneratedBy</span> and <a href="#wasInvalidatedBy" class="qname">prov:wasInvalidatedBy</a>, respectively. 
 <a href="#generated" class="qname">prov:generated</a> and <a href="#invalidated" class="qname">prov:invalidated</a> are the inverses of <span class="repeated">prov:wasGeneratedBy</span> and <span class="repeated">prov:wasInvalidatedBy</span>, respectively, and are defined to facilitate Activity-centric in addition to Entity-centric modeling. 
       </p>
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
         </div>
 		   
 		   <p>
-		   Agent <code>ex:derek</code>, acting again in behalf of the <code>ex:chartgenerators</code> organization, 
+		   Agent <code>ex:derek</code>, acting again on behalf of the <code>ex:chartgenerators</code> organization, 
 		   publishes a post about his recent changes to the aggregated file (<code>ex:aggregatedByRegions</code>) using the tool <code>ex:postEditor</code>. Since he is the one who started and ended the publishing activity (<code>ex:publicationActivity1123</code>), that information
 		   is recorded as well. The post produced by <code>ex:derek</code> (<code>ex:post9821v1</code>) includes a permanent link where the content of the latest version is shown
 		   (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also adds additional metadata of the post, like the title.
@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@
 		   </p>		   
 		   
 		 <div about="#narrative-example-expanded-1-a" typeof="prov:Entity" class="exampleOuter" xmlns:prov="http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#">
-           <p>Shortly after Derek's post publication, ex:monica adapts the text for a wider audience in a new post (<code>ex:post9822</code>). This version is an specialization of the original post,
+           <p>Shortly after Derek's post publication, ex:monica adapts the text for a wider audience in a new post (<code>ex:post9822</code>). This version is a specialization of the original post,
 		   and an alternate of the version modified by Derek. Since the provenance produced by the activities of Derek and Monica correspond to different user views, the system
-		   automatically publish it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundles</a> (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>).
+		   automatically publish it in different <a href="#Bundle" class="qname">prov:Bundle</a>s (<code>ex:bundlePost and ex:bundlePost1</code>).
             </p> 		   
             <pre rel="prov:wasQuotedFrom" resource="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/tip/examples/eg-25-extended-crime-file-example/rdf/extended-crime-file-pt1_a.ttl"
                  class="example">{% escape %}{% include "includes/prov/examples/eg-25-extended-crime-file-example/rdf/extended-crime-file-pt1_a.ttl" %}{% endescape %}</pre>