--- a/model/comments/issue-332-Khalid.txt Thu Apr 12 15:55:18 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/comments/issue-332-Khalid.txt Thu Apr 12 16:38:37 2012 +0100
@@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
* The term expression, and expression identifier is used in this section, but it is actually introduced in the section that follows.
+PM fixed.
+
* "While not all PROV-DM relations are not binary, they involve two primary elements". I find the use of the term primary element a bit vague, specially when presenting a notation. Instead, I would use something in the following lines. "While most of PROV-DM relations are binary, such relations can be characterized (or qualified) using attributes."
PM. edited.
--- a/model/prov-n.html Thu Apr 12 15:55:18 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-n.html Thu Apr 12 16:38:37 2012 +0100
@@ -375,7 +375,7 @@
<div class="note">this is confusing. look at http://www.w3.org/TR/owl2-syntax/#BNF_Notation for example</div>
-The top level nonterminal of the grammar is <span class="nonterminal">expression</span>, defined as follows.
+The most relevant nonterminal for the purpose of understanding the overall grammar is <span class="nonterminal">expression</span>, defined as follows.
<div class='grammar'>
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