--- a/model/prov-constraints.html	Tue Jul 17 15:22:43 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/prov-constraints.html	Wed Jul 18 11:00:27 2012 +0100
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
           wgURI:        "http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/",
           
           // name (with the @w3c.org) of the public mailing to which comments are due
-          wgPublicList: "public-prov-wg",
+          wgPublicList: "public-prov-comments",
           
           // URI of the patent status for this WG, for Rec-track documents
           // !!!! IMPORTANT !!!!
@@ -300,22 +300,7 @@
 
     <section id="abstract">
 <p>
-PROV-DM, the PROV data model, is a data model for provenance that describes
-the entities, people and activities involved in
-producing a piece of data or thing. 
-PROV-DM is organized in six components, respectively dealing with:
-(1)
-entities and activities, and the time at which they were created,
-used, or ended;
-(2) derivations of entities from entities;
-(3) agents
-bearing responsibility for entities that were generated and activities
-that happened;
-(4) a notion of bundle, a mechanism to support
-provenance of provenance; 
-(5) properties to link entities that
-refer to the same thing;
-(6) collections forming a logical structure for its members. 
+Provenance is information about entities, activities, and people involved in producing a piece of data or thing, which can be used to form assessments about its quality, reliability or trustworthiness. PROV-DM is the conceptual data model that forms a basis for the W3C provenance (PROV) family of specifications. PROV-DM distinguishes core structures, forming the essence of provenance information, from extended structures catering for more specific uses of provenance. PROV-DM is organized in six components, respectively dealing with: (1) entities and activities, and the time at which they were created, used, or ended; (2) derivations of entities from entities; (3) agents bearing responsibility for entities that were generated and activities that happened; (4) a notion of bundle, a mechanism to support provenance of provenance; (5) properties to link entities that refer to the same thing; and, (6) collections forming a logical structure for its members.
 </p>
 
 
@@ -331,34 +316,34 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="sotd">
+<h4>Last Call</h4>
+<p>This is the second public release of the PROV-DM document. 
+This is a Last Call Working Draft. The design is not expected to change significantly, going forward, and now is the key time for external review.</p>
+
+<p>This specification identifies two  <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/10/Process-20051014/tr#cfi">features at risk</a>, related to Mention  [[PROV-DM]]:
+<a class="rule-text" href="#mention-specialization"><span>TBD</span></a> and
+<a class="rule-text" href="#mention-unique"><span>TBD</span></a> might be removed from PROV if implementation experience reveals problems with supporting this construct.</p>
+
 <h4>PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
 This document is part of the PROV family of specifications, a set of specifications defining various aspects that are necessary to achieve the vision of inter-operable
 interchange of provenance information in heterogeneous environments such as the Web.  The specifications are:
 <ul>
-<li> PROV-DM, the PROV data model for provenance;</li>
-<li> PROV-CONSTRAINTS, a set of constraints applying to the PROV data model  (this document);</li>
-<li> PROV-N, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption;</li>
-<li> PROV-O, the PROV ontology, an OWL-RL ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF;</li>
-<li> PROV-AQ, the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance; </li>
-<li> PROV-PRIMER, a primer for the PROV data model;</li>
-<li> PROV-SEM, a formal semantics for the PROV data model;</li>
-<li> PROV-XML, an XML schema for the PROV data model.</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">PROV-DM</a>, the PROV data model for provenance;</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-constraints/">PROV-CONSTRAINTS</a>, a set of constraints applying to the PROV data model  (this document);</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">PROV-N</a>, a notation for provenance aimed at human consumption;</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-o/">PROV-O</a>, the PROV ontology, an OWL-RL ontology allowing the mapping of PROV to RDF;</li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-aq/">PROV-AQ</a>, the mechanisms for accessing and querying provenance; </li>
+<li> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-primer/">PROV-PRIMER</a>, a primer for the PROV data model.</li>
 </ul>
 <h4>How to read the PROV Family of Specifications</h4>
 <ul>
 <li>The primer is the entry point to PROV offering an introduction to the provenance model.</li>
 <li>The Linked Data and Semantic Web community should focus on PROV-O defining PROV classes and properties specified in an OWL-RL ontology. For further details, PROV-DM and PROV-CONSTRAINTS specify the constraints applicable to the data model, and its interpretation. PROV-SEM provides a mathematical semantics.</li>
-<li>The XML community should focus on PROV-XML defining an XML schema for PROV-DM. Further details can also be found in PROV-DM, PROV-CONSTRAINTS, and PROV-SEM.</li>
 <li>Developers seeking to retrieve or publish provenance should focus on PROV-AQ.</li>
 <li>Readers seeking to implement other PROV serializations
-should focus on PROV-DM and PROV-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O, PROV-N, PROV-XML offer examples of mapping to RDF, text, and XML, respectively.</li>
+should focus on PROV-DM and PROV-CONSTRAINTS.  PROV-O and PROV-N offer examples of mapping to RDF and text, respectively.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<h4>Second Public Working Draft</h4>
-<div class='note'>Revise</div>
- <p>This is a draft of the second public release of the PROV-CONSTRAINTS
-document. 
-</p>
 </section>
 
 
@@ -393,8 +378,8 @@
 <h3>Purpose of this document</h3>
 
 <p> PROV-DM is a conceptual data model for provenance, which is
-realizable using different serializations such as PROV-N, PROV-O, or
-PROV-XML.  The PROV-DM specification [[!PROV-DM]] imposes few
+realizable using different serializations such as PROV-O and PROV-N.
+ The PROV-DM specification [[!PROV-DM]] imposes few
 requirements upon sets of PROV statements (or <a>instances</a>).  By
 default, PROV instances need not be valid, that is, they may not
 correspond to a consistent history of objects and interactions to

--- a/model/releases/WD-prov-dm-20120724/Overview.html	Tue Jul 17 15:22:43 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/releases/WD-prov-dm-20120724/Overview.html	Wed Jul 18 11:00:27 2012 +0100
@@ -1024,7 +1024,7 @@
 </style><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-WD" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head> 
   <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-DM: The PROV Data Model</h1><h2 id="w3c-working-draft-24-july-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Working Draft 24 July 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120724/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-dm/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-dm.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-dm-20120503/</a> (<a href="diff.html">color-coded diffs</a>)</dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
-<dt>Authors:</dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
+<dt>Contributors:</dt><dd><a href="http://semanticweb.org/wiki/Khalid_Belhajjame">Khalid Belhajjame</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
 <dd><span>Reza B'Far</span>, Oracle Corporation</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://homepages.inf.ed.ac.uk/jcheney/">James Cheney</a>, University of Edinburgh</dd>
 <dd><span>Sam Coppens</span>, IBBT - Ghent University</dd>

--- a/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html	Tue Jul 17 15:22:43 2012 -0400
+++ b/model/releases/WD-prov-n-20120724/Overview.html	Wed Jul 18 11:00:27 2012 +0100
@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@
 </style><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-WD" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8"></head> 
   <body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img width="72" height="48" src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" alt="W3C"></a></p><h1 class="title" id="title">PROV-N: The Provenance Notation</h1><h2 id="w3c-working-draft-24-july-2012"><acronym title="World Wide Web Consortium">W3C</acronym> Working Draft 24 July 2012</h2><dl><dt>This version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120724/</a></dd><dt>Latest published version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/">http://www.w3.org/TR/prov-n/</a></dd><dt>Latest editor's draft:</dt><dd><a href="http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-n.html">http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/prov/raw-file/default/model/prov-n.html</a></dd><dt>Previous version:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120503/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-prov-n-20120503/</a>  (<a href="diff-n.html">color-coded diffs</a>)</dd><dt>Editors:</dt><dd><a href="http://www.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~lavm/">Luc Moreau</a>, University of Southampton</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://www.cs.ncl.ac.uk/people/Paolo.Missier">Paolo Missier</a>, Newcastle University</dd>
-<dt>Authors:</dt><dd><a href="http://homepages.inf.ed.ac.uk/jcheney/">James Cheney</a>, University of Edinburgh</dd>
+<dt>Contributors:</dt><dd><a href="http://homepages.inf.ed.ac.uk/jcheney/">James Cheney</a>, University of Edinburgh</dd>
 <dd><a href="http://soiland-reyes.com/stian/">Stian Soiland-Reyes</a>, University of Manchester</dd>
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