--- a/model/comments/issue-437-james.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:50:56 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-james.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:58:10 2012 +0100
@@ -30,8 +30,9 @@
    > collection)"?  This is what I thought we agreed at f2f3.  We could
    > also omit EmptyCollection and the completeness flag.
 
-TODO. Non alignment between prov-o and prov-dm.
 
+My understanding is that we were keeping previous definitions for
+collections, and moving dictionaries elsewhere.
 
 
    > 

--- a/model/comments/issue-437-jun.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:50:56 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-jun.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:58:10 2012 +0100
@@ -152,7 +152,8 @@
    > - The narratives in this section are rather complex. But I am not
    >   going into details because it's marked as at risk at the moment.
 
-TODO
+Added an introduction
+
    > 
    > 5.6.
    > 

--- a/model/comments/issue-437-satya.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:50:56 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/comments/issue-437-satya.txt	Mon Jul 09 21:58:10 2012 +0100
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
    > physical activities."
    > 
 
-TODO
+I kept the same form, to parallel what we say for entities.
 
    > As Example 2 already describes the information processing activity and
    > driving of car from Boston to Cambridge.
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
    > tapping issue (it is very country specific)
    >
 
-TODO
+I didn't think this was country specific. Do you have another example?
  
    > Section 5.1.6
    > 1. Start: By defining all the attributes except Activity (being
@@ -107,11 +107,10 @@
 The text says:
 "A bundle constructor allows the content and the name of a bundle to be specified;"
 
-Can you explain what the issue is? Is it a question of naming? Or is the idea
+Can you explain what the issue is? Is it a question of naming? Or is the issue
 that we want to express the content and name?
 
 
-
    > 
    > Section 5.4.2
    > 1. Suggest that in example 39, the assertion

--- a/model/prov-dm.html	Mon Jul 09 21:50:56 2012 +0100
+++ b/model/prov-dm.html	Mon Jul 09 21:58:10 2012 +0100
@@ -743,7 +743,7 @@
 information processing activities
  may for example move, copy, or duplicate  digital entities;
  physical activities can include
- driving a car from Boston to Cambridge.
+ driving a car from Boston to Cambridge or printing a book.
 </p>