--- a/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Sat Aug 06 09:16:01 2011 +0100
+++ b/model/ProvenanceModel.html	Tue Aug 09 10:54:44 2011 +0200
@@ -1189,41 +1189,76 @@
 
 <div class='issue'>There are a number of commonly used provenance relations in particular for the web that are not in the model. For practical use and uptake, it would be good to have definitions of these in the provenance model. These concepts should be defined in terms of the already existing "core" concepts. This is  <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/prov/track/issues/44">ISSUE-44</a>.</div>
 
-<div class='note'>Text copied from issue. Needs editing.</div>
-
 <section>
-<h3>isQuoteOf</h3>
+<h3>Quotation</h3>
 
-A quote. Specifically, it represents a characterized entity that is part of another characterized entity.
+Quotation represents the repeating or copying of some part of a characterized thing. 
 
-A constrained version of isRevisionOf
+<p> An assertion isQuoteOf, noted <b> isQuoteOf(e2,e1,ag,ag2)</b>:
+<ul>
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e2</b>, denoting the quote; 
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e1</b>, denoting the entity being quoted;
+<li>MAY refer to an agent who is doing the quoting <b>ag</b>;
+<li>MAY refer to the agent that is quoted <b>ag</b>
+</ul>
+</p>
+<p>
+<b>isQuoteOf</b> is a sub-relation of <b>isRevisionOf</b>
+</p>
 
-see http://daringfireball.net/2011/07/attribution_and_credit
 </section>
 
 <section>
-<h3>isAttributedTo</h3> 
+<h3>Attribution</h3> 
 
-Represents that a characterized identity was the product of an agent or can be attributed to that agent.
+Attribution represents that a characterized thing is ascribed to an agent.
 
-A constrained version of isDerivedFrom
+<p> An assertion isAttributedTo, noted <b> isAttributedTo(e1,ag)</b>:
+<ul>
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e2</b>, denoting the entity; 
+<li>refers to an agent who the entity is attributed to <b>ag</b>.
+</ul>
+</p>
+<p>
+<b>isQuoteOf</b> is a strict sub-relation of <b>isEventuallyDerivedFrom</b>
+</p>
 
-see http://www.buzzmachine.com/2010/06/27/the-importance-of-provenance/
+
 </section>
 
 <section>
-<h3>isSummaryOf</h3>
+<h3>Summary</h3>
+Represents a characterized thing that is a synopsis or abbreviation of another entity.
 
-Represents a characterized entity that is a synopsis or abbreviation of another entity.
+<p> An assertion isSummaryOf, noted <b> isSummaryOf(e2,e1)</b>:
+<ul>
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e2</b>, denoting the summary; 
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e1</b>, denoting the entity being summarized. 
+</ul>
+</p>
+<p>
+<b>isSummaryOf</b> is a strict sub-relation of <b>isEventuallyDerivedFrom</b>
+</p>
 
-constrained version of isDerivedFrom
+
 </section>
 
 <section>
-<h3>hasOriginalSource</h3>
-Represents a characterized entity in which another characterized entity first appeared. 
+<h3>Original Source</h3>
 
-A constrained version of isDerivedFrom
+Represents a characterized thing in which another characterized thing first appeared. 
+
+<p> An assertion hasOriginalSource, noted <b> hasOriginalSource(e2,e1)</b>:
+<ul>
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e2</b>, denoting the entity that first appeared; 
+<li>refers to an entity <b>e1</b>, denoting the entity where that entity first appeared. 
+</ul>
+</p>
+<p>
+<b>hasOriginalSource</b> is a strict sub-relation of <b>isEventuallyDerivedFrom</b>
+</p>
+
+
 </section>
     </section>