--- a/paq/provenance-access.html	Thu Aug 11 18:17:25 2011 +0200
+++ b/paq/provenance-access.html	Thu Aug 11 19:36:27 2011 +0200
@@ -143,12 +143,12 @@
             <dt>Service-URI</dt>
             <dd>the URI of a Provenance Service.</dd>
             <dt>Resource</dt>
-            <dd>a web resource. A resource may be associated with multiple targets.</dd>
+            <dd>a web resource. A resource may itself be a target but also can be associated with multiple targets.</dd>
           </dl>
         </p>
 
 		<p>
-		A key notion within these concepts is that a resource may not be the same as a target. Within provenance information, the provenance for a resource may be described with respect to a restricted view of that resource (e.g. the resource at a particular time). This restricted view is termed a target and a Target-URI allows one to locate that target within provenance information. Therefore, the Target-URI connects this restricted view of a resource with the resource itself. 
+		A key notion within these concepts is that a resource may not be the same as a target. Within provenance information, a resource may be described by one or more provenance model:Entities. Thus, a target refers to a provenance model:Entity and a Target-URI allows the target to bef found within provenance information. Where a resource is a provenance model:Entity then it can be used as a target. 
 		</p>
 		
         <p class="issue">
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
           When used in conjunction with an HTTP success response code (<code>2xx</code>), this HTTP header indicates that <code><cite>provenance-URI</cite></code> is the URI of some provenance for the requested resource and that resource's associated target is identified by the <code><cite>target-URI</cite></code>. 
         </p>
         <p>
-        If no target link is provided then the <code><cite>target-URI</cite></code> is assumed to be the URI of the resources. It is RECOMMENDED that this only be done when the resource is static.
+        If no target link is provided then the <code><cite>target-URI</cite></code> is assumed to be the URI of the resources. It is RECOMMENDED that this only be done when the resource is a provenance model Entity.
         </p>
         <p>  
           At this time, the meaning of these links returned with other HTTP response codes is not defined: future revisions of this specification may define interpretations for these.
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
           Likewise, the header MAY include multiple target link elements indicating that the document can be identified in the provenance information with multiple <code><cite>target-URIs</cite></code>.
         </p>
         <p>
-        If no target link element is provided then the <code><cite>target-URI</cite></code> is assumed to be the URI of the document. It is RECOMMENDED that this only be done when the document is static.
+        If no target link element is provided then the <code><cite>target-URI</cite></code> is assumed to be the URI of the document. It is RECOMMENDED that this only be done when the document is a provenance model Entity.
         </p>
 
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