--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-association.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:12:50 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-association.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:16:04 2012 -0500
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 :illustrationActivity
    prov:qualifiedAssociation [       ## Qualify how the :illustrationActivity
       a prov:Association;            ##   was associated with
-      prov:agent   :derek            ##     Derek.
+      prov:agent   :derek            ##     the Agent Derek.
 
       prov:hadRole :illustrationist; ## Qualification: The role that Derek served.
       prov:hadPlan :tutorial_blog;   ## Qualification: The plan (or recipe, instructions)

--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-derivation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:12:50 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-derivation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:16:04 2012 -0500
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@
 :bar_chart
    prov:qualifiedDerivation [                      ## Qualify
       a prov:Derivation;                           ##   how :bar_chart was derived from
-      prov:entity        :aggregatedByRegions;     ##     the :aggregatedByRegions dataset.
+      prov:entity        :aggregatedByRegions;     ##     the dataset Entity :aggregatedByRegions.
+
       prov:hadActivity   :aggregating_activity;    ## Qualification: The activity that derived the :bar_chart.
       prov:hadUsage      :use_of_aggregatedData;   ## Qualification: How the activity used :aggregatedByRegions.
       prov:hadGeneration :generation_of_bar_chart; ## Qualification: How the activity generated the :bar_chart.

--- a/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-generation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:12:50 2012 -0500
+++ b/ontology/khalid-jun-dropbox/eg16-journalism-qualified-generation.ttl	Mon Nov 26 12:16:04 2012 -0500
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
 :illustrationActivity a prov:Activity .
 
 :bar_chart
-   prov:qualifiedGeneration [                           ## Qualify how :bar_chart
+   prov:qualifiedGeneration [                           ## Qualify how the :bar_chart
       a prov:Generation;                                ##   was generated by
-      prov:activity :illustrationActivity;              ##     :illustrationActivity.
+      prov:activity :illustrationActivity;              ##     the Activity :illustrationActivity.
 
       prov:atTime "2011-07-14T15:52:14Z"^^xsd:dateTime; ## Qualification: The Activity generated
                                                         ##   the bar_chart at a particular time.