provo narrative
authorTim L <lebot@rpi.edu>
Mon, 09 Jul 2012 15:28:44 -0400
changeset 3812 514258c1012b
parent 3811 538cbe654f2f
child 3813 b42f4b971a23
provo narrative
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html
ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Mon Jul 09 15:19:29 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-expanded-terms.inc.html	Mon Jul 09 15:28:44 2012 -0400
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 		   (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) plus a snapshot of the content of the current version (<code>ex:postContent0</code>). Derek also adds additional metadata of the post, like the title.
 		   </p>
 		   <p>
-		   However, inmediately after having published the post, Derek detects a typo. He does not want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just creates a new version and 
+		   However, shortly after having published the post, Derek detects a typo. He does not want to record the activity that led to the new version, so he just creates a new version and 
 		   summarizes the changes in a revision of the original post(<code>ex:post9821v2</code>). This revision is also a specialization of the original post, since it is a refined version. 
          Thus, the permalink to the latest version (<code>ex:more-crime-happens-in-cities</code>) remains the same in the new revision, but a different URL is given for its snapshot (<code>ex:postContent1</code>).
 		   </p>		   
--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Mon Jul 09 15:19:29 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Mon Jul 09 15:28:44 2012 -0400
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
          the file size and format of the dataset, or the aspect ratio of the bar chart).
       </p>
 
-      <p>An Agent can be responsible for an Activity or an Entity, which is described using the properties <a href='#wasAssociatedWith' class="qname">prov:wasAssociatedWith</a> and <a href='#wasAttributedTo' class="qname">prov:wasAttributedTo</a>, respectively. Agents can also be responsible for other Agents' actions. In this case, the Agent that influenced an Activity or Entity <a href='#actedOnBehalfOf' class="qname">prov:actedOnBehalfOf</a> another Agent that also bears some responnsibility for the resulting Activity or Entity.
+      <p>An Agent can be responsible for an Activity or an Entity, which is described using the properties <a href='#wasAssociatedWith' class="qname">prov:wasAssociatedWith</a> and <a href='#wasAttributedTo' class="qname">prov:wasAttributedTo</a>, respectively. Agents can also be responsible for other Agents' actions. In this case, the Agent that influenced an Activity or Entity <a href='#actedOnBehalfOf' class="qname">prov:actedOnBehalfOf</a> another Agent that also bears some responsibility for the resulting Activity or Entity.
 
       <div id="starting-points-figure" style="text-align: center;" class="figure">
             <!-- When publishing to w3c: replace prov-o-diagrams/ with diagrams/ -->