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@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
             Provenance query mechanisms that may be used for more demanding deployments are described in <a href="#provenance-query-services" class="sectionRef"></a>.
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-            A simple "ping-back" mechanism allowing for discovery of "forward provenance" (i.e. provenance about future resources that are based upon or influenced by an entity) is described in <a href="#forward-provenance" class="sectionRef"></a>.
+            A simple "ping-back" mechanism allowing for discovery of "forward provenance" (i.e. provenance about future entities that are based upon or influenced by a resource) is described in <a href="#forward-provenance" class="sectionRef"></a>.
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