Primer: Minor quotation correct suggested by Chuck Morris
authorSimon Miles <simon.miles@kcl.ac.uk>
Fri, 01 Mar 2013 17:58:46 +0000
changeset 5811 48e4610fe4e3
parent 5810 6c20aa08274f
child 5812 28cc7b3a41a9
Primer: Minor quotation correct suggested by Chuck Morris
primer/Primer.html
primer/WD-prov-primer-20130312/Overview.html
--- a/primer/Primer.html	Fri Mar 01 16:20:34 2013 +0000
+++ b/primer/Primer.html	Fri Mar 01 17:58:46 2013 +0000
@@ -379,8 +379,8 @@
     In PROV, the result of each revision is a new entity.
     PROV allows one to relate those entities by making a description that 
     one was a revision of another.
-    Another specialized kind of derivation is to say that one entity, commonly
-    a document, <i>quotes</i> from another.
+    Another kind of derivation is to say that one entity, a quotation, <i>was quoted from</i>
+    another entity, commonly a document.
    </p>
   </section>
 
--- a/primer/WD-prov-primer-20130312/Overview.html	Fri Mar 01 16:20:34 2013 +0000
+++ b/primer/WD-prov-primer-20130312/Overview.html	Fri Mar 01 17:58:46 2013 +0000
@@ -511,8 +511,8 @@
     In PROV, the result of each revision is a new entity.
     PROV allows one to relate those entities by making a description that 
     one was a revision of another.
-    Another specialized kind of derivation is to say that one entity, commonly
-    a document, <i>quotes</i> from another.
+    Another kind of derivation is to say that one entity, a quotation, <i>was quoted from</i>
+    another entity, commonly a document.
    </p>
   </section>