--- a/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Tue Jul 03 14:15:23 2012 -0400
+++ b/ontology/prov-o-html-sections/description-starting-points.inc.html	Tue Jul 03 14:17:29 2012 -0400
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
       and during their lifespan can  <strong>use</strong> and <strong>generate</strong> a variety of Entities (described using 
       <a href='#used' class="qname">prov:used</a> and <a href='#wasGeneratedBy' class="qname">prov:wasGeneratedBy</a>, respectively). 
       For example, a blog writing activity may use a particular dataset and generate a bar chart. 
-      Provenance chains of alternating Activities and Entities can be created by applying usage and generation.
+      Provenance chains of Activities and Entities can be created by applying usage and generation.
       </p>
 
       <p>In addiition, we can say that an Activity <a href='#wasInformedBy' class="qname">prov:wasInformedBy</a>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
       Activity, but the Entity itself is not interesting. So, the <span class="repeated">prov:wasInformedBy</span> property allows the assertion of provenance chains comprising only Activities.
       </p>
 
-      <p>Provenance chains of Entities can be formed without Activities using the <a href='#wasDerivedFrom' class="qname">prov:wasDerivedFrom</a> property.
+      <p>Provenance chains comprising only Entities can be formed without Activities using the <a href='#wasDerivedFrom' class="qname">prov:wasDerivedFrom</a> property.
          A derivation is a transformation of one entity into another. For example, if the Activity that created the bar chart is not interesting,
           then we can say that the bar chart <span class="repeated">prov:wasDerivedFrom</span> the dataset.
          Arbitrary RDF properties can be used to describe the fixed aspects of an Entity that are interesting to a particular application (for example,