ldp.html
changeset 562 e6d8108df386
parent 561 ceeb37eb8f71
child 563 4e61db8dbfa2
--- a/ldp.html	Wed Apr 16 10:11:50 2014 -0400
+++ b/ldp.html	Wed Apr 16 11:48:36 2014 -0400
@@ -1284,7 +1284,7 @@
 
 	<section id="ldpc-post-createdmbr-contains"><h2 class="normal">
 		When a successful HTTP <code>POST</code> request to a LDPC results in the creation of a LDPR, a 
-		<a title="Containment triples">containment triple</a> MUST be added to the state of LDPC
+		<a title="Containment triples">containment triple</a> MUST be added to the state of the LDPC
 		whose subject is the LDPC URI, 
 		whose predicate is <code>ldp:contains</code> and whose object is the URI for the newly created document (LDPR).  Other triples may be added as well.
 		The newly created LDPR appears as a contained resource of the LDPC until the
@@ -1413,20 +1413,21 @@
 	</p>
 		
 	<section id="ldpc-del-contremovesconttriple"><h2 class="normal">
-		When a LDPR identified by the object of a <a title="containment triples">containment triple</a> is deleted, the LDPC server MUST also remove 
-		the LDPR from the containing LDPC by removing the corresponding containment triple.
+		When a <a title="containment">contained LDPR</a> is deleted, the LDPC server MUST also remove 
+		the corresponding containment triple, which has the effect of removing the deleted LDPR from the containing LDPC.
 	</h2>
 	<blockquote>
 		Non-normative note: The <a>LDP server</a> might perform additional actions, 
 		as described in the <a href="#ldp-http-method-side-effects">normative references</a> like [[HTTP11]]. 
-		For example, the server could perform additional cleanup tasks for resources it knows are no longer referenced or have not
-		been accessed for some period of time.
+		For example, the server could remove membership triples referring to the deleted LDPR, 
+		perform additional cleanup tasks for resources it knows are no longer referenced or have not
+		been accessed for some period of time, and so on.
 	</blockquote>
 	</section><!-- Was 5.6.1 / #ldpc-5_6_1 -->
 	
 	<section id="ldpc-del-contremovescontres"><h2 class="normal">
-	When a LDPR identified by the object of a <a title="containment triples">containment triple</a> is deleted, and the LDPC server 
-	created an associated LDP-RS (see the <a href="#ldpc-post-createbinlinkmetahdr">LDPC POST section</a>), the LDPC server MUST also remove the associated LDP-RS it created.
+	When a <a title="containment triples">contained LDPR</a> is deleted, and the LDPC server 
+	created an associated LDP-RS (see the <a href="#ldpc-post-createbinlinkmetahdr">LDPC POST section</a>), the LDPC server MUST also delete the associated LDP-RS it created.
 	</h2></section><!-- Was 5.6.4 / #ldpc-5_6_4 -->
 	
 </section>
@@ -2257,6 +2258,7 @@
 <h2>Detailed history</h2>
 <!-- <blockquote><em><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2013/WD-ldp-20130930/">Candidate Recommendation Draft</a></em></blockquote> -->
 <ul>
+	<li>2014-04-16 - Clarify language of 5.2.5.1/2 (JA) </li>
 	<li>2014-04-16 - Clarify definitions of membership and containment triples (JA) </li>
 	<li>2014-04-15 - Rename empty-container triples to minimal-container triples (JA) </li>
 	<li>2014-04-15 - Add describedby chapter (JA) </li>