--- a/longdesc1/longdesc.html	Thu Jun 19 17:46:05 2014 -0400
+++ b/longdesc1/longdesc.html	Fri Jun 20 12:48:19 2014 -0400
@@ -693,9 +693,9 @@
         <div class="note" role="region" aria-label="informative">
           <p><em>This section is informative</em></p>
           <p>For example a MathML version of mathematical content, or an SVG image that
-            uses the accessibility features of SVG, can provide better accessibility to
+            uses the accessibility features of SVG, can provide direct accessibility to
             users with appropriate technology. In such cases, it is appropriate to use
-            longdesc as a fallback strategy, in combination with more modern techniques.</p>
+            those techniques in combination with longdesc.</p>
         </div>
         <h4 id="user-agents">3.0.3 User Agents</h4>
         <p>If the <code>longdesc</code> value is valid, User agents <em class="rfc2119">must</em>