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         <dt>Identifying a well-known image</dt>
         <dd>Identifying an image is often important context for a discussion.
           There are many well-known images which are widely reproduced and well
-          known. In some cases, such as "Mona Lisa", "Gerníka", Cubbin's "Lost",
-          Leunig's "ramming the shears", the most effective way to identify an
+          known. In some cases, such as "Mona Lisa", "Guernica", "A Starry Night", 
+          "The Scream", the most effective way to identify an
           image is to use its title, creator, and similar information that would
           be found in a catalog. But different people know images by different
-          titles, and some titles are not well known. Where the image itself
+          titles, and some titles are not well known. When the image itself
           cannot be seen, a description can often be used to offer easier
           recognition than the cataloging information, for example "Washington
-          crossing some river, standing heroically in the boat, while soldiers
+          crossing some river, standing heroically in a boat, while soldiers
           do the hard work", or "the Da Vinci picture of the guy in a square and
           a circle".</dd>
         <dd><em>Requires</em>: <a href="#discoverability">Discoverability</a></dd>