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-<p class="todo">Make sure all contributors are listed as Authors</p>
+<p class="todo">Make sure all contributors are acknowledged.</p>
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-This document provides best practices and guidance to create high quality, re-usable Linked Open Data (LOD).
+The goal of this document is to aid the development of high quality, re-usable Linked Open Data (LOD). It collects the most relevant engineering practices, promoting best practices for publishing and consuming authoritative data and warning against practices that are considered harmful.
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- <p>This document is work in progress. You might also want to check the accompanying <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/gld/wiki/Best_Practices_Discussion_Summary">Wiki page</a> of the GLD Working Group for ongoing discussions.</p>
+ <p>This document is work in progress. The GLD WG ongoing discussions are recorded on the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/gld/wiki/Best_Practices_Discussion_Summary">Best Practices Wiki page</a></p>
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