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<section id="abstract">
<!--<h2>Purpose of the Document</h2> -->
<p>
-This document sets out a series of best practices designed to facilitate development and delivery of open government data as Linked Data. Linked Data principles are used to publish high quality, heterogeneous datasets in a distributed manner. The goal of this document is to aid the publication of high quality <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-open-data">Linked Open Data (LOD)</a> from government authorities, to compile the most relevant data management practices, to promote best practices for publishing Linked Open Data, and to warn against practices that are considered harmful. The following recommendations are offered to creators, maintainers and operators of Web sites publishing open government data.
+This document sets out a series of best practices designed to facilitate development and delivery of open government data as Linked Data. <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-data-principles">Linked Open Data Principles</a> are used to publish high quality, heterogeneous datasets in a distributed manner. The goal of this document is to aid the publication of high quality <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-open-data">Linked Open Data (LOD)</a> from government authorities, to compile the most relevant data management practices, to promote best practices for publishing Linked Open Data, and to warn against practices that are considered harmful. The following recommendations are offered to creators, maintainers and operators of Web sites publishing open government data.
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<h2>Audience</h2>
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The document is targeted at developers, government information management staff, Web site administrators.
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<h2>Scope</h2>
-<p>
-<del>This document aims to facilitate the adoption of
-<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-data-principles">Linked Open Data Principles</a>
-for publishing open government data on the Web.
-<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-data">Linked Data</a> utilizes
-the Resource Description Framework [[RDF-CONCEPTS]]. </del>
<p>
-<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-data">Linked Data</a> refers to a set of
-best practices for publishing and interlinking structured data for access by both
-humans and machines via the use of <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#rdf">RDF</a>
-(Resource Description Framework [[RDF-CONCEPTS]]).
-RDF can be written in a variety of syntaxes (e.g.
+<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-data">Linked Data</a> refers to a set of best practices for publishing and interlinking structured data for access by both humans and machines via the use of <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#rdf">RDF</a>
+(Resource Description Framework [[RDF-CONCEPTS]]). RDF can be written in a variety of syntaxes (e.g.
<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#rdf-xml">RDF/XML</a>,
<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#n3">N3</a>,
<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#turtle">Turtle</a> and N-Triples) and