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@@ -69,13 +69,15 @@
<h2>Background</h2>
<p>
-In recent years, governments worldwide have mandated publication of open government content to the public Web for the purpose of facilitating open societies and to support governmental accountability and transparency initiatives. However, publication of unstructured data in HTML alone is insufficient. In order to realize the goals of open government initiatives, the re-use of government data requires that members of the public can find, visualize and programmatically absorb the data. Publishing government content as Linked Data is the means to achieve these worthy objectives.
+In recent years, governments worldwide have mandated publication of open government content to the public Web for the purpose of facilitating open societies and to support governmental accountability and transparency initiatives. However, publication of unstructured data in HTML alone is insufficient. In order to realize the goals of open government initiatives, the re-use of government data requires that members of the public can find, visualize and programmatically absorb the data. Publishing government content as Linked Data is the means to achieve these worthy objectives.
</p>
-
+<!-- <p>
+In a nutshell, Linked Data is fundamentally about building a Web of Data, upon two simple concepts: (1) use RDF data model to publish structured data on the Web and (2) to set explicit RDF links between entities within different data sources.
+</p> -->
</section>
<p class="todo"> To include: a proper introduction of what a link is the given context.
-</p>
+</p>
<p class="todo"> To include: a section on how to create data links (within an organization's dataset and, more importantly, to data from other sources).
</p>
@@ -230,12 +232,12 @@
<!-- <p class="todo">Please Review: Michael Hausenblas (DERI), Ghislain Atemezing (INSTITUT TELECOM), Boris Villazon-Terrazas (iSOCO), Daniel Vila-Suero (UPM)</p>
<p> -->
-Reuse standard, vetted vocabularies to encourage others to use your data. Guidance on finding standard, vetted vocabularies is described in the Vocabulary Discovery Checklist below.
+<!-- Reuse standard, vetted vocabularies to encourage others to use your data. Guidance on finding standard, vetted vocabularies is described in the Vocabulary Discovery Checklist below. -->
</section>
<!-- Discovery checklist -->
-<h3>Vocabuarly Discovery Checklist</h3>
+<h3>Vocabulary Discovery Checklist</h3>
<p>This checklist provides some considerations when trying to find out existing vocabularies that could best fit the needs of a government authority.
</p>
@@ -403,13 +405,13 @@
<p class="highlight">☆☆ <b>Provide human-readable documentation and basic metadata such as creator, publisher, date of creation, last modification, version number.</b>
</p>
-<p class="highlight">☆☆☆ <b>Provide labels and descriptions, if possible in several languages, to make your vocabulary usable in multiple linguistic scopes</b>
+<p class="highlight">☆☆☆ <b>Provide labels and descriptions, if possible in several languages, to make your vocabulary usable in multiple linguistic scopes.</b>
</p>
-<p class="highlight">☆☆☆☆ <b>Make your vocabulary available via its namespace URI, both as a formal file and human-readable documentation, using content negotiation</b>
+<p class="highlight">☆☆☆☆ <b>Make your vocabulary available via its namespace URI, both as a formal file and human-readable documentation, using content negotiation.</b>
</p>
-<p class="highlight">☆☆☆☆☆ <b>Link to other vocabularies by re-using elements rather than re-inventing</b>
+<p class="highlight">☆☆☆☆☆ <b>Link to other vocabularies by re-using elements rather than re-inventing.</b>
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