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<p class='stmt'><a href="#PREPARE">STEP #1 PREPARE STAKEHOLDERS:</a><br /> Prepare stakeholders by explaining the process of creating and maintaining <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#linked-open-data">Linked Open Data</a>.
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-<p class='stmt'><a href="#SELECT">STEP #2 SELECT A DATASET:</a><br /> Select a dataset that provides benefit to others for re-use.
+<p class='stmt'><a href="#SELECT">STEP #2 SELECT A DATASET:</a><br /> Select a dataset that provides benefit to others for reuse.
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<p class='stmt'><a href="#MODEL">STEP #3 MODEL THE DATA:</a> <br /><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#modeling-process">Modeling Linked Data</a> involves representing data objects and how they are related in an application-independent way.
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<p class='stmt'><a href="#LICENSE">STEP #4 SPECIFY AN APPROPRIATE LICENSE:</a> <br />Specify an appropriate open data license. Data reuse is more likely to occur when there is a clear statement about the origin, ownership and terms related to the use of the published data.</p>
-<p class='stmt'><a href="#HTTP-URIS">STEP #5 GOOD URIs FOR LINKED DATA:</a><br /> The core of Linked Data is a well-considered URI naming strategy and implementation plan, based on <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#http-uris">HTTP URIs</a>. Consideration for naming objects, multilingual support, and how the data will change over time and a persistence strategy is the foundation of publishing useful Linked Data that encourages reuse.
+<p class='stmt'><a href="#HTTP-URIS">STEP #5 GOOD URIs FOR LINKED DATA:</a><br /> The core of Linked Data is a well-considered URI naming strategy and implementation plan, based on <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#http-uris">HTTP URIs</a>. Consideration for naming objects, multilingual support, data change over time and persistence strategy are the building blocks for useful Linked Data.
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-<p class='stmt'><a href="#VOCABULARIES">STEP #6 USE STANDARD VOCABULARIES:</a> <br />Describe objects with previously defined
-standard <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#vocabulary">vocabularies</a> whenever possible. Extend standard vocabularies where necessary. Create vocabularies when required following best practices wherever possible.
+<p class='stmt'><a href="#VOCABULARIES">STEP #6 USE STANDARD VOCABULARIES:</a> <br />Describe objects with previously defined <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/ld-glossary/#vocabulary">vocabularies</a> whenever possible. Extend standard vocabularies where necessary, and create vocabularies (only when required) that follow best practices whenever possible.
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<p class='stmt'><a href="#CONVERT">STEP #7 CONVERT DATA:</a><br /> Convert data to a Linked Data representation. This is typically done by script or other automated processes.
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<p class='stmt'><a href="#MACHINE">STEP #8 PROVIDE MACHINE ACCESS TO DATA:</a><br /> Provide various ways for search engines and other automated processes to access data using standard Web mechanisms.
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-<p class='stmt'><a href="#ANNOUNCE">STEP #9 ANNOUNCE NEW DATA SETS:</a><br /> Remember to announce new data sets on an authoritative domain. Importantly, remember that as a Linked Open Data publisher, an implicit social contract is formed. Plan in advance to perform routine maintenance and provide timely responses to feedback from data consumers.
+<p class='stmt'><a href="#ANNOUNCE">STEP #9 ANNOUNCE NEW DATA SETS:</a><br /> Remember to announce new data sets on an authoritative domain. Importantly, remember that as a Linked Open Data publisher, an implicit social contract is in effect.
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<p class='stmt'><a href="#SOCIAL-CONTRACT">STEP #10 RECOGNIZE THE SOCIAL CONTRACT:</a><br /> Recognize your responsibility in maintaining data once it is published. Ensure that the dataset(s) remain available where your organization says it will be and is maintained over time.
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<h2>Prepare Stakeholders</h2>
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-Preparation is crucial for success of an information management project. Providing stakeholders with the benefits of data sharing, as well as, the process of publishing and maintaining data sets for re-use useful. The concepts of data modeling will be familiar to information management professionals. The specifics and goals of Linked Open Data may be new to stakeholders who are used to traditional data management however, they are well-documented in W3C Recommendations, Notes and many peer reviewed publications [[WOOD2013]], [[howto-lodp]], [[BHYLAND2011]], [[BVILLAZON]]. Linked Data has entered the mainstream. It is used by governments large and small, the world's major search engines, international firms and agile startups.
+Preparation is crucial for success of an information management project. Sharing with government stakeholders the benefits of data sharing in terms of their agency mission or charter helps ensure success. The concepts of data modeling will be familiar to information management professionals. While the specifics of Linked Open Data may be new to people who are used to traditional information manaagement approaches, they are well-documented in W3C Recommendations, Notes and many peer reviewed publications [[WOOD2013]], [[howto-lodp]], [[BHYLAND2011]], [[BVILLAZON]]. Linked Data has entered the mainstream and is used by governments around the world, major search engines, international corporations and agile startups.
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