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 <section id="abstract">
 
-<p> This document is a glossary of terms defined and used in the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/gld/raw-file/default/bp/index.html">Linked Data Best Practices Recommendation</a> published by the W3C Government Linked Data Working Group. It is intended for use by Linked Data publishers and consumers in order to refer to a common glossary of terms. 
+<p> This document is a glossary of terms defined and used in the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/gld/raw-file/default/bp/index.html">Best Practices for Publishing Linked Data</a> document published by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2011/gld/charter">W3C Government Linked Data Working Group</a>. It is intended for use by Linked Data publishers and consumers in order to refer to a common glossary of terms. 
 </p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="sotd">
-  <p>This document is work in progress.  It will be reviewed in 2012 and published along with the <a href="https://dvcs.w3.org/hg/gld/raw-file/default/bp/index.html"> Best Practices for Publishing Linked Data</a> document.
-  </p>
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 <section class="introductory">
 <h2>Scope</h2>
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-<p>
-This document is aimed at assisting government IT managers, procurement officers, Web developers, vendors, and researchers who are interested in publishing open government data using W3C standards.  The benefits of using international standards for data exchange is to significantly increase interoperability of data.
-</p>
 <p>
-Readers of this document are expected to be familiar with delivery of content via the Web, and to have a general familiarity with the technologies involved, but are not required to have a background in semantic technologies or previous experience with Linked Data. Data stewards, curators, database administrators and other personnel involved in Open Government initiatives are encouraged to read this Linked Open Data Best Practices document. 
+This glossary is aimed at anyone interested in publishing Linked Data using W3C standards.  The benefits of using international standards for data exchange is to significantly increase interoperability and re-use of data.
+</p>
 </section>
 
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-   // <section id="abox">
-   // <h4> Abox </h4>
-   //One of two types of statements in an <a href="#ontology">ontology</a> (the other being <a href="#tbox">Tbox</a>).  Abox statements represent facts (or "assertions", hence the "A"), e.g. John is a Person (where Person is a defined class).
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 <section id="api">
 <h4>Application Programmer Interface(API)</h4>
 <p>An abstraction implemented in software that defines how others should make use of a software package such as a library or other reusable program.