--- a/people/index.html	Sat Jan 28 17:36:09 2012 +0000
+++ b/people/index.html	Sat Jan 28 17:44:29 2012 +0000
@@ -33,6 +33,8 @@
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 </section>
 
+<p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/17">ISSUE-17</a></p>
+
 <section>
 <h2 id="intro">Introduction</h2>
 <p>In many cases, source data (@@TODO: link to BP document and the definition of source data therein) contains data about people. We will use the following plain text example throughout the document to demonstrate the usage of terms:</p>
@@ -51,9 +53,8 @@
 
 <section>
 <h2 id="characteristics">People's characteristics</h2>
-<p>@@TODO: describe a person's fundamental characteristics (ISA <a href="http://joinup.ec.europa.eu/asset/core_person/description">Core Person Vocabulary</a>) and contact information (<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/vcard-rdf/" title="Representing vCard Objects in RDF">vCard</a>).</p>
-<p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/17">ISSUE-17</a></p>
-<p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/22">ISSUE-22</a></p>
+<p>The core concept is that of a person, which is defined as an entity of type <code>foaf:Person</code>.</p>
+<p>@@TODO: describe a person's fundamental characteristics (@@TODO: evaluate ISA <a href="http://joinup.ec.europa.eu/asset/core_person/description">Core Person Vocabulary</a>).</p>
 </section>
 
 <section>
@@ -63,7 +64,9 @@
 
 <section>
 <h3 id="relations-to-contact-info">Relating people to a contact information</h3>
-<p>@@TODO: define a term that relates a person to a vCard object, based on <a href="http://open.vocab.org/docs/businessCard" title="ov:businessCard, a property in the OpenVocab RDF schema">ov:businessCard</a>.</p>
+<p>In order to relate a person to a contact information, 1. the contact information MUST be represented using <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/vcard-rdf/" title="Representing vCard Objects in RDF">vCard</a>, and 2. the link between a person and a contact information is <code>gldp:card</code>.</p>
+<p>@@TODO: define a term that relates a person to a vCard object, based on the semantics of <a href="http://open.vocab.org/docs/businessCard" title="ov:businessCard, a property in the OpenVocab RDF schema">ov:businessCard</a>.</p>
+<p class="editorsnote"><a href="https://www.w3.org/2011/gld/track/issues/22">ISSUE-22</a></p>
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