--- a/network-api/Overview.html Fri Nov 02 13:32:16 2012 +0100
+++ b/network-api/Overview.html Mon Nov 05 16:39:27 2012 +0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
<html>
<head>
<title>The Network Information API</title>
- <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8' />
+ <meta http-equiv='Content-Type' content='text/html;charset=utf-8'>
<script src='http://www.w3.org/Tools/respec/respec-w3c-common' class='remove'></script>
<script class='remove'>
var respecConfig = {
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
// if this is a LCWD, uncomment and set the end of its review period
// lcEnd: "2009-08-05",
- extraCSS: ["../ReSpec.js/css/respec.css"],
+ extraCSS: ["../ReSpec.js/css/respec.css"],
noIDLIn: true,
editors: [
@@ -24,6 +24,7 @@
company: "Mozilla",
companyURL: "http://mozilla.org/" },
],
+
wg: "Device APIs and Policy Working Group",
wgURI: "http://www.w3.org/2009/dap/",
wgPublicList: "public-device-apis",
@@ -61,17 +62,17 @@
<!DOCTYPE>
<html>
<head>
- <title>Poney viewer</title>
+ <title>Pony viewer</title>
</head>
<body>
- <img id='poney' alt="An image showing a poney" title="My precious!">
+ <img id='pony' alt="An image showing a pony" title="My precious!">
<script>
- var i = document.getElementById('poney');
+ var i = document.getElementById('pony');
if (navigator.connection.bandwidth > 2) {
- i.src = "http://example.com/poney_hd.png";
+ i.src = "http://example.com/pony_hd.png";
} else {
- i.src = "http://example.com/poney_ld.png";
+ i.src = "http://example.com/pony_ld.png";
}
</script>
</body>
@@ -131,7 +132,7 @@
of the hosting device. The information disclosed has minimal
impact on privacy or fingerprinting, and therefore is exposed without
permission grants. For example, authors cannot directly know what kind of connection
- is actually in use by the hosting device.
+ is currently in use by the hosting device.
</p>
</section>
@@ -186,7 +187,7 @@
If the implementation is not able to know the status of the connection or if the user is offline, the value MUST be set to false.
</p>
<div class="note">
- If unnable to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
+ If unable to know if a connection is metered, a <a>user agent</a> could ask the user about the status of his current connection.
For example, a preference could let the user define if the mobile connection used on the device is metered.
</div>
</dd>
@@ -294,10 +295,10 @@
</section>
<section class='appendix'>
- <h2>Acknowledgements</h2>
+ <h2>Acknowledgments</h2>
<p>
Special thanks to Robin Berjon for his help.
</p>
</section>
</body>
-</html>
+</html>
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