simplify intro, leaving more details to the terminology section
authorStephane Corlosquet <scorlosquet@gmail.com>
Mon, 04 Feb 2013 22:55:01 -0500
changeset 333 8de015ffae90
parent 332 ee6209b30bac
child 334 33da22445151
simplify intro, leaving more details to the terminology section
spec/identity-respec.html
--- a/spec/identity-respec.html	Mon Feb 04 22:41:48 2013 -0500
+++ b/spec/identity-respec.html	Mon Feb 04 22:55:01 2013 -0500
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@
 <h1>Introduction</h1>
 
 <p>
-A WebID is an HTTP URI which uniquely denotes an Agent (Person, Organization, Group, Device, etc.). A description of the WebID can be found by dereferencing the WebID in the associated <tref>Profile Page</tref>, a type of web page that any Social Network user is familiar with.</p>
+A WebID is an HTTP URI which uniquely denotes an Agent (Person, Organization, Group, Device, etc.). A description of the WebID can be found in the <tref>Profile Page</tref>, a type of web page that any Social Network user is familiar with.</p>
 <p>
 A WebID <tref>Profile Page</tref> is a Web resource that MUST be available as Turtle [[!TURTLE-TR]], but MAY be available in other RDF serialization formats (e.g. [[!RDFA-CORE]]) if requested through content negotiation. 
 </p>