correct some typos + grammar fixes
authorscor <>
Mon, 26 Jul 2010 11:44:09 -0400
changeset 42 7b33ec58b178
parent 41 6ec1b5126712
child 43 9f83436589ae
correct some typos + grammar fixes
--- a/index-respec.html	Mon Jul 26 10:20:35 2010 -0400
+++ b/index-respec.html	Mon Jul 26 11:44:09 2010 -0400
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@
 protecting the personal information distributed on the web or limiting
 access to resources. Few people are willing to make all their personal
 information public, many would like large pieces to be protected, making
-it available only to a select group of agents. Giving access to
+it available only to a selected group of agents. Giving access to
 information is very similar to giving access to services. There are many
 occasions when people would like services to only be accessible to
 members of a group, such as allowing only friends, family members,
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
 trust design issue related to OpenID.</p>
 <p>WebID does not require HTTP redirects. Redirects are problematic on many
-cell phones, because telecoms heavily rely on proxys, which selectively block
+cell phones because telecommunication companies rely heavily on proxy servers which may selectively block
 <p>A WebID provider is 100% compatible with an OpenID provider and thus can 
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
 <tref>Identification Agent</tref>.</dd>
 <dt><tdef>public key</tdef></dt>
-<dd>A widely distributed crytographic key that can be used to verify 
+<dd>A widely distributed cryptographic key that can be used to verify 
 digital signatures and encrypt data between a sender and a receiver. A public
 key is always included in an <tref>Identification Certificate</tref></dd>
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@
 <li>The <tref>Verification Agent</tref> MUST request the 
 <tref>Identification Certificate</tref> of the <tref>Identification Agent</tref>
-as a part of the TLS client-cerificate retrieval protocol.</li>
+as a part of the TLS client-certificate retrieval protocol.</li>
 <li>The <tref>Verification Agent</tref> MUST extract the <tref>public key</tref> and the
 <tref>WebID URL</tref> contained in the <code>Subject Alternative Name</code>