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 <section id="abstract"><h2>Abstract</h2>
-<p>A global distributed Social Web requires distributed identity. Following up on an earlier paper by An identity system that fits the philosophy of the web must have the following properties: 
+<p>A global distributed Social Web, enabling the building of <a href="http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/CloudStorage.html">Socially Aware Cloud Storage</a>, requires distributed identity system. To fit web architecture it must have the following properties: 
 </p>
 <ul>
  <li>agents should be able to control their identity,
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  <li>the whole lifecycle of an identity, from setting up a profile, to editing it, to possibly deleting it should require nothing more than HTTP, extended by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2012/ldp/wiki/Main_Page">Linked Data Platform</a>.
 </ul>
 <p>
-The following specs have been put together by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/webid/">WebID Incubator Group</a> with those properties in mind, and following on Tim Berners Lee's <a href="http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/CloudStorage.html">Socially Aware Cloud Storage</a> note. </p>
+The following specs have been put together by the <a href="http://www.w3.org/2005/Incubator/webid/">WebID Incubator Group</a> with those properties in mind.  </p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="outline"><h2>Specifications</h2>