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<dt>Authors:</dt><dd><span><span>Toby Inkster</span></span>
</dd>
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daily basis has become more difficult and complicated than necessary. This
specification outlines a simple universal identification mechanism that is
distributed, openly extensible, improves privacy, security and control over how
-one can identify themselves on the Web.</p>
+one can identify themselves and control access to their information on the Web.
+</p>
<div typeof="bibo:Chapter" about="#how-to-read-this-document" class="section">
<h3 id="how-to-read-this-document">How to Read this Document</h3>
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daily basis has become more difficult and complicated than necessary. This
specification outlines a simple universal identification mechanism that is
distributed, openly extensible, improves privacy, security and control over how
-one can identify themselves on the Web.</p>
+one can identify themselves and control access to their information on the Web.
+</p>
<section>
<h2>How to Read this Document</h2>
--- a/index.html Sun Jul 11 17:13:57 2010 -0400
+++ b/index.html Sun Jul 11 17:47:11 2010 -0400
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+ <link href="http://dev.w3.org/2009/dap/ReSpec.js/css/respec.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8" /><link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/w3c-unofficial" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" charset="utf-8" /></head><body style="display: inherit; "><div class="head"><p></p><h1 rel="dcterms:title" class="title" id="title">WebID 1.0</h1><h2 rel="bibo:subtitle" id="subtitle">Web Identification and Discovery</h2><h2 property="dcterms:issued" datatype="xsd:dateTime" content="2010-07-11T21:46:11+0000" id="unofficial-draft-11-july-2010">Unofficial Draft 11 July 2010</h2><dl><dt>Editor:</dt><dd rel="bibo:editor"><span typeof="foaf:Person"><span property="foaf:name">Manu Sporny</span>, <a rel="foaf:workplaceHomepage" href="http://blog.digitalbazaar.com/">Digital Bazaar, Inc.</a> <a rel="foaf:mbox" href="mailto:msporny@digitalbazaar.com">msporny@digitalbazaar.com</a> </span>
</dd>
<dt>Authors:</dt><dd><span><span>Toby Inkster</span></span>
</dd>
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daily basis has become more difficult and complicated than necessary. This
specification outlines a simple universal identification mechanism that is
distributed, openly extensible, improves privacy, security and control over how
-one can identify themselves on the Web.</p>
+one can identify themselves and control access to their information on the Web.
+</p>
<div typeof="bibo:Chapter" about="#how-to-read-this-document" class="section">
<h3 id="how-to-read-this-document">How to Read this Document</h3>