awkward phrasing and unifinished sentence correction default tip
authorHenry Story <henry.story@bblfish.net>
Wed, 28 May 2014 17:27:10 +0200
changeset 424 b0a2a66a6c54
parent 423 3a000d6cf853
awkward phrasing and unifinished sentence correction
spec/index.html
--- a/spec/index.html	Wed May 28 17:25:53 2014 +0200
+++ b/spec/index.html	Wed May 28 17:27:10 2014 +0200
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
 
 <section id="abstract"><h2>Abstract</h2>
-<p>A global distributed Social Web, enabling the building of <a href="http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/CloudStorage.html">Socially Aware Cloud Storage</a>, requires distributed identity system. To fit web architecture it must have the following properties: 
+<p>A global distributed Social Web, enabling the building of <a href="http://www.w3.org/DesignIssues/CloudStorage.html">Socially Aware Cloud Storage</a>, requires a distributed identity system. To fit web architecture it must have the following properties: 
 </p>
 <ul>
  <li>agents should be able to control their identity,